Put up some notes on how Ian would find the nymph's soul! Please excuse the really dumb semi-commentary from Ian. lays on the floor and laughcries
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Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2014 11:47 pm
NYMPH + BISMUTH IS NOW MALE Because who can resist sassy pretty boys, really?
.....Need a name. :Ta
Also don't bother looking under the spoiler in the profile section; it's pretty out of date. 9 u 6;;
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Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2014 10:42 am
UGH IDK I CAN'T DECIDE
Beautiful sassy nymph girl or (slightly) flamboyant/narcissistic nymph boy? Q A Q I could go andro, I suppose...
I WILL CONTINUE TO THINK ON IT;;;;;
I'm kind of second-guessing bismuth, too. :c I still like it, I'm just not sure if it fits well with what I'm envisioning for the Raevan's personality... OTL
Posted: Fri Oct 17, 2014 10:49 pm
HI CYNNYBUN
I'm not very good at critiques, but I wanted to let you know that I really like the notes you have for how Ian catches the nymph's soul. It's really original and I wasn't expecting it! It's sad, but also a really cute idea. C:
As for whether it should be male, female, or andro... Well, we do have Sevilin, who is a male "sea fairy," but he doesn't seem to be in play very much. I think a male nymph, especially with the overall feminine feel of your concept, would be really adorable and interesting. At the same time, a female would be gorgeous (ofc) and I'm sure both would just be super pretty. I don't think we have a lot of androgynous Raevans (Prajna? Are there any more?), so that would be a nice way to go in between, especially if they decided to be more fluid in how they felt every day. It could go either way, more feminine or masculine depending on the day and mood! That's a lot of freedom to play around with.
I haven't seen your updated bio for the male's personality, so I don't know why you feel that the bismuth might not fit just yet. I do think that fel essence would be gorgeous with a nymph soul, though! ouo Once you've fleshed out the male bio, maybe we can all try to brainstorm some new fel essence ideas (in case you do decide you'd like to try another type to go with it).
For now, the concept is very pretty and I'm intrigued to see what direction you go in concerning the raevan's gender!! 8D I guess the good news, also, is that you will probably end up having pre-determined flatsale essences to go with, which means you could even come up with several concepts for the same soul and tweak them as needed for future contests! Maybe one fel essence fits a girl more, the other a guy, etc etc.
Sorry I'm not very helpful, I just wanted to let you know that I've been watching your thread and really like it. It's pretty and I love the story of the nymph soul, and the fel essence is interesting! I hope someone else can give you a more concrete crit; if I wasn't always needing crits, myself, I would probably be of more help, haha.
Good luck with your concept! I can't wait to see more! /waves pompoms
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Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2014 1:22 pm
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Aaa, thanks so much for taking the time to look my stuff over, Logue! Especially when I didn't recruit you to; that's so nice of you. ; v ;
AND THANKS, I was really psyched for that when I wrote it, oh gosh. I was having a hard time because Ian isn't the type AT ALL to kill something on purpose, so he would have a hard time with that "requirement." And I didn't want it to just be happenstance, like the soul captures/kills itself, so I tried to find a middle ground that would be an easy solution but also feel real and evoke emotion. u v u
The gender thing is just KILLING me I'm so indecisive lol! I'm really kind of leaning toward male because I'm seeing a distinct lack of sassy, slightly narcissistic boys here! He would know he's gorgeous and flaunt it, which would provide a good plot device for growth (maybe...) Androgynous is a good option, for sure, since we're really lacking in that field, but I'm not entirely sure if I'd be comfortable with it. I'm afraid I would be so worried about offending or misrepresenting in some way, even with research, that I'm not sure I would be able to fully enjoy it. So that narrows it down to either male or female.
After counting the current and future Raevans, it looks like there are and will be more males than females once the current bottles grow! It was a surprise after seeing the influx of ladies lately lol. So I might just end up rolling a die because, either way, it'll tell me what I want. Either I'll be happy or disappointed!
As for the essence and stuff, I'm planning on working on that today! I actually went through and brainstormed things that could come from the essence and soul (separate from each other, in case I end up not being able to get this exact combo! I've just gotta go through and put it all in the thread now lol. I think after I do that I would probably combine it into a complete concept, so that I can understand the parts first! It also gives me time to figure out the gender. 9 u 6;;
AND YOU WERE TOTALLY HELPFUL WHAT I really appreciate everything you had to say! I'd definitely love it if you wanted to come back when I've firmed some stuff up! ; v ; Thanks again for taking the time to look through this pile of junk ahahaha...... OTL
Also congratulations again on getting your wolf baby! <333
Posted: Tue Oct 21, 2014 9:15 am
Possible Names for Male Nymph (Note: Yes, some of these are traditionally feminine names. I thought it would be nice to play off the "female" soul!)
