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PostPosted: Fri Aug 30, 2013 12:33 pm


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NameName:XXXXXXXXXXXXAdonis Nuada
Nickname(s)Spitzname(n):XXXAndy
AgeAlter:XXXXXXXXXXXXXX17 years old


GenderGeschlecht:XXXXXXXXXMale
HeightGröße:XXXXXXXXXXX5 feet 6 inches
WeightGewicht:XXXXXXXXXX130 pounds
Eye ColourAugenfarbe:XXXXXCornflower blue
Hair Colour Haarfarbe:XXXXXSlate Gray/Silver
BuildKörperbau:XXXXXXXXXXHis face is still youthful even though he has silver hair like an old person. He has Werner Syndrome (which triggered last year) causing his hair to change from light brown to silvery grey overnight. He is also shorter then most males his age with skinny arms and legs and a wider torso due to the disease. He may look weak, but he is able to endure greater amounts of physical pain due to his past training in the Turtle and Savate Fighting Styles. He hopes to find a cure to the genetic disease by studying medicine whenever he has a free moment away from training or assignments.

LikesVorlieben:XXXXXXXXXXXLearning new things
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXHelping others
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXPlaying music with his lute
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXTelling stories to children to ease their fears.

DislikesAbneigungen:XXXXXXXXThe rain...it reminds him of the people that have lost their lives.
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXBeing alone in dark places
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXWatching the masses return wounded
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXMost of all people dying because of the Titans

Favourite ColorLieblingsfarbe:XXTeal
Favourite FoodLieblingsessen:XXHotdogs
PersonalityPersönlichkeit:XXXXXXAt first glance he appears to be aloof like his mind is else where. Most of the time he has his nose buried in a book trying to learn something new. Some people may see him as anti-social because he doesn't trust anyone until he's gotten to know them. He rarely takes about himself and his past to others. Once he gets to know someone he becomes more comfortable with them and opens up to conversations. He is protective towards his friends and worries about them and their safety. He has never allowed himself to fall in love before in fear it may put his partner at risk. He sees himself a danger to anyone who tries to get close to him. People don't always see him for who he is. He doesn't trust people when he first meets them because he automatically assumes they will dislike him for whatever reason. He is happiest when he is with his friends.

Home DistrictHeimatbezirk:XXX Shiganshina District
Home DistrictHeimatstadt:XXX NA

RankRang:XXXXXXXXXXXXX Cadet
LegionLegion:XXXXXXXXXXX Cadets
Primary WeaponHauptwaffe:X Turtle and Savate Fighting Techniques.

Trademark Fighting Styles:
Turtle Fighting Style – Originated as a way to defend the upper body from punches once the fighter has been thrown or pinned to the ground. Training includes doing sit ups with 5 pound weights at first and then with 10 pound weights finally ending with a partner trying to push the Turtle trainee down from the sit up position. When all attempts fail then the person has mastered the Turtle Style and can use it in combat. Adapting a modified style to use this same principle while standing up the following guarding techniques can be used.
1. Turtle Goes Into Its Shell – The fighter interlocks their fingers behind their head and brings their elbows forward to prevent any punches thrown towards the face. The top and back of the head are still vulnerable. This can be used on the ground when in a sitting position with the knees up and the elbows resting upon them to guard the head, chest, and midsection. When standing only the head will be protected.
2. Turtle Shy Away From The Sun – The fighter puts their hands on the top of their head while their forearms are brought together to absorb the impact of any blows targeting the front of the head. The fighter can bring their forearms down to guard their chest if need be while balling their fists as they are brought down towards the fighter’s chin.
3. Turtle’s Surprise Awakening – Usually used as a counter attack after a successful guard to hit their foe with a quick head butt. This has been used to stun or confuse a foe so the fighter can run away.
4. Turtle Jumps The Moon – The fighter holds their guarding position while leaping as high as they can into the air. This will allow for a follow up kicking techniques to be used or possibly an attempt to escape from a foe.
5. Turtle’s Surrender – The fighter will lay down on the ground with their arms and legs tucked in under them then they will remain perfectly still waiting for the foe to go away. The fault with this technique is it leaves the fighter’s back completely vulnerable to attacks, however if the fighter can endure the pain until the foe goes away it may save them from death.

