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War plagues the land. Races going against races with little hope for the future. The key to survival lies within the legend of the Twin Keys 

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 02, 2018 5:43 pm


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Name:Annalise Evergarden
Age: look 20 but actually over 150
Height/Weight:5'10"* 155 lbs*
Species: Demon: Succubus (found it out lost in the url ^^')


✦ Alօɾʂ, νօմʂ εբբεƈէմεz-νօմʂ? ✦
Sσ, γσų þεŗ∱σŗɱ?


Role: N/A
Best Trait: Charmisatic
Worst Trait: Gullible
Good Habit:Cleans up after herself
Bad Habit: Doesn't keep with her feedings

Abilities: Succubus Magic
Enchanted Alluring: able to be attractive to beings of the opposite and same gender as her. Activates when her eyes take on heart-shaped pupils, turning red and she has eye contact with the target. Under normal circumstances, the effects last around 3-4 posts and an eyesight of radius 13 feet. During moments of extreme hunger, the effects can last to 6 posts and double in the radius. Attempts to go past that will result in negative effects.
Mallable Anatomy: ability to change parts of her body at a given time. Attempts to do more or too long depletes her stamina. Example, changing hair length and color or even add cat ears and tail)
Flight: make sure her birth given wings to take to the skies. Her ability to fly is depended on her energy level and health. Flight lasts from one location to the nearest one.
Desire Form: Creates an illusion of what the target desires most. Requires keeping eye contact with the target. The illusion will break once eye contact and the attention is broken. The ability last longer once more experiences. 3 posts and increases from there.
Tantric Metabolization: The power to feed off sexuality/sexual energy of an active target. The amount of energy taken is based on the level of hunger which will also coincide with the level of control. Lack of control can result in too much taken and making the target malnourished or dead. The ways to initiate metabolizing is by red coloration of the lips or climaxing Last 1-2 posts. more than 3 post risk negative effects
Natural Weaponry: use of claws, her wings and Prehensile tail.

Strengths:
✦physical appeal
✦speed
✦strenght
✦flexiblity

Weaknesses:
✦tasty food
✦hunger pains
✦holy items
✦cute faces in pleasurable pain



✦ Pąŗℓεẕ ųŋ þεų þℓųş ƈℓąïŗ. ✦
Sρεακ α ʟıттʟε cʟεαяεя.


Bio: Annalise was born from the unholy union of demons. Naturally, she was raised to be and do what demon do, taking from her succubus and incubus lineage. Despite the whole exposure to that lifestyle, she does not act in the same way. This results in her being a rather underdeveloped succubus in her abilities and skill enough her body is quite on succubus levels of appealing. An example of this is that she only gets her sustenance from food and absorption through kisses instead of a normal, more effective way. She is still a virgin. This results in her having hunger pains and her powers not working properly which is concerning for her demonic parents.

In par with her race, she is easily infatuated by pretty faces of men and woman of different races. She has her own likes and desires that she, however, does not act out and keep hidden away in her mind. Currently, she is basically a succubus-in-training as she travels.

Personality: A demon with a human heart. She has a pleasant and charming demeanor that makes her approachable which would normally be her goal in order to feed. She's somewhat bubbly until she sees wandering eyes. That's when she turns defensive and even aggressive. During a normal day, she would even be a bit of an airhead but looks while doing it. When she goes into her full succubus form, she becomes more alluring, like a temptress as her focus is luring and entrapment. Despite those quirks, she is also a crafty and smart girl.
Likes:
✦Cuties
✦ Meat
✦Cool Temperatures
✦Flying

Dislikes:
✦Bitter people
✦Angel/Holy people
✦ Creepy old men
✦Extreme Temperatures


✦ Oн, тυ αƨ υпε νıε? ✦
Oɦ, ɣơυ ɦʌvє ʌ ʅɪƒє?


Hobbies:reading, tonic making,swimming, gardening, BDSM
Sexual Orientation: Pansexual; polyamorous
Relationship Status: Single but hunting~



Voiceclaim: Colleen Clinkenbeard
Demonic Voiceclaim: Camilia

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 03, 2018 6:35 pm


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She is going to need a bit of work before she can be approved.

Starting with the powers... Specifically, what are the limits of their effects? How long does each ability last? For Enchanted Alluring, does she have to make eye contact with a target or does it effect anyone she looks at? Exactly how long do the effects last? Does it have a range that it is effective at?
Shapeshifting rang an alarm bell, since that power is not allowed in this setting, but I have to wonder.. Do you mean malleable anatomy? That's what the description sounds like. Since it seems to have a time limit, exactly how long does it last?
Desire Form... Is that some kind of illusion? What are the limits of it? How long does it last? Does it require any focus to maintain or can this effect be broken somehow?
Tantric Metabolization also needs to have limits mentioned. Does she need to.. Be an active participant in order to gain sustenance? Can she control whether she feeds off of a person when doing intimate things with them? Can she control how much energy she takes (ex. could she kill a person by accident)?

You also don't have her species listed, which you will have to fix as well. But, there are other problems with that.
In her bio, you said that she is the child of a human and a demon, which would make her a hybrid in this setting. Unfortunately, hybrids are greatly restricted here. There are a limited number that are allowed to exist at any time, and there are currently no available spots for a hybrid. She can either be fully human, or she can be fully a demon.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 03, 2018 7:12 pm


Mystiecat537

Thank you for the input. Its definitely appreciated

-sorry I just realized that the species in empty..
-I'll fix the parenthood since it escaped my mind about the hybrid ^^;
-the powers I will fix
-as for shape shifting, I noticed the full no go on it and the shapeshifting in this Case is more like hair color change and lenght, eye color...it's basically a mild transformation to fit the needed look without completely making her into a different person so i would like say malleable anatomy work better
PostPosted: Tue Jul 03, 2018 8:00 pm


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Mystiecat537

Thank you for the input. Its definitely appreciated

-sorry I just realized that the species in empty..
-I'll fix the parenthood since it escaped my mind about the hybrid ^^;
-the powers I will fix
-as for shape shifting, I noticed the full no go on it and the shapeshifting in this Case is more like hair color change and lenght, eye color...it's basically a mild transformation to fit the needed look without completely making her into a different person so i would like say malleable anatomy work better


It's alright, that's an easy thing to miss.
Okie dokies. ^^
Ahh.. That makes sense, for the shapeshifting. And is completely okay to have.
Let me know when you have that stuff dealt with and I'll take another look over her. ^^

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 03, 2018 8:32 pm


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edited =D
PostPosted: Tue Jul 03, 2018 8:53 pm


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Approved.

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 05, 2018 9:44 pm


【❥ ѦnnaliseΣvergarden❥】
And without a doubt I see it in your style
When I think you're gonna leave I'll take a dive

Do I love or do I like
Well in the end its all lust


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