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 Posted: Sat May 13, 2006 12:57 am
Welcome
I have admired the FD shop for a while now. In fact, I have admired it since it started. Unfortunately I'm a silent stalker, only appearing occasionally for flatsales. To my delight, I succeeded in getting to the second round of the last flatsale, scoring a 200k voucher. XD Unfortunately I have nothing to add with that during auctions, so it's nigh useless. So now I have another chance, and I'm going to take the bull by the horns! I won't give up my quest for an FD until I fall unconcious at the keyboard! Huzzah!
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Posted: Sat May 13, 2006 12:59 am
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Posted: Sat May 13, 2006 1:00 am
Excerpt:
Quote: A red brown blur shot out of the underbrush to the right, darting beneath the hooves of the searcher's mount. The horse gave a shrill whinny of surprise and reared, nearly toppling its rider, who cursed in angry confusion. Gaining control with a sharp tug of the reigns, the soldier kicked his horsed roughly into a trot. His concentration thrown, he continued on deeper into the forest. Hidden in the undergrowth, a few centimetres away from where the horse had been standing, the escapee let out a small sigh of relief. Covered in layers of ivy and thorns, the young girl listened to the bark of a dog fox. Shifting a little uncomfortably, she settled herself down in wait for the security of nightfall.
Bryn is in constant fear, or perhaps just concern, over something she can't quite recall. It causes her to be fairly distant at times, but otherwise she's a fairly normal little girl. Security is constantly fears for his Forgotten, something that can create a lot of tension between the two, or between others. On more than one occasion Security will bite first and ask questions later, something Bryn hates since she tends to avoid conflict and violence.
What does it reveal about..
.. their past?:
The excerpt is hinting on something important. Bryn is described as a runaway, and is obviously being pursued, which makes some sense on why Bryn seems to have an air of worry and why Security is so protective over her. The girl in the excerpt is hiding, escaping, hoping and waiting. Hopefully one day that girl will escape to freedom, and Bryn will be able to live without any concerns.
.. how they are now that they are "reborn" as a Forgotten?
For her part Bryn keeps the excerpt close to her heart, looking it over every few days, hoping to find some meaning in it. Security figures it's just a bunch of words, and dedicates his time to making Bryn happy. That's all that matters after all. That they are both happy, free and safe.
.. their future?:
It tells nothing of the future, and whether it is the past or not waits to be seen.
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Posted: Sat May 13, 2006 1:06 am
About Ruriska and the Guardian she could possibly use.
-Coming
Other info on Bryn. biggrin
Star Sign: Gemini
Favourite Food: Asparagus
Favourite Colour: Dark green =P
-More coming
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 5:11 pm
Credit
Queitsnooze and all the FD personal. XD
Feedback is loved. <3
It's mah B-Day on the 18th. XD
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 6:33 pm
Oooh, this is really interesting. surprised heart
I really like all of the detail and concept of Bryn! 4laugh The excerpt is really cool, too. surprised It makes me curious~ whee
I'd love to see you win! 4laugh heart I really have nothing to criticise... >.<;;
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 6:54 pm
Thankyou! heart
I'm really glad you liked it. ^___^
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Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 1:59 pm
^.^ Darcy likes it. I can't criticize anything either and it's out of the ordinary that you see around here. (though I have seen a few plant type ones)
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Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 4:17 pm
Thankies Darcy. ^___^ heart
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