Hi there, happy to help! =D
I'll go through one section at a time <3
Name: People on Pern don't have a last name, so she would just be Aranel, but the nickname is fine!
Craft/Rank: What craft is she apprenticing in? The crafts on Pern are: Harper, Healer, Smith, Miner, Weaver, Tanner, Beastcraft, Farmer, Fisher, Baker, Vintner, Runner, Woodcraft and Ancientcraft. You can read more about them
here! History: This is fine, but I would like a little more detail/clarification please! =D
- Growing up in the Weyr creche (as I think you're saying she did!) is perfectly normal for a Weyr kid so that's fine! Could you tell me how she got on with the other children growing up though? Did she find it hard to get on with people he own age, preferring slightly older company?
- How has she proven her brilliance? Was she a quick study at lessons for example? All Weyr kids are taught by a Harper who will give them a basic education, but a lot don't study further than this as they hope to become riders and won't need it.
- Does
she want to be a rider? She's unhappy with the pressure on her, is this because she's worried about failing or just because she doesn't want to do it?
- When did she become an apprentice, and in what craft? It's pretty unusual for a Weyr kid to do as most will just stand as Candidates hoping to be a rider one day. If she is an apprentice she can't also be a candidate, there just isn't time to keep up with the work! She can certainly have an interest in a craft and hang around helping out but she couldn't be actively studying if she is a candidate.
- There have recently been some major world events recently, how does she feel about them? Two and a half years ago Malvren Weyr and Benden Weyr were overthrown by a group of 'wherholders', led by wherhandlers who were tired of riders ruling everything and joined by riders who were tired of the colour of your dragon deciding your place in life. They also attacked Trine Weyr but Trine managed to survive. About eight months ago there were renewed hostilities with the wherholders attacking one of Trine's firestone mines and Trine poisoning food in Malvren. << If you want more detail on this stuff I can provide it!
- How did/how will she end up at Euclid? I am guessing the Weyr she was born in was Trine - will her mother transfer for example and take her along?
Personality: I'm going to ask for a bit more detail here, simply because we match dragons to candidates based on personality so the more we know the better her chances are!
- Does Aya have many friends? It sounds like she might be the sort that doesn't, as her intelligence and the fact that she'd judgemental to those who are less so would make her tough to get on with.
- If she doesn't have many friends does she regret it? Does she wish she got on with people more, or that there were more people like her
to get on with?
- How does her loving nature manifest? Is she the sort who has others best interest at heart even if she doesn't come off as a friendly person?
- What sort of things does she tend to get very set on? Moral things? Correcting people when they're wrong?
- How does she react if, when she's trying to take charge of her peers, people will not listen or somebody else challenges her for authority of the group?
- It sounds like she has a good respect for authority, is this the case?
- What sort of thing does she enjoy doing? Learning? Having new experiences? Conversation with other smart people?
- What aims, hopes and dreams does she have in life?
- What makes her angry? What's she afraid of, and how does she deal with fear?
- What's her opinion on the wherholders? What does she think of Euclid - like the wherholders they promote the idea of colour equality, but unlike the wherholders they have no interest in violence - is she happy about the idea of moving there?
If you need any more help feel free to PM me, or post here with questions! <3