xxA D V E N T ҉ C H R O N I C L E S __________________________________________________________ .. "What is Chaos for the Fly, is normal to the Spider. Or is it the other way around?... I'm not sure"
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Posted: Fri Jan 10, 2014 6:16 pm
xxSenbi Rahotep
Everything bows to time, it's just a given ___________________________________________________________________ .. Basic Criteria
Name | Senbi Rahotep Alias| Senbi, Or simply "B". Some have come to know her as "Nanna" Gender | Female Race | Shinigami Affiliations |Squad 12 / Research and Development Rank Held | Squad 12 Lt.
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Birth Date | April 2 Astronomical Sign | Aries Age | 514
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Blood Type | AB+ Height| 5'3 Weight | 100 Ethnicity | Egyption Eye Color | Yellow Physical Description| On Senbi's lower left backside, she has a Birth mark in the shape of a sun. It's about the size of a half dollar coin. The Girl stands only five foot three inches, with waist long auburn hair. Her skin as just as dark as sand. Senbi’s eyes are formed of pure gold. Her face is said to be a gift from the grace of the Nile and her temper; a defense given to her by the almighty Isis. The Lieutenant's smile spreads the joy and light of a fresh rainbow just after a cold rain.
Wardrobe | Senbi does not wear the robs in their typical Fashion. She wears it loosely. The under rob covers her breasts but shows lots of cleavage. Her black outer layer covers her forearms but dips down showing off her under robs custom cut off back. Her wardrobe is tied together with a giant green bow. Along with that Senbi carries a dark green Shall with her. Her dagger like Zanpakutōs can be found on her left hip.
Captain Haori style » Haori Underside Color » Lieutenant Badge Location » Right Thigh
.. _______________________ Personal Attributes
Quirks Senbi has an urge for destiny, she wants to do something great. She wouldn’t mind making the great sacrifice, dying so others could live and help the world. Senbi puts her heart and soul into everything she does. She can be very motherly at times, whether it’s being loving or super strict to get things done. She is a person with a strong will. The lieutenant follows her heart and doesn't always go by the book. The lieutenant handles herself well in high-stress situations. Better than most in fact. Her way of turning gloom and doom into joy and fun keeps her fresh and ready for anything. Like the Aries she is, Senbi takes on the world head first. Stubborn and quick as fire she's on the go. Turbo engines on and zooming.
Voice Recording 1: "Captain, I don't understand why you're making me do this. What project does this even have anything to do with" Shuffling and chatter can be heard in the back ground " Well I guess I have no choice. This is 10th seat Senbi of Squad 12, doing this STUPID voice recording. Captain says it's a great way to see how we change over the years."
Voice Recording 2: "Okay okay, So I haven't been the best at keeping up on these since I've been so busy with stuff... but twenty years isn't that long right? I mean it's not like this was as important as some other things I've been up to." only to be followed by a small explosion " Oh damn, I thought I'd kill two bird with one stone.... GOD DAMN IT, it's spreading SHOOOOT" there is a pause in speaking where angry grunts can be heard "OKAY, that could have gone better, but I'm back to speak but how cool was that. Who knew if you added a little heat to something like, oh I don't know, black powder, it would just explode like that? then it just continues to burn stuff.... like files and important papers?"
Favors | Tea People who are kind Plushie, like really huge, giant ones. Mind games Puzzles Cigarettes
Disdains | a** holes Those who are too full of themselves, or well... a** holes Being called 'Short'
Preference of Food | Rice Fruits Disliked Foods | This is no such food. Preference of Drink | Saki Tea
.._______________________ Something Unknown Fears | Spiders Overly crazy people
Aspirations | To enjoy what ever comes her way. Spread the joys.
xxTales long forgotten ____________________________________________________________ .. When the time comes, Will you be ready?
Chapter One Memories of a kind soul 1500 A.D.- Now
In life Senbi was egyptian. Rich, a noble, the only daughter of five. Became head priestess, but none of that matters once you die. The night of her death Senbi was just leaving the temple of Rha when a Massive creature shoot before her. Killing her but leaving her soul to wonder. Senbi believed she had done something wrong in life and the gods killed her for it. Then the soul reapers came.