Eden (EE-dən)- "Place of pleasure" in Hebrew, from the name of Adam and Eve's initial home. Tsvetan (tsveh-TAHN) - Derived from Bulgarian tsvet, meaning "flower, blossom." Nitzan (NEET-zahn) - "Flower bud" in Hebrew. Thales (THAH-ləs) - Derived from Greek thallo, meaning "to blossom." Ceallach (KEL-akh) - Irish, of uncertain origin. Traditionally said to mean "bright-headed." Eirian (AY-ree-ən) - "Bright, beautiful" in Welsh. Niamh (NEEV) - "Bright" in Irish. Phaedrus (FAY-drəs) - Latinized form of Greek Phaidros, which meant "bright." Anfisa (ahn-FEE-sah) - Russian form of Greek Anthousa, derived from anthos, "flower." Jinan (jee-NAHN) - "Garden" or "paradise" in Arabic. Tasnim (taz-NEEM) - "A spring in paradise" in Arabic. Enfys (EN-vis) - "Rainbow" in Welsh. Ephrath (ef-rath) - Means "fruitful place" in Hebrew.
(And more that I have on my laptop and can't remember right now. 9 u 6;;)
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Posted: Tue Oct 21, 2014 1:14 pm
Hope you don't mind me poking in, but I just had to say that I love the name Niahm. emotion_kirakira It's so airy and whimsical, a very fitting choice.
Posted: Tue Oct 21, 2014 1:35 pm
I love short names, so Eden immediately stuck out to me lol. don't listen to me both of my characters in this shop have four letter names also the meaning is cute with how the nymph was found in the meadow! /crawls back into her hole
also LOL I didn't even see Pidge post, YEAH WE SAW UR NAME LIST CYNNY
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Posted: Wed Oct 22, 2014 10:05 am
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LOL YOU GUYS Thanks for your input, though. ; v ; It'll probably come down to rolling a die between my favorites ugh I'm so decisive OTL
It also doesn't help that I keep finding more possibilities SOBS....
Posted: Thu Oct 30, 2014 5:25 pm
NYMPH + BISMUTH IS OFFICIALLY NAMED EDEN
- "Place of pleasure" in Hebrew. - Garden -> meadow -> nymph! - Meaning -> Ian had a deep attachment to the meadow that the nymph had created, and drew not only inspiration but comfort from it as well. -> His own Eden, both then and now.
- Wow damn son that's some deep s**t yo.
- Simple in spelling and sound, easy for Raevan to learn/say fresh out of the tank. - Also cute with Ian hee hee I'm so clever.
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Posted: Fri Oct 31, 2014 3:17 am
Awesome! Great reasoning behind the name choice. Can't wait to see the new profile! <3333
Posted: Thu Nov 27, 2014 12:30 am
Put up some other ideas for essences and souls! I've decided to really start focusing on what each element can bring to the Raevan, instead of going into extreme detail about a particular pairing. Given that sales are often for one pre-determined part of the pairing, I think my effort can be better utilized in this method.
I'd love to hear thoughts for any of them from anyone who's willing to give them! u v u <3
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Posted: Tue Jan 20, 2015 3:02 pm
Write-up from the last sale.
[.Gaia name] Cynnybun
[.Raevan Name] Eden
[.Fel essence] Shifting Bismuth
[.Fel essence description] Known as a particularly stable poor metal, bismuth is relatively common. This particular piece of bismuth is crystalline and exhibits the characteristic rainbow sheen when light reflects off its surface, but is also very different from the many others in existence. Its shape is constantly changing, shifting, like a restless child who cannot sit still. It is constantly reabsorbing and growing new crystals, and never ceases in its almost obsessive movement. Due to its unusually high diamagnetism, it floats in its glass jar and seems to repel small objects that are placed near it.
[.Powers] NOTE: Eden would not start with all these powers unless she has a very high Magic stat. She would start with Fairy Ring (no transport) and a weak form of Force Fields, and then develop them and discover the others as she ages. Shape Shifting (Active): Eden is able to shift her shape and appearance. Larger changes take a lot of energy and she may need a significant meal afterward, so she favors maintaining smaller changes for longer periods of time. She is only able to change existing matter at any stage, which means she cannot make legs but can alter the appearance of her ribbon. However, a “tell” of some sort is always present. The most common are differences in eye color and a mismatch in movement patterns. After all, her own personality and habits cannot be perfectly disguised.
Force Fields (Active): As a result of the bismuth’s high diamagnetism, Eden is able to create small force fields. These are not so much defensive as offensive, used to push things and people away. As a Frei the force is small, coming across more like a nudge and its strength is relative to the weight of an object. As she grows, her power would increase and she may be able to throw extremely heavy objects long distances or manipulate the magnetic fields around objects other than herself.
Fairy Ring (Active): Eden can create small patches of flora by touching her hand or ribbon to soil or grass. She can create fairy rings by moving in a circle, or simply leave trails or patches otherwise. When she leaves a patch or ring, any surrounding plant life will be rejuvenated and brightened considerably. As such, she will often resort to using this power to this end, simply to brighten things up a bit. These flowers will eventually fade and disappear if not formed as a ring, and the effect on the environment will last a bit longer.
