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BlueEmber239

PostPosted: Thu Sep 25, 2014 6:08 pm


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Name: Agito Suzuki
Gender: Female
Real Age: 317
Apparent Age: 15-18
Race: Shinigami
Appearance: (See picture ->)
Affiliation: Gotei 13
Position/Rank: Captain of the 5th Division
Fears: Being hated or losing the ones that Suzuki holds dear,

Personality: Suzuki has a carefree, bright, energetic and physical personality, which perfectly matches her looks despite her actual age, however: when push comes to shove Suzuki can be as serious and deadly as she needs to be when the situation calls for it. Suzuki is also a bit of a prankster when she's board: coming behind you and covering your eyes and asking "who is it" or jump scares and depending on how close you are and what gender fondling; nothing over the top or harmful. Suzuki is also the stubborn type and childish but can be persuaded pretty easily depending on the situation with snacks (usually Pocky); the only times this fails is when it's something she deems more important or of greater value (So a lot). She also values justice and tales of bravery and will act according to those if the situation is there; but she's not dumb enough to rush in without a plan.

History: Suzuki was born in a poor family, unwanted by her father that planned to throw her away to die without a second thought, but Suzuki's mother could not bare that thought and tried to run away with Suzuki only to be cornered by him, left with no other choice cornered like a rat do to the situation Suzuki's mother killed him to protect Suzuki and was caught soon after by guards then killed on the spot. Suzuki was then taken in by one of the guard who had compassion for her of the military and raised her by himself as if she was his own and as he grew quickly in ranks and eventually became a general he decided to her raise her as a male soldier in secret as well.

It wasn't a grand life but far better then living on her own living off of table scraps and garbage. Suzuki always smiled and spent her free time with her childhood friend Touki who she could always rely on and even knew her secret of being a girl; Touki also introduced Suzuki to fairy tales that she fell madly in love with, especially the heroic stories of knights. When Suzuki turned 13 she was praised being called a prodigy in combat and and was to be sent out to war disguised as man as planned along side Touki. "Suzuki always wore a smile that seemly protected her from the harshness of life, and it saved me" was Touki's words at Suzuki's funeral after the war ended:

It was a long and hard fight, Suzuki however shined in battle and took many enemy soldiers out in the blink of an eye with Touki but near the end of the 4 year the enemy sent waves of enemies as their last resort, flooding Suzuki and Touki bringing them both to their limits but it was too much: Archers arrows rained on them with no mercy and with no time to think Suzuki quickly mad the biggest sacrifice and shielded Touki with her body saving him and allowing him to get reinforcements, winning the war.

Suzuki then passed on soon after not remembering anything of her past life except the stories she madly loved, her skills in combat that her new body remembers fully well and the hazy image of Touki that she can never make out. Her life in the spirit world from then on was one full of mischief till she came across a hollow for the first time:

It was large standing 2 meters tall with a pale white plain mask and as black as a void with no signs of anything remotely familiar to this world, in other words demonic. It roared sending chills down Suzuki's spin as the mask seemly breaks into two turning the divided parts into jagged teeth. The beast then charged at Suzuki ready to devour her, she dodged but was slightly grazed by it's tail cornering her. The hollow was about to charge again but as soon as it let out another roar it was cut off and so was it's mask: a Shinigami had split it perfectly in half; in Suzuki's eyes looked like a brave knight coming to the rescue right in the nick of time. Since that day Suzuki wanted to be a Shinigami too.

She trained by herself hard for years then went to the academy and trained even harder to become the top of her class. After graduating as the top she was assigned A rank and higher missions from the get go and despite her quirks has one of the highest accomplish mission rates, one of the lowest mortality rates when in squads and eventually had her power, balance and hard work recognized by her peers giving her the new position as captain of the 5th division; despite her personality and childish nature.


Zanpakuto Information

Name: Kishin
Zanpakuto Element: Fire
Spirit Appearance: Kishin
Inner world: The inner world is a large, seemingly endless Gothic architecture cathedral with beautiful stained glass windows that tell stories (Mostly knights) with sunshine coming through them. Depending on the mood of either Kishin or Suzuki the stained glass and time of day will change, and can even show memories of the past.

Sealed Appearance: A standard length Katana with a red sheath, a normal black ray skin wrapped hilt and a thin, round, white guard that attaches it's self in the middle of a ruby red like rock embedded into the katana. The blade it's self is normal except for the V shaped point at the end and a thin red line that goes all the way along the blade from the point to the ruby.

