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it sucks doesnt it?!!!!!!!! DX

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PostPosted: Thu May 11, 2006 11:46 pm


I know it sucks but i was just wrighting it in the moment. It was what i felt like saying to someone at the time crying

LITTLE GIRL

SO LONG AGO DID I EJOY LIFE
SO LONG AGO DID I LOVE ALL THINGS
SO LONG AGO MY EYES COULD NOT SEE, DID NOT SEE,
THE TRUTH AND SADNESS THAT CAME WITH A LIFE LIE THIS.

LIFES NOT GREAT.
LOVES NOT FAIR.
THE TRUTHS NOT NICE.
AND LIES ARE SAFER.

TO HAVE TO BEAR THE TRUTH AT SUCH A YOUNG AGE...
THE TRUTHS OF LIFE...
OF PAIN...
OF MISSERY...
OF HEART BREAK...
IS NOT AN EASY TASK...

SO THE DARKNESS STARTS TO TURN INTO A SAFE HAVEN FOR ME.
HELL SEEMS LIKE HEAVEN.
DEATH IS MY PARADISE.
AND EARTH IS MY PRISON...

AT SUCH A YOUNG AGE...TO HAVE TO BEAR THE TRUTH AT SUCH A YOUNG AGE...DO NOT CRY FOR ME, DO NOT LOOK FOR ME, DO NOT PRAY FOR ME...FOR I AM A LOST CAUSE...MY WILL TO LIVE HAS LEFT WITH MY INNOSENCE AND MY SANITY...

YOU MAY THINK THAT IVE CHANGED FOR THE WORST...BUT THE LITTLE GIRL THAT YOU ONCE KNEW IS THE REAL ME...IS STILL INSIDE OF ME...BUT I WISH FOR HER TO FINALLY REST FOR THAT LITTLE GIRL WASNT HAPPY...WAS MUCH WORSE THAN WHAT YOU SEE TODAY.
PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 6:34 am


i also know what it is like to lose my sanity at the peak of my lifetime check it out will you? DANCING IN THE ASHES

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PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 6:40 am


The concept of the poem is good. But the extreme lack of structure makes it a bit of a tedious read. Maybe you were going for that as part of the piece itself. ::shrug::
PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 7:40 am


grotesquecreeple
i also know what it is like to lose my sanity at the peak of my lifetime check it out will you? DANCING IN THE ASHES
yeah i read it and i love it XD

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