Fairy Transport (Active): By using previously-created fairy rings of her own design, Eden can teleport between them, with a small range at first. She cannot use naturally occurring rings or those created by fae, and these rings pose no danger to humans or others that may come across them. Without her aid, an explorer would be unaffected when touching or stepping into one of Eden’s rings. If she were to do so with them, paired transport might be possible with considerable focus. This takes quite a bit of energy, however, and she tries to avoid it as much as possible.
[.Personality] Eden is warm, friendly, and charismatic. She loves to socialize, and possesses a steady air of energy and life. In a gentle flow of constant motion, she habitually shifts her “weight” or moves her wings. She changes her mind often and has a constant need for novelty. If she deems anything boring, Eden will simply abandon it. She stops listening if she’s not concerned, and stubbornly resists any instruction that doesn’t interest her. Despite intimacy with friends, Eden inadvertently maintains some distance with others. She doesn’t grasp the “give-and-take” of relationships and is often chastised for being nosy or asking too many questions.
The nymph enjoys toying with others whether it’s flirting or harmless pranks. She’ll play coy and deny anything, but it’s all in good fun and she does know when to stop. Unfortunately, she often uses these methods to manipulate others and get her way. Eden is hedonistic; she’s out for herself and will do whatever she wants whenever she wants.
Eden favors those she considers beautiful and adores luxury. She is vain, taking great care in her appearance despite feeling confident. She is extremely critical of others’ appearances, and often invites herself to fix them. She knows, however, not to be rude if it’s undeserved, and will only vocalize her criticisms if asked or provoked. She’s always honest, but tries to be gentle. Unfortunately, being judgmental leads to lots of gossip and secretive chatter. It’s rarely mean-spirited but still a nasty habit that Eden needs to break.
[.Writing Sample]
GUARDIAN APPLICATION SECTION NAME : Ian Taylor Flynn. GENDER : Male. AGE : Thirty-one. OCCUPATION : Self-employed florist. His shop, Thistle Do Nicely, is small but is luckily located ona very well-traveled street in downtown Barton. RACE : Human – Irish descent. LIKES : Design, color, flowers, music, animals, reading, and sleeping in late. DISLIKES : Crowds, severe weather, bad smells, disorder, being the center of attention, and complete darkness and/or silence. LOOKS : Wiry in build, Ian stands at around 5’10” with broad shoulders and long limbs. His skin is far with a light sprinkle of freckles across his cheeks and shoulders. He spends time outside when he can, but can’t seem to tan unless he’s burned. His caramel brown hair is often boyishly messy and has a red hue when in direct sunlight. Ian’s eyes are a light hazel color that leans more toward green than gold. Usually, he can be found smiling. His sense of style is usually simple and comfortable but tailored and well-fitted, given that he works most days.
PERSONALITY : Ian's feelings dictate almost everything he does. Their accuracy varies, but he trusts them as a doctor would his instruments. Because of this, Ian is heavily influenced by and aware of things around him. For example, he is often quick to pick up on tensions between others and becomes anxious.
Ian is an artist at heart, sensitive and friendly and highly in tune with his world. Underneath that friendly exterior, Ian is a very emotional person, but can be difficult to get to know because of social anxieties. He is pleasant and personable when conducting business, and he enjoys being around others, but you'll have to work if you want to get closer. However, it is easy to see that Ian is kind and gentle. He is a loyal friend, and won't hesitate to help when he feels he is needed. He is more likely to wait until approached, but if the situation is serious he has no problems being proactive.
He also has a strong set of moral values, but they may not always be in accordance with society's rules. He trusts his gut intensely, and will often have a hard time going against it. Ian's goals are more centered on personal fulfillment than material accomplishments; his main reason for opening his shop was to be able to do what he wanted for a living his own way. That's not to say Ian isn't concerned with money, it's just not his main motivation.
HISTORY : Ian grew up with his parents and sister in the suburbs of Barton with two dogs and two cats. His parents bought a modest two-story home and Ian was born shortly afterward. He was cherished and loved, nearly spoiled, but soon was taught to work for what he wanted. He drew on everything, and enjoyed playing outside. He especially loved helping his mother with the garden, with all the different flowers. His younger sister Caroline came along when Ian was seven, but she proved to be much more serious than her older brother and preferred reading over horseplay. Ian was confused at first, having been the center of his parents' attention for so long, but grew to care deeply for Caroline.
In college, he majored in botany and business, determined to become a florist after years of entertaining his love of plants. He was fascinated by the beauty of flowers and the reactions they provoked in others. He got through school with a decent GPA and a low amount of debt, thanks to hard work on scholarships. After a few years of working various jobs, he now owns a small flower shop underneath a two-bedroom apartment in downtown Barton. Ian has started to notice a lack of companionship in his life, but romantic relationships are difficult. After providing flowers for a Lab party, Ian has taken an interest in Raevans; he believes he can provide a stable and supportive home, and single-parent adoption is rare.