Release Command: Eikō to tatakau, Kinshin! "Fight with glory, Kinshin!"
Shikai Appearance: Suzuki's Shikai is a long spear with a sharp cone like end and five sections in the staff that can come apart and are connected to chains. Also her clothes change into what the picture shows and is a part of the shikai even if it doesn't share most of the same abilities as the weapon.

Shikai Power-Ups: Mostly Reiatsu so Suzuki can take full advantage of her Shikai's both offensive and defensive abilities.
Shikai Techniques/Abilities

- Extension: This allows Suzuki to make new section in her staff making it as long as needed, she can also make the sections longer or shorter as she pleases and can even make the chains longer. It should also be noted that she can make the cone tip at the end grow to the length of a katana; looking like a spike.

- Levitate: Suzuki can use her reiatsu to control her Shikai within a 50 meter radius with her being in the center without having to be in physical contact with it, making it float in mid air and is also able to use it's other abilities as well. It should be noted that it's speed falls to half if she does not use hand gestures to guide it's path or movements (Like Byakuya)

- Fire!: Suzuki is able to expend reiatsu to make fire appear around her shikai adding on extra damage to her attacks, doing extra damge if her weapon is wrapped around a enemy and aple to but fire around herself (Her clothing) And it is to be noted she is not effected that the fire does not injure her.


Bankai Status: Achieved
Bankai Name: Kokina (Noble) Kishin

Bankai Appearance: Suzuki's Bankai is a biological type of a horse, candle spears man and one koi fish but is still just as much weapon, having their body be under the effect of most the abilities. however it's not a full bankai till Suzuki rides on the horse and merges with the other entity that she can immediately do: Now (Please ignore the arms) making coordination, movements, and so on that much more effective. Let it be noted that this is her attire once combined and is a part of her bankai.

Bankai Power-Ups: Reiatsu and speed but only when combined with her Bankai
Bankai Techniques/Abilities

- Extension and creation: In addition to having the same abilities to "extension" that was previously stated it can now also effect all of her bankai (the horse, candle and koi fish) and can also make spear heads and new spears and so on as long as it's connected to a solid part of her bankai. It should also be noted that she can also now make sections/parts of her bankai come off without having to be connected by chains.

- Levitation 1.2: In addition to having the same abilities to "levitation" that was previously stated it costs less reiatsu, the length of the radius range increases to 250 meters and the speed and reaction time increases by double; triple if combined with her bankai and also if combined with her bankai loses the gesture fault that was previously mentioned

- Flames of emotion: In addition to having the same abilities to "fire!" that was previously stated Suzuki can now make the fire appear almost anywhere and can even turn up the heat. Suzuki's emotions also can effect the flame: Heat, color and volume making it a double edge sword but can be more effective. Should be noted that when combined Suzuki's hair has flames around it and also show her emotional state but takes very little reiatsu.

Combat Information


Specialization: Hoho.
Qualification: Hoho
Known Techniques:

Hakuda -- This is one of Suzuki's best traits and excels in it fairly quickly.

- Tesshō (鉄掌, Iron Palm)
- Kagamibiraki (鏡開, Mirror Opening)
- Combo Kick (コンボキック, Konbokikku)
- Drop Kick (ドロップキック, Doroppu Kikku)
- Ikkotsu (一骨, Single Bone)

Zenjutsu -- This is Suzuki's weakest point by comparison to the rest of her abilities but is by all means not bad.

- Hōzuri (頬摺, Cheek Stroke)
- Shitonegaeshi (褥返し, Cushion Return)

Kido -- Suzuki is average on Kido, not much more can be said.

- #1. Shō (衝, Thrust)
- -#1. Sai (塞, Restrain)
- #4. Hainawa (這縄, Crawling Rope)
- #9. Geki (撃, Strike)

Hoho -- This is where Suzuki shines in not just talent but in execution, this is her biggest strength in combat and the one she rely's on the most in and in conjunction with Hakuda is a deadly combination.

- Soul Jump (Tamashī Tobu魂 飛ぶ)
- Shunpo (瞬歩, Flash Steps)
- Idou Senkou
- Air Skate
- Senka (閃花, Flash Blossom)
- Rei Senkou

-- in shikai mode Suzuki can use levitate to control her weapon and use her hoho and hakuda combo to make a offensive onslaught on the enemy if needed, but it can leave her open.


