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Part 2: Heavily loses

When the forces started to run out from the holes and ran forward over the field that was just consisting of rocks and plain land, no real cover. The sound of the orks Kannon, shoota and big shootas. The explosions made several soldiers died right away, but they didn't stop. On the tip of the force Comissar Kramel Von Ischta where running and firing his plasmapistol, the soldiers started to fire with grenade launchers and different kinds of assault weapons and out from the smoke came the orks.

"For the Emperor!"Kramel yelled cutting down a ork that tryes to attack him, his goal was simple fight to the death until reached victory. Kramel stops behind a rock with another group of guardsmen."Comissar Kramel, we got to turn back!"Kramel lookt down on the guardsmen and so did the other."If you retreat, I'll shoot you"Instead of retreating the man ran from the rock out on the field shooting what he could before he got killed."Follow your brothers and Sisters!"They made a charge and reached the orks bunker holes the operation had nearly workt.

The soldiers started to cheer seeing the orks run away, but Comissar Kramel hold his hand in the air. Everything became quiet, something was strange."Orks never leave their weapons behind like that."He points at the kannon and a ork bunker that still had big shootas attacht. "They are still here..."But the words came to late now from different hidding places ork kommandos jumps out and from where the orks ran to the sound of vehicles was heard. "Fight! Fight to slay the orks!"Now they had reached the ork lines and had no support.

Thank you, I'll tomorrow post part 3: Hack, hack, death.

Part 3:Hack, Hack, death.

The soldiers had spread out in the different bunker holes fighting the ork kommandos, the sound of the vehicles from the distance could be heard coming closer. "Comisar Kramel! We can't hold out here much longer, we need to pull back!"Comisar Kramel rips of a orks head then turning to the soldier."Everyone that retreats will be shoot, until further words from command!"Some of the youngest soldiers started to turn around to run back to their side."On your command, Comissar!"Kramel makes a gesture to the soldiers to keep firing at the orks. The sound of bolters and scream could be heard from those that tryed to retreat. When they wheir closer to their side."No one retreats!"

They had about half their force left and then they saw it, warbikes. Coming from the distance."Grenade Launchers, FIRE!"Some of the warbikes got hit and made them explode but some made throuth killing more guardsmen. It was now that Comissar Kramel desided to meet this force."When they get close enough we charge!"The warbikes started to come close and close, the orks didn't care but became abit suprised when seeing them charge out from the holes forward against the warbikes."We fight for the Emperor until death!"Many soldiers died instantly by impacts of the warbikes but Kramel cuts down every bike in his path. His might claw or his plasmapistol cuts them down, leaving just scatherd pieces of the bikes.

When they lookt around they saw no more orks and they started to run into the ork bunker shooting down those who are left and gettign to the control room."Vox operator, contact base that we are finish here."The Vox operator started to try message the bunker but something was wrong."Comissar the transmission is blockt by some sensors."Foul orks, we need to destroy it before we can return."The guardsmen placed themselfs in the bunker if the ork woulds return."Comissar I found a map and it should be a sensor across next hill."Kramel nods and turns around."Get ready soldiers, we will take that hill!"The sound of cheering could be heard, the hope of getting home had return to the younger soldiers, the more experienced know that Comissar Kramel Von Ischta would never leave his soldiers.

Part 5: The return of heros and death of another.

The fight was going on the fully and what stood bettwem them and the big mek constructed sensor was a warboss and a group of nobz. The soldiers and the nobz was with matching strength, none of them wanted to give up. The battle bettwen Throsm and Kramel this would deside the battle. Kramel aimed his claw at the warboss hitting his chest and ripping away part of the armour before getting hit by the warboss claw. He flyed back but landed on his feet charging forward, now he saw the point. He first parryed the claw and puts his owne claw throuth the warboss chests, pulling it out quickly and cuts off the head. Throsm Katka was slayin and now the Commissar had one thing to do, he runs up and cuts the sensors wires and poles. He tryes to run back to help his soldiers but then the worst that could happend him happend. The pole was on its way to hit him but he dodge it just in time. But it was the shoota of a nob that made him fall to the ground.

The battle was over but the loses was heavy, they started to report to the base."Command, mission accomplish."They waited some seconds before getting a replie."i want to speak with Commissar Kramel Von Ischta, put him on the vox now."The soldiers lookt on etchother and then on the Commissars body that the soldiers had pickt up on what would be a better way to carrie him."Sorry Command, Kramel is dead but before he died he killed Throsm Kratka..."The command was shockt over that he was dead, as the soldiers was."Bring back his remains and bring back as many wounded and other soldiers as you can. Time to come home."The soldiers didn't start to cheer, the know that their Commissar that had fought beside them was dead. When they return a great ceremony was hold in the honour of Kramel Von Ischta, at his tomb it is said. KRAMEL VON ISCHTA, THE PEOPLE OF ASTHROPIANS HELIONS GREATEST COMMISSAR. All Commissars trained had to know about him before getting approved to be a Commissar. Years after his death a new Head Commissar arisen, his name was Strainkov Von Ischta son of Kramel Von Ischta.

"Even if he shot everyone that tryed to retreat,, he was the greatest Commissar that we have followed. He was the hope in the darkness, in the foul parts of ork territory."
-A Sergeant from the day Kramel died.