Savate Fighting Style – Originally created by street thugs as a way to make money this fighting style uses swift kicks to knock an opponent off balance while the fighters would normally hold onto something with their hands like the railing of a staircase to keep them from falling over while fighting. This technique also uses open palm slaps and hits due to the law that a closed fist is a deadly weapon, however only the kicking techniques will be used as listed and demonstrated below. This is intended to be used along with the Turtle Fighting Style as a means of attack while still able to keep guard up.
1. Fouetté (literally "whip", roundhouse kick making contact with the toe), high (aimed for head), medium (aimed for chest and ribs) or low (aimed for the legs and feet below the knee.)
2. Chassé (side or front piston-action kick), medium (aimed for chest and ribs) or low (aimed for the legs above the knee.)
3. Revers (frontal or lateral "reverse" kick making contact with the sole of the shoe), high (aimed for head), medium (aimed for chest and ribs) or low (aimed for the legs and feet below the knee.)
4. Coup de pied bas ("low kick", a front or sweep kick to the shin making contact with the inner edge of the shoe, performed with a characteristic backwards lean) low only.
5. Coup de pied bas de frappe (coup de pied bas which is used to strike the opponent's lead leg).

HorsebackPferderücken:XXXXX Yes (will attempt to learn horseback riding later on in story)


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Childhood (Birth to age 12):] Adonis was sheltered from the existence of the Titans as a young child. Every time news came of a Titan attack and people being lost Adonis’ mother would tell him it was all a bad dream and someday they would wake up in a peaceful world filled with the most beautiful sunsets he could image. A place without giant walls to confine them, or monsters to frighten and kill them. When the soldiers came back from their missions Adonis was not allowed to look at them like everyone else who crowded into the streets. His mother always knelt down in front of him with tears in her eyes as she hugged her only son to her chest until the soldiers were out of view and the people started to go back into their homes. Adonis wasn’t allowed to be outside his house for long periods of time in fear he could be hurt or killed if a Titan suddenly attacked. Adonis was sad he didn’t get to spend time with the other children, but figured it was for the best. He could tell his mother needed him with her more by the tears running down her checks almost every day.

Adonis only had his mother with him after his father seemed to disappear shortly before he was born. Adonis never knew his father, but he saw the other kids playing with their dads out in the streets and it always left him with an empty feeling as if part of his heart was missing while he looked out his window. Adonis learned how to do many things while he was a young boy including cleaning, cooking, and even making and mending his own clothes. Whenever he got a hole in his clothes his mother would give him a needle and thread and instruct him through how to sew it up. You see Adonis’ family was never rich by any means so anytime they could save money they did. Adonis wore the same pair of shoes for nearly a year before he got new ones and his clothes often looked like a patchwork quilt to cover up all the holes and rips. He didn’t mind though. He was happy to be just how he was. The people with a lot of money often became greedy and arrogant. Full of themselves his mother once said and Adonis didn’t want to become like that. Adonis did as much as he could to help his mother around the house until he became old enough to go to a public school for boys.

Schooling Years (12 to 16): The first year of school was hard for Adonis since he was use to how things were at home. He learned how to read and write from his mother over the past year in preparation for school so thankfully he was able to keep up with his assignments. He didn’t get along with his classmates since they often picked on him for his shorter size and long brown hair that he braided. He was often called names like gender mixed-up and short stuff, but he ignored it. He did his assignments and turned them in and then everyday he ran home as fast as he could to get away from those mean kids. Adonis was about to start his second year of school when he finally learned the truth about his father from his mother who decided he was finally old enough to know the truth.