Other Information


- Suzuki often wears a specific set of clothes that look like human clothes around.
- Suzuki's favorite snacks are pocky, apples and taiyaki and when given the chance to have one she will.
- Suzuki carries Kinshin in her hands at all times unless she needs both hands (Usually to eat) to which she either sets it down right next to her or wears it on the back of her waist.
PostPosted: Thu Sep 25, 2014 6:12 pm


Okay! Posted! Tell me if I need to change anything. I'm worried that 5th division captain seat was taken but asked if it was open and told that it should be. But if it is taken then I can switch with little to no problem I think.

Thank you for reading!

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 25, 2014 10:49 pm


The first two bankai links don't work, and you specialization says she's no pushover in Zanjutsu but then you say its her weakest point which is it? Also what's the range of levitate
PostPosted: Fri Sep 26, 2014 8:39 am


Yaroki
The first two bankai links don't work, and you specialization says she's no pushover in Zanjutsu but then you say its her weakest point which is it? Also what's the range of levitate


Fixed, fixed and if it still doesn't make sense I'll edit it again and fixed: Tell me if the distance is too long and so on, also I added the upgrade for the bankai.

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 26, 2014 9:55 am


BlueEmber239
Yaroki
The first two bankai links don't work, and you specialization says she's no pushover in Zanjutsu but then you say its her weakest point which is it? Also what's the range of levitate


Fixed, fixed and if it still doesn't make sense I'll edit it again and fixed: Tell me if the distance is too long and so on, also I added the upgrade for the bankai.
500 meters is a massive area and 3km is way to big please lower these both maybe 250 and 50.

500 meters is roughly 3 football fields so youvcan see why I said its a little big for shikai


Also could you add a little more on how she became captain, its not a spot someone is just given it mustbe rarned
PostPosted: Fri Sep 26, 2014 12:21 pm


Yaroki
BlueEmber239
Yaroki
The first two bankai links don't work, and you specialization says she's no pushover in Zanjutsu but then you say its her weakest point which is it? Also what's the range of levitate


Fixed, fixed and if it still doesn't make sense I'll edit it again and fixed: Tell me if the distance is too long and so on, also I added the upgrade for the bankai.
500 meters is a massive area and 3km is way to big please lower these both maybe 250 and 50.

500 meters is roughly 3 football fields so youvcan see why I said its a little big for shikai


Also could you add a little more on how she became captain, its not a spot someone is just given it mustbe rarned


Okay fixed. I tried making it a little more like she earned it but if you want more just ask.

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 30, 2014 9:47 pm


Senpai notice me. :<
PostPosted: Tue Sep 30, 2014 10:20 pm


If no one else has any objections I approve of this profile.

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BlueEmber239

PostPosted: Fri Oct 03, 2014 6:00 pm


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If no one else has any objections I approve of this profile.
That's one SenpaI!
PostPosted: Sat Oct 04, 2014 12:21 pm


Specialization: Limit this to 1, please. This determines the ease with which your character will learn future techniques. [See Thread]. I would suggest you go for Hoho since that is your character's qualification and it would make a bit more sense.



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BlueEmber239

PostPosted: Sat Oct 04, 2014 2:45 pm


Feiyimei
Specialization: Limit this to 1, please. This determines the ease with which your character will learn future techniques. [See Thread]. I would suggest you go for Hoho since that is your character's qualification and it would make a bit more sense.



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Okay fixed! Tell me if that's any better or if I need to change anything else.
PostPosted: Sat Oct 04, 2014 2:59 pm


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I'm currently trying to make a guide on how to create a character for this guild so I would appreciate it if you could tell me anything that you found confusing in the process!

Also, what would you like division 5's role to be? You can pick anything so long as it is still strategically sound and isn't the same thing as the ones from other divisions. We're having an activity check though (post there too, btw!) so there may be some divisions that may be wiped clean so you can always wait until then.

Division 5's subforum is yours so feel free to create the threads you think necessary. If you need anything turned into announcements or stickies, write it in the thread title and I will go edit them. For those, however, I would suggest you make the first post of the thread (the original/starting post) a sort of header Only post content that you will need to edit in subsequent posts because if I turned a thread into an announcement and a normal member edits it afterwards, it will return to being a normal thread.

