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I zanied up the perspective, moved the horizon and added definition to the duder there while taking the focus off of him a bit.

Tell me your innermost secrets. About this picture.

i love the new perspective, it has a stronger effect. although, there seems to be too high a concentration of wires in the distance. I tend to like the effect of having more negative space between them.
and i agree on the figure. it's still too cartoonish, frankly it looks a bit adolescent.

http://manga.clone-army.org/

this guy does some interesting work drawing anime girls, and some of his picture have a sort of similar feel. I personally like how he treats the forms of the girls, so that they're merely suggested in some pictures.

(i'd pick out examples, but i can't actually access the site through this school's filter)

No, I see what you are all saying there. I was hoping for an interesting contrast there but is toesn't seem to be coming across. I'll give the figure another shot and go for a more real-lifey aspect.