His father didn’t abandon them at all. His father was a soldier that had gotten separated from his squad during a mission. He was left behind and presumed to be dead. After two days passed he returned covered in blood and completely irrational. He said the Titans were more merciful by devouring them in one gulp while his own kind left him there to fend for himself among other harsh things. The police came and after that he was executed as a traitor because of the things he said. Adonis saw a picture of his father for the first time and learned he looked just like him only his father had a long silver braid down his back as he smiled proudly wearing his uniform the day after he graduated. Adonis understood why the kids picked on him now, because he was the son of a traitor as the police labeled him. The first day of his second semester he told the same story his mother did to his teacher and classmates and gave only his first name in introduction before sitting down in his seat looking as if he wanted to cry but was fighting it. The name calling stopped and in fact for the most part everyone ignored him only communicating with him when it was required for an assignment.

The third semester was much in the same. A lot more reading and assignments, but Adonis mostly kept to himself. One of the boys that remembered his introduction from last semester decided to start bullying him again and when Adonis ignored him as he always did the boy decided to become physical and a fight broke out in the lunch room. Adonis was clearly out matched and took six punches and four kicks before the administrators broke it up. When Adonis came home that day with more bruises then he could count his mother hugged him and told him it was okay to fight back. He had to become strong and protect himself. Adonis began learning Savate Fighting Techniques from one of his mother’s friends. The man who became his instructor specialized in fighting other humans rather than the Titans. Adonis learned a total of five techniques from the man over a six month period, but each time he was faced with a physical confrontation he chose not to fight back and took the beatings. After a long talk with his teacher he finally got up the courage to defend himself however the first kick he landed ended up breaking the nose of the other kid who had been bullying him for almost a year.

After that Adonis faced daily flights from friends of the boy with the broken nose, but Adonis reverted back to his previous self and refused to fight back. He put his hands behind his head as if surrendering while the kids attacked him until the fight was stopped. When he told his fighting teacher what had happened and what he did since his instructor helped him develop guarding techniques to protect himself. Adonis went through vigorous training to strengthen his upper body and during one of those training sessions he discovered what he named the Turtle Fighting Style which used his forearms to block incoming attacks while he can retaliate with his feet. Over his last year of school he trained every day with his fighting instructor to develop new techniques and perfect the ones he knew. That same year Adonis learned he had a rare genetic disorder inherited from his father called Werner Syndrome which caused his hair to turn white. It also explained why he was so short since that was common with the disease as well. Adonis didn’t want the disease to hold him back so he continued his training and studies for school.

Pre-military Training – Present (17 - ?): Shortly after graduating school Adonis decided he wanted to join the military. His mother was against it, but he wanted to restore his families honor and protect his mother. Someday he wanted to see those beautiful sunsets without the walls and monsters she spoke of, but until that day came he would do whatever it took to keep her safe. Adonis packed his things and said his farewells to his mother and fighting instructor before he signed up for cadet training. His Body and soul would now belong to the military, but if he could protect the ones he loved it was only a small sacrifice to make. (Continued in the 2nd Cadet Training sessions).


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PostPosted: Fri Aug 30, 2013 12:54 pm


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Adonis Nuada
Military Cadet In Training

Don't you know looks are deceiving?
Is it your eyes or heart that's misleading?
Is it the truth or lies you are seeking?
Is there solace in knowing and believing?

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[align=center][size=10][color=teal][i]Don't[/i] you [b]know[/b] looks are [u]deceiving[/u]?
Is it your [u]eyes[/u] or [b]heart[/b] that's [i]misleading[/i]?
Is it the [b]truth[/b] or [u]lies[/u] you are [i]seeking[/i]?
Is there [i]solace[/i] in [u]knowing[/u] and [b]believing[/b]?[/color][/size][/align]
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 03, 2013 2:02 pm


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I like it! I am going to quote Robotic Zamat in this though because I don't know where everything goes yet. X_X

Accepted.


@Zamat: Can you do the moves and stuff for this, he checks out I just don't know where and how exactly you move the accepted forms yet. Thanks yuh! smile

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 08, 2013 3:29 am


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I like it! I am going to quote Robotic Zamat in this though because I don't know where everything goes yet. X_X

Accepted.


@Zamat: Can you do the moves and stuff for this, he checks out I just don't know where and how exactly you move the accepted forms yet. Thanks yuh! smile


The accepted profile, simply go into the accepted profile subforum under this one. wink
Good work!