Senbi awoke in the soul society with a headache, unable to remember anything. The nineteen year old girl wandered around. She looked so different from those around her. A lot of the time senbi found herself unwanted by people because of this. She never had a family in the living districts. Senbi had lived there a while before making a friend. Just a single friend. He was much taller than her. almost dwarfing her. The two had only become friends because was how competitive they were. One afternoon Senbi was jumping things for fun. This man about her age in appearance had shown up. At first he was watching her jump over thing, and jump object to object. Soon he joined it. Jumping faster and higher than she. Senbi quickly matched him. Traveling to different things. It soon became a race. Who would tire first. In the end she had lost but it only lend to her challenging him again. The two joked about all the time. It was from him she found out about becoming a soul reaper. It was his dream to be one.
Months later… Senbi was found, and asked to join the soul society. Her friend whom was with her.. was not. Her first reaction was going to be to say no, but before she could answer her friend snatched her hand and looked at her “Do it. You won this race kiddo. I’ll see you soon”. With that she of course said yes but with tears in her eyes.
Voice recording 4: "So, some where a long the time I lost my third voice recording... O'well I guess right? So I've been keeping track of them. I've done this one and my last one with in the same month. I'm trying to make sure they get done. I don't know how many I have to do but." Squeaks from her chair turning pierce the recorder "Ugh. You know Being a soul reaper is nothing I expected. I thought it would be all fighting and stuff. Granted I'm in squad twelve. But some times it would be nice to rap my tiny little hands around a hollows neck, and squeeze just like this" Shaking of hands can be heard "OOps forgot. You can't see it. Damn."
The academy was hard for her. She was always to hyper and couldn’t pay attention to stuff. It wasn’t until people started to call her worthless and challenge her that she had become a hard worker. Now she had something to prove. That she could be better than those around her. At the end of the academy, she wasn’t the top of her class but she certainly did better than most. Senbi was placed into squad twelve. She had no idea why but Senbi would do her best. Everything was so new to her. She had to learn science-y things. Like element off this table…. that wasn’t even an actual table.
Voice recording 5: "So being the newly 4th seat of Squad 12 is AWESOOOOOME. They said I couldn't do it but I have. Though I still don't know why. I mean all I do is right stuff down and type on this computer. That and pretend to do stuff. Though I do amazing when we go out into the living world. Like in search of rare plants and such. I guess I'm just one with nature. Oh and I get to strangle hollows every now an then too. Which is great!" Excited bouncing and the clapping of her hands can be heard. " There is so this one cow in my squad. Ugh she drive me nuts... always trying to take credit for the things I do. Not like I actually do any of it anyways. But I know she didn't."
After several years of work and finding out what the hell she was doing. Senbi had worked her way up to being Lieutenant. Where turns out, she does literally nothing but follow the captain around.
Voice Recording 6: "So Lieutenant of squad 12.... yes lieutenant. I worked so hard for this only to find out I do nothing... it's like the Prefect job for me. I mean I just follow my Captain around and Maybe do something if he asks me too. I should have had this position from the start! I mean Hell. All my training and studying. UGH!"
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Posted: Fri Jan 10, 2014 6:18 pm
xx ___________________________________________________________ .. Weave your grace, Nyle Crash Forth and Spread your Jaws, Amra
Zanpakutō Name | Nyle, Amra Zanpakutō Element | Living & Nature based Zanpakutō Spirit | Nyle Amra
_________________________.. Spirit Files Zanpakutō Blade Type | Daggers Zanpakutō Accessories | Nyle: Green hilt, with a straight blade. Amra: Dark burgundy hilt, curved blade. Zanpakutō Sealed Appearance | Daggers Blade Color » steel Sheath Color » Green, Brown Hilt Color » Green wrapping, Brown Tsuba Shape » None, detailed Square Length » twelve inch Blades, seven inch handles.
_________________________.. Shikai Files
Zanpakutō Activation Statement | Weave your grace, Nyle Crash Forth and Spread your Jaws, Amra Zanpakutō Blade Changes Nyle: In Shikai, at the very bottom of the hilt, a Papyrus plant blooms. The Papyrus blossom allows Senbi to drop five[5] seeds from it every post. These seeds sink down into the ground, unable to be removed until used. For the most part when in Shikai, Nyle stays inside it's sheath. Only to be used if needed.
