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Kirisa-chan

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Posted: Wed Mar 15, 2006 6:59 pm

I'm not expecting anyone to like it or go with it. I'm just wondering what they would think. I was thinking that some new evil threat comes up while the old one is regenerating and he comes back to find this new evil and they are always fighting to rule the world. Just an on and off thing that happens. Tell me what you think of the idea not wanting it actualy in the comic it came to me and I was wondering if it sounded good.

Posted: Thu Mar 16, 2006 3:53 pm

{~{ Our greatest glory is not in never falling,

It sounds okay, but I don't think I got it correctly because there were a lot of typos. In fact, let me fix that.

I'm not expecting anyone to like it or go with it. I'm just wondering what they would think. I was thinking that some new evil threat comes up while the old one is regenerating and he comes back to find this new evil and they are always fighting to rule the world. Just an on and off thing that happens. Tell me what you think of the idea not wanting it actualy in the comic it came to me and I was wondering if it sounded good.

There. That should be easier to read.

But I can guarantee that DB won't put it in.

But in rising every time we fall. }~}

{~{ Confucius }~}

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Posted: Thu Mar 16, 2006 4:54 pm

No offense but even without the typos that makes no sence.

Posted: Fri Mar 17, 2006 7:15 pm

Meiloyn v2

{~{ Our greatest glory is not in never falling,

It sounds okay, but I don't think I got it correctly because there were a lot of typos. In fact, let me fix that.

I'm not expecting anyone to like it or go with it. I'm just wondering what they would think. I was thinking that some new evil threat comes up while the old one is regenerating and he comes back to find this new evil and they are always fighting to rule the world. Just an on and off thing that happens. Tell me what you think of the idea not wanting it actualy in the comic it came to me and I was wondering if it sounded good.

There. That should be easier to read.

But I can guarantee that DB won't put it in.

But in rising every time we fall. }~}

{~{ Confucius }~}

like I said I just wanted to know what people thought of the idea and thanks for fixing it.

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