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 09, 2013 6:17 pm


Not going to use Tobi at this time so this will be my combat character. Made some changes to this history in the profile and noted he will try to learn archery and horseback riding later on in the story. After he graduates I'll look through the job listings to see what he might be able to do.

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 10, 2013 2:11 pm


Shisei Tenshi
Not going to use Tobi at this time so this will be my combat character. Made some changes to this history in the profile and noted he will try to learn archery and horseback riding later on in the story. After he graduates I'll look through the job listings to see what he might be able to do.

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KK, hun that's APPROVED from me, then.
Nicely done.

I'll be moving this to the 'approved' section now.
Have fun with the new char and his development wink

R-chan out!
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 05, 2013 1:36 pm


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This profile is now opened for editing by the player and re-judging.

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 06, 2013 6:10 pm


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This profile is now opened for editing by the player and re-judging.

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Okay all the edits are up and this profile is ready for re-evaluation.
PostPosted: Mon Oct 07, 2013 10:57 am


Shisei Tenshi
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This profile is now opened for editing by the player and re-judging.

R-chan out!
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Okay all the edits are up and this profile is ready for re-evaluation.


Some areas of question:

1. If you want to study medics, go to uni, or get apprenticed to a doc. The military isn't going to waste resources on you for that. Or do it as a hobby in whatever free time you may have. Please specify this.

2. In your fighting styles, please make sure not to have any references about China, or time zones. We do not really know where and when this background story of the SnK takes place and how it is in relation to the world we know. So this does need to be removed and re-worded.

I really like the story for the background and the reasoning behind your ideas. I also like the added genetic disorder and this being a driving factor, not to mention this would also be an advantage for him in the 3DMG, too.

Please correct the above and I'll get it approved and etc.

R-chan

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 07, 2013 11:11 am


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Robotic Zamat
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This profile is now opened for editing by the player and re-judging.

R-chan out!
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Okay all the edits are up and this profile is ready for re-evaluation.


Some areas of question:

1. If you want to study medics, go to uni, or get apprenticed to a doc. The military isn't going to waste resources on you for that. Or do it as a hobby in whatever free time you may have. Please specify this.

2. In your fighting styles, please make sure not to have any references about China, or time zones. We do not really know where and when this background story of the SnK takes place and how it is in relation to the world we know. So this does need to be removed and re-worded.

I really like the story for the background and the reasoning behind your ideas. I also like the added genetic disorder and this being a driving factor, not to mention this would also be an advantage for him in the 3DMG, too.

Please correct the above and I'll get it approved and etc.

R-chan


I'll have him study as a hobby in his free time. When he's not training or on an assignment he could go to the clinic and see if the doctors can help him learn a cure.

Took out the country names and time periods so it should match up better now. Should I change the part about the ships or keep it? I remember seeing ships used during evacuations, so maybe the style could of developed while his teacher was out at sea during an evacuation? Then when he gets back he is able to teach it to Adonis.
PostPosted: Mon Oct 07, 2013 11:30 am


Shisei Tenshi
Robotic Zamat
Shisei Tenshi
Robotic Zamat
Shisei Tenshi


This profile is now opened for editing by the player and re-judging.

R-chan out!
<3


Okay all the edits are up and this profile is ready for re-evaluation.


Some areas of question:

1. If you want to study medics, go to uni, or get apprenticed to a doc. The military isn't going to waste resources on you for that. Or do it as a hobby in whatever free time you may have. Please specify this.

2. In your fighting styles, please make sure not to have any references about China, or time zones. We do not really know where and when this background story of the SnK takes place and how it is in relation to the world we know. So this does need to be removed and re-worded.

I really like the story for the background and the reasoning behind your ideas. I also like the added genetic disorder and this being a driving factor, not to mention this would also be an advantage for him in the 3DMG, too.

Please correct the above and I'll get it approved and etc.

R-chan


I'll have him study as a hobby in his free time. When he's not training or on an assignment he could go to the clinic and see if the doctors can help him learn a cure.