Amra: When shikai is called upon, Amra stretches into a massive five foot blade with a five inch width. The handle guard grows a long lions mane that cover the users hand. The blade resembles that of a lions tooth. Long and sharp. Sadly this blade in not for slashing, it can only stab. This being said the sword in dense and capable of blocking against higher reiryoku based attacks. When being stabbed with Amra, take note that he will leave a massive wound. In activation the blade also give Senbi increased strength. Allowing her to swing this blade about with ease.
Shikai Abilities Ability One- Growth When called upon, the seeds from Nyle sprout into a six foot tall Papyrus plant with a six inch spear blade sticking out from the blossom. The Papyrus spears are tough and can blade normal blade attacks. The shaft of the papyrus can be compared to a normal Zanpakutō. At Senbi's choosing, she is able to rip the Papyrus spear from the ground an throw it. Once the spear hits it's target or misses for that matter it disappears. If the spear hits it's target, the energy from the spear vanishing burns them, cauterizing the wound. With the increased strength Senbi gets from Amra, her spears are thrown at high speeds of 150mph (normal speed is 93 mph) [Spears can be summoned one post after that set of seeds have been dropped]
Ability Two- Amra's Shriek Amra's power can be called upon at anytime during a fight, mid stab or before. When done, a giant lion's head forms around the large blade. Unlike most Lion's roars this one comes in the form of a high pitch screech that can deafen those fifteen feet around Senbi. When used while attacking the Reiatsu based lion's head burns causing constant pain while being touched. The lions head has a two foot radius aura encompassing the blade. [The Shriek only lasts the post it is activated, the aura lasts three[3] posts afterward] [3 post cool down once the aura effect is gone.]
Ability Three- Birth of the Nile Once fifteen spears or more spears are in place about the field this ability can be called forth. The ground (in a fifteen foot radius) underneath Senbi transforms into the waters of the Nile. Though Senbi is able to stand on top of the water, the pool underneath her is actually four feet deep. Much like the actual Nile it is home to a crocodile that swims with in the waters. When Senbi moves the pool beneath moves with her. The pool does not increase in size. Also, the Papyrus spears inside the pool are now one, they too move with Senbi's position. [lasts for three posts][cooldown of four]
Kido Background Knowledge | Over the course of the last hundred Years Senbi have been training herself in Bakudō with out incantations and a little bit it Hadō with incantations. Kido Expertise | _________________________.. Kido Known Bakudō Known |
Spell Name: Sai (塞, Restrain) Number: 01 Incantation: Unknown Description: The practitioner, pointing his/her index and middle fingers at the intended target(s), causes the target's arms to lock behind their back. The spell is usable on a single target or a significantly large group of people.
Spell Name: Seki (斥, Repulse) Number: 08 Incantation: Unknown Description: The practitioner generates an orb of light blue energy, which not only blocks attacks, but repels whatever strikes it.
Spell Name: Geki (撃, Strike) Number: 09 Incantation: "Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini!! Look upon yourself with horror and then claw out your own throat!" Description: The practitioner, drawing the symbols of the spell in the air, causes his/her entire body to permeate a red energy. The same red energy, engulfing the body of the target, causes complete paralysis.
Spell Name: Hōrin (崩輪, Disintegrating Circle) Number: 09 Incantation: "Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini!! Look upon yourself with horror and tear out your own throat!" Description: The practitioner, using the index and middle fingers, generates an orange hued tendril with spiraling yellow patterns which, ensnaring the opponent as the tendril wraps around their body, immobilizes them. The end of it remains in the hands of the user, allowing them to control the path of the tendril before and after capture. The Kidō can connect with another one of itself, if both have captured a target, and bind them together.
Spell Name: Sekienton (赤煙遁, Red Smoke Escape) Number: 21 Incantation: Unknown Description: The practitioner creates a cloud of red smoke, swiftly engulfing the surrounding area and briefly obscuring the movements of whomever is within the smoke, allowing a quick getaway.
Spell Name: Noren Mekuri (暖簾捲り, Curtain Stripping) Number: 27 Incantation: Unknown Description: Nullifies types of illusory effects which may be used to conceal something from view. The practitioner, extending their hand, appears as though they are gripping thin air before stripping away the technique which is currently in effect. Doing so creates a light blue and violet aura around the object which is being revealed as it gradually comes into view.