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BlueEmber239

PostPosted: Mon Oct 06, 2014 10:35 am


Feiyimei
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I'm currently trying to make a guide on how to create a character for this guild so I would appreciate it if you could tell me anything that you found confusing in the process!

Also, what would you like division 5's role to be? You can pick anything so long as it is still strategically sound and isn't the same thing as the ones from other divisions. We're having an activity check though (post there too, btw!) so there may be some divisions that may be wiped clean so you can always wait until then.

Division 5's subforum is yours so feel free to create the threads you think necessary. If you need anything turned into announcements or stickies, write it in the thread title and I will go edit them. For those, however, I would suggest you make the first post of the thread (the original/starting post) a sort of header Only post content that you will need to edit in subsequent posts because if I turned a thread into an announcement and a normal member edits it afterwards, it will return to being a normal thread.
Sweet! I didn't find anything confusing to be honest, I just needed to fine tune it so it fits with what we both want.

I read a little bit on division 5 and from what I read it's a over all rounded in combat and it's symbol stands for sacrifice (Among others depending where you go) so I could honestly go in any direction that you see fit. If I could though I would like something related to the human realm, like in charge of transferring of souls, or charge of balance in the human world and so on, sorry if that doesn't make sense.

Also, is there any way to get rid of the topics already in it? I would like to make a fresh start if I could.
PostPosted: Mon Oct 06, 2014 7:14 pm


BlueEmber239
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I'm currently trying to make a guide on how to create a character for this guild so I would appreciate it if you could tell me anything that you found confusing in the process!

Also, what would you like division 5's role to be? You can pick anything so long as it is still strategically sound and isn't the same thing as the ones from other divisions. We're having an activity check though (post there too, btw!) so there may be some divisions that may be wiped clean so you can always wait until then.

Division 5's subforum is yours so feel free to create the threads you think necessary. If you need anything turned into announcements or stickies, write it in the thread title and I will go edit them. For those, however, I would suggest you make the first post of the thread (the original/starting post) a sort of header Only post content that you will need to edit in subsequent posts because if I turned a thread into an announcement and a normal member edits it afterwards, it will return to being a normal thread.
Sweet! I didn't find anything confusing to be honest, I just needed to fine tune it so it fits with what we both want.

I read a little bit on division 5 and from what I read it's a over all rounded in combat and it's symbol stands for sacrifice (Among others depending where you go) so I could honestly go in any direction that you see fit. If I could though I would like something related to the human realm, like in charge of transferring of souls, or charge of balance in the human world and so on, sorry if that doesn't make sense.

Also, is there any way to get rid of the topics already in it? I would like to make a fresh start if I could.
I've moved the threads to the Archived Thread subforum except for the training ground since its creator is still a member of the guild (though he hasn't posted in the activity check yet)

As for a function, maybe "Soul Governance"? Technically, all Shinigami are supposed to do that, but your division could be the specialists?

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 06, 2014 7:38 pm


Feiyimei
BlueEmber239
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I'm currently trying to make a guide on how to create a character for this guild so I would appreciate it if you could tell me anything that you found confusing in the process!

Also, what would you like division 5's role to be? You can pick anything so long as it is still strategically sound and isn't the same thing as the ones from other divisions. We're having an activity check though (post there too, btw!) so there may be some divisions that may be wiped clean so you can always wait until then.

Division 5's subforum is yours so feel free to create the threads you think necessary. If you need anything turned into announcements or stickies, write it in the thread title and I will go edit them. For those, however, I would suggest you make the first post of the thread (the original/starting post) a sort of header Only post content that you will need to edit in subsequent posts because if I turned a thread into an announcement and a normal member edits it afterwards, it will return to being a normal thread.
Sweet! I didn't find anything confusing to be honest, I just needed to fine tune it so it fits with what we both want.

I read a little bit on division 5 and from what I read it's a over all rounded in combat and it's symbol stands for sacrifice (Among others depending where you go) so I could honestly go in any direction that you see fit. If I could though I would like something related to the human realm, like in charge of transferring of souls, or charge of balance in the human world and so on, sorry if that doesn't make sense.

Also, is there any way to get rid of the topics already in it? I would like to make a fresh start if I could.
I've moved the threads to the Archived Thread subforum except for the training ground since its creator is still a member of the guild (though he hasn't posted in the activity check yet)

As for a function, maybe "Soul Governance"? Technically, all Shinigami are supposed to do that, but your division could be the specialists?
Thanks and sounds great to me!
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