Took out the country names and time periods so it should match up better now. Should I change the part about the ships or keep it? I remember seeing ships used during evacuations, so maybe the style could of developed while his teacher was out at sea during an evacuation? Then when he gets back he is able to teach it to Adonis.


Looking better.

I've been thinking about those ships too.
The Walls do not contain any connection to the sea. In fact, the Human Lands are nowhere near.

However, there are lakes and rivers within the Human Lands inside the Walls.

If you could modify this as well, I think we'll have a winner. wink

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 07, 2013 11:40 am


Robotic Zamat
Shisei Tenshi
Robotic Zamat
Shisei Tenshi
Robotic Zamat
Shisei Tenshi


This profile is now opened for editing by the player and re-judging.

R-chan out!
<3


Okay all the edits are up and this profile is ready for re-evaluation.


Some areas of question:

1. If you want to study medics, go to uni, or get apprenticed to a doc. The military isn't going to waste resources on you for that. Or do it as a hobby in whatever free time you may have. Please specify this.

2. In your fighting styles, please make sure not to have any references about China, or time zones. We do not really know where and when this background story of the SnK takes place and how it is in relation to the world we know. So this does need to be removed and re-worded.

I really like the story for the background and the reasoning behind your ideas. I also like the added genetic disorder and this being a driving factor, not to mention this would also be an advantage for him in the 3DMG, too.

Please correct the above and I'll get it approved and etc.

R-chan


I'll have him study as a hobby in his free time. When he's not training or on an assignment he could go to the clinic and see if the doctors can help him learn a cure.

Took out the country names and time periods so it should match up better now. Should I change the part about the ships or keep it? I remember seeing ships used during evacuations, so maybe the style could of developed while his teacher was out at sea during an evacuation? Then when he gets back he is able to teach it to Adonis.


Looking better.

I've been thinking about those ships too.
The Walls do not contain any connection to the sea. In fact, the Human Lands are nowhere near.

However, there are lakes and rivers within the Human Lands inside the Walls.

If you could modify this as well, I think we'll have a winner. wink


Okay it's been changed so it was developed by street thugs as a way of making money using only their feet to attack while their hands would hold onto something like the railing of a staircase to keep them from falling over since they would be at a big disadvantage if knocked to the ground.
PostPosted: Mon Oct 07, 2013 11:46 am


Shisei Tenshi
Robotic Zamat
Shisei Tenshi
Robotic Zamat
Shisei Tenshi


Okay all the edits are up and this profile is ready for re-evaluation.


Some areas of question:

1. If you want to study medics, go to uni, or get apprenticed to a doc. The military isn't going to waste resources on you for that. Or do it as a hobby in whatever free time you may have. Please specify this.

2. In your fighting styles, please make sure not to have any references about China, or time zones. We do not really know where and when this background story of the SnK takes place and how it is in relation to the world we know. So this does need to be removed and re-worded.

I really like the story for the background and the reasoning behind your ideas. I also like the added genetic disorder and this being a driving factor, not to mention this would also be an advantage for him in the 3DMG, too.

Please correct the above and I'll get it approved and etc.

R-chan


I'll have him study as a hobby in his free time. When he's not training or on an assignment he could go to the clinic and see if the doctors can help him learn a cure.

Took out the country names and time periods so it should match up better now. Should I change the part about the ships or keep it? I remember seeing ships used during evacuations, so maybe the style could of developed while his teacher was out at sea during an evacuation? Then when he gets back he is able to teach it to Adonis.


Looking better.

I've been thinking about those ships too.
The Walls do not contain any connection to the sea. In fact, the Human Lands are nowhere near.

However, there are lakes and rivers within the Human Lands inside the Walls.

If you could modify this as well, I think we'll have a winner. wink


Okay it's been changed so it was developed by street thugs as a way of making money using only their feet to attack while their hands would hold onto something like the railing of a staircase to keep them from falling over since they would be at a big disadvantage if knocked to the ground.


Looks posh to me now hun.

Accepted!!

I'll be moving this one back to the Approved Subbie.
You get your a** back to posting!!!!

GLOMPZ!
R-chan
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