Spell Name: Shitotsu Sansen (嘴突三閃, Beak-Piercing Triple Beam) Number: 30 Incantation: Unknown Description: Crackling yellow energy gathers in the user's hand, who draws in triangle mid-air. The symbol creates solidified energy on the shape of smaller triangles from its three points and fires them at the intended target, pinning them to a nearby surface, slamming into his/her body in three places in the shape of a perfect triangle and immobilizing them.
Spell Name: Tsuriboshi (吊星, Suspending Star) Number: 37 Incantation: Unknown Description: Tsuriboshi is primarily used to catch. The spell creates a ball of blue energy that fires out six "ropes" from its center. The "ropes" attach themselves to any sturdy nearby object and the energy in the center solidifies into a flat elastic-like cushion. The spell can stop falling objects similar to a safety net.
Spell Name: Enkōsen (円閘扇, Round Lock Fan) Number: 39 Incantation: Unknown Description: Enkōsen is primarily used for defense. The practitioner can use either both hands or his/her Zanpakutō in a blocking motion. The spell generates a dull yellow energy, which takes the form of a large spinning disk of condensed reiatsu, in front of the practitioner, blocking an opponent's attack.
Spell Name: Hakufuku (白伏, White Crawl) Number: 44 Incantation: Unknown Description: The target sees the illusion of purple cherry blossoms falling around them. As their vision begins to blur and become unfocused, their consciousness becomes muddled, disoriented, and confused. Shortly thereafter, the target blacks out altogether, losing consciousness, only to awaken with an unclear memory of what occurred.
Spell Name: Kakushitsuijaku (摑趾追雀, Summoning of the Tracking Sparrows) Number: 58 Incantation: "Heart of the south, eye of the north, finger of the west, foot of the east, arrive with the wind and depart with the rain." Description: Kakushitsuijaku heightens the user's senses and awareness to seize a target. The practitioner draws a circle, with the appropriate symbols set apart in four quadrants upon the ground, using a black powder. When they place their hands palms down just under the circle to activate the spell, the circle glows with a blue light as the symbols within the circle are animated, causing various numbers to appear within until the specific set is found. The number set seems to be a variation on longitude and latitude.
Spell Name: Rikujōkōrō (六杖光牢, Six Rods Prison of Light Number: 61 Incantation: "Carriage of thunder, bridge of a spinning wheel. With light, divide this into six!" Description: The practitioner points his/her index finger at the target, generating a spark of yellow energy, which summons six thin, wide beams of light, which, slamming into a target's midsection, hold them in place. The target is unable to move any part of their body, including the parts which were not struck by the beams.
Hadō Known |
Spell Name: Shō (衝, Thrust) Number: 01 Incantation: Unknown Description: The practitioner points at his/her target with his/her index finger, a small amount of energy is dispelled from the tip of the index fighter with enough force to thrust a considerable amount of kinetic force at a target causing the target to be pushed back a few feet from the caster.
Spell Name: Gurenbachi (紅蓮蜂, Crimson Bees) Number: 23 Incantation: "Gather, spirits of flame. Ride the westward wind, show them your fury." Description: The user flings their hand, summoning forth a surge of fire that splits into a dozen wasp-like projectiles that detonate, causing explosions large enough to engulf a person.
Spell Name: Shakkahō (赤火砲, Red Fire Cannon) Number: 31 Incantation: "Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south!" Description: The user, generating high-temperature flames, discharges it from both hands or the finger, in the form of an orb (small, medium, or large depending on the power used. The destructive power released by the blast can vary between a simple explosion to a pillar of energy. In both instances, the spell causes concussive as well as burn damage.
Spell Name: Ōkasen (黄火閃, Yellow Fire Flash) Number: 32 Incantation: Unknown Description: The practitioner, raising their Zanpakutō horizontally in front of them, generates a yellow orb which widens itself along the length of their sword. Once it is fully charged, it fires outward as a horizontal blast, in a wide arc of yellow energy, at the target. This technique can be launched from the hand instead of a Zanpakutō, albeit producing a shorter arc.
Spell Name: Kongōbaku (金剛爆, Adamantine Blast) Number: 37 Incantation: Unknown Description: A blast of spherical red energy, similar in strength to a Sōkatsui blast.
Kaidō Known |
Forbidden Spells Known | [[Must seek permission.]]
_________________________.. Shinigami Abilities
Zanjutsu | Not being the strongest Zanjutsu master, Senbi makes do with her Dagger. Using forms of Eskrima, a Filipino style of martial arts and knife fighting, Mao is quite capable of disposing any body. Now Mao might not have squad ten level of fighting, but she gets the job done. Senbi show promise when in her Shikai form though. When using a sword she is proficient and skilled. Hakuda | Hakuda is a stronger suit of Senbi's. She is about to pick it up quickly, and use it effectively in combat. With her Daggers, Senbi has to have a skillful mixture of hand-to-hand combat long with knife play. Often times Senbi finds herself not even having to use her Daggers. She isn't one to kill, but she has no problem beating the ******** out of you.
Hohō | Senbi isn't as fast as she could be, but she has the normal quickness for her rank. Durability | The little hundred pound Shinigami is not very durable at all. Senbi can move around people quickly but if the person is faster than she is, Senbi can not stay close range for long. It literally take a few hits for her to be out of the game. But, just because she doesn't take well doesn't mean she can't put out the same amount of force. Senbi is a little firecracker that way. Reiryoku | Senbi's strength comes from her great leveled Reiryoku. Since she can not last long in close range battle, she finds herself casting Kido. Her Reiryoku level also helps her control her zanpakuto.
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Hello, I'm Disturbed Masterpiece, and I'll be looking over your profile today. xxxxxxPERSONAL INFORMATION ▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃ ▃▃▃ ▃▃▃▃
The quirks section, in personal attributes, needs to be fleshed out. What's your character like under stress, in good situations? General intelligence, pet-peeves, psychological conditions, etc. I like how you included your human life in your bio, but your life as a Soul would definitely have lasted longer than the time you were alive if you're 464; before joining the Gotei, were you a criminal or a prodigy? How was life like? How did you get by, forming a group or going about it solo? Lieutenants are recruited by their Captains, so if you wish to be the Lieutenant of Squad 12, you should message the Captain and work out how things happened after meeting. This also means that the section of your bio placing you in the Fourth Squad should be removed.
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SHIKAI
Seeing as this is still a Shikai release, I'm going to have to ask you to tone down 175ft. to a more reasonable number. Ability One: Seeing as all characters in this guild thus far are Shinigami, I'm going to have to request you put a cooldown time on this ability. Also, what do you classify as minor wounds? Ability Two: Hmm...even though paralyzation has been an iffy discussion-point in the guild, I'm willing to accept if you tone it down to one limb. Also, the second part of the ability is denied, due to plagiarism from this website. No barriers can be unbreakable/inescapable, so please tone it down. Also, what's the range a normal bubble can take? A solidified bubble? The easiest way to do this, in my opinion, is to generalize around ranking.
BANKAI
In shikai you mention your zanpakuto turning into serpent, then you mention to release your bankai you stab your dagger into the ground. What dagger are you referring to? Please either edit your shikai or bankai to accommodate. Please explain what you mean by "Consumes lifeforce" in the strengths portion. Ability One: I would understand using the reiryoku to strengthen the roots, regardless of if it was water or not, but creating an ability that negates one of the weaknesses is relatively counter-productive. Also, how large is the radius of the trees roots? How much reiryoku does the tree absorb? Also, if the ability is passive, please remove it can extend your bankai up to one post; this would make it so your bankai would last indefinitely. How strong are the roots normally compared to when hardened? I see you only have one ability posted, are there any more abilities that you were going to add? And just to make sure, you did clear having a Bankai with Onin, correct?
Because of the Squad you're applying to and the aforementioned recruitment issue, along with the rules on the Kaido, I'm going to have to ask that you remove all Kaido.
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Passed! Although, I need a more of explanation on why you do not wear the shinigami outfit? Preferably something that gets your out of it.
xxxxxxZANPAKUTO DETAILS ▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃ ▃▃▃ ▃▃▃▃ **I'll be reviewing the Actual Details, Shikai, and Bankai separately
Actual Details
Passed
SHIKAI
Ability One: Passed
Ability Two: I need a range on how far the screeching can go.
Ability Three: Ok, this would have been a passed except for one thing. I am sorry but your water can be turned into ice. Like Toshiro's can turn Hannibel's water into ice and she can do it visa versa. It matters not if it is made up of reaitsu.
