Welcome to Gaia! ::

Naruto: The Path of the Shinobi

Back to Guilds

A Naruto Roleplay 

Tags: Naruto, Roleplay, Ninja, Jutsu, Shinobi 

Reply Workshop #2
Crystal Release

Quick Reply

Enter both words below, separated by a space:

Can't read the text? Click here

Submit

iAkura-kun

Prophet

PostPosted: Fri Apr 12, 2013 7:09 pm


Crystal Element (Kurisutaru: Crystal)
Crystal, Colorful, Tough


User Image



description: This bloodline utilizes the ability to turn anything into crystal by combining earth and lightning elements. The element turns to crystal immediately as the hand signs are completed. The crystal is broken by taijutsu from a higher rank. Ninjutsu does not break it. This crystal is very strong and is hard to be broken by someone the same rank. The color of the crystal depends on the color of the users chakra. Also the users eye color is the color of their chakra color which is the color of their crystals.

Rules:
• Must have Doton//Raiton elements
• Can be electrically charged to enhance power


Ability: This clan can turn anything into crystal by combining earth and lightning elements. Jutsu's are listed below. All jutsu's are more powerful and better when higher rank. The higher the rank the stronger the density of the crystal. If someone is higher rank then the user of crystal then it can be broken. The same rank can break the crystal but with much effort.

Crystal Manipulating Chakra Consumption
Max size of crystal manipulated: baseball
Chakra Consumption: Academy Student Jutsu

Max size of crystal manipulated: Chair (diameter of a circle)
Chakra Consumption: Genin jutsu

Max size of crystal manipulated: Minivan
Chakra Consumption: Chunin Jutsu

Max size of crystal manipulated: Semi with back part
Chakra Consumption: Jounin Jutsu

Max size of crystal manipulated: Small house
Chakra Consumption: S-rank jutsu

Technique List

Crystal Dragon Jutsu:
Description: The user makes handseals and turns any element into a crystal dragon that can't fly but slides across the ground like a snake. (Size depends on rank)

Crystal Coffin Jutsu (Chunin):
Description: The user makes handsigns and small crystals come up from the earth and shoot towards the opponent quickly. If the opponent doesn't or cannot evade then they will be encased in crystal only to be let out by strong taijutsu or the crystal user. (Cannot kill someone with this jutsu. Also a technique that preserves the body that is encased)

Crystal Shuruken (Genin):
Description: Sharp crystal shuruken form from the air or any element. They can be shot from the air or thrown after creation.

Crystal Barrier:
Description: A large crystal barrier is formed. The barrier is like a big dome over the earth and it can't be dug under because the crystal goes under ground as well. (Depending on rank is how big it is.) If you are genin then a barrier large enough to hold a person. S-rank or kage miles of land can be covered with this barrier.

Crystal Blades (Genin):
Description: Crystal forms on the back of the users arm creating a blade that is very sharp. They run up the forearms.

Crystal Hexagon Disks (Genin):
Description: A large crystal snowflake like disk forms on the finger tips of the users spread out hand for the user to throw and cut the enemy or if shattered, pieces of crystal stab into the target. The disks density and size vary with rank.

Crystal Prison Jutsu (Chunin):
Description: Spikes shoot from the earth and create a tee-pee-like prison around the target.

Crystal Gyrodes (Genin):
Description: Bullet sized crystals form on the users finger tips and shoot from the fingers like bullets. (Like what Kimimaru used against Gaara with his bones, but these are crystals.)

Crystal release: Crystal Instantaneous (Genin):
Description: When performing this technique, the user does a single seal, and the user disappears leaving almost microscopic pieces of crystal that sparkle in their place. The maximum the user can travel is a radius of 1 mile from where they are standing, but they must be able to visualize the area in their head. This technique can be used in escaping combat, and also to travel to some extent. However, when this is used to escape combat, this cannot be used when the user is attacked or is attacking.

Crystal Release: Crystal Armor (Genin):
Description: The user controls the crystal to move over their skin giving them crystal hard armor. This protects against oncoming weapons and taijutsu. The armor is more easily broken with ninjutsu but does protect against ninjutsu somewhat. The crystal also slows down the user when it is over their skin.

Crystal Release: Crystal Spikes (Chunin):
Description: The user makes the appropriate handseals then slaps their hands on the ground. Spikes of crystal 5 feet tall will shoot from the earth to stab into the opponent and will stay above the ground. The downside is the crystals shoot from the earth coming from the user so the opponent can see the oncoming attack. The crystal can only shoot up from the earth in the user's field of vision.

Crystal Release: Crystal Fists (Genin for crystal and strength of RPC):
Description: The user covers their fists in thick crystal to enhance the strength of their punch and the damage.

Crystal Release: Crystal Leg (Genin for crystal and strength of RPC):
Description: The user cover's their leg in thick crystal just as they are about to kick their opponent increasing the damage, speed, and strength.

Crystal Release: Crystal Senbon (Genin):
Description: The user makes handseals then waves their hand in front of them and crystal senbon form in the air in front of the user and float in front of them until they release them to send them flying towards the opponent. They can either be focused to one point or wide spread but can only be shot in the user's field of vision.

Crystal Style: Crimson Fruit (Genin):
Description: The user chooses an ally then makes one handseal and crystal fruit shape shield is formed around the ally. This jutsu protects the ally when they are unable to fight for themselves and the crystal style user is still in combat. This shield can be broken only by taijutsu that is higher in rank then the crystal style user, the death of the crystal style user, and when the crystal style user releases the technique.

Crystal Style: Wild Dance of Shuruken (Chunin):
Description: The user jumps into the air or stays on the ground and makes handsigns. A sort of aura of the user's crystal color will fly wildly around them. Then when the user flails open their arms the aura flys out and shoots hundreds of shuruken in a wide range at their opponent. (If the user jumps in the air and performs the technique they are able to float in the air until the technique is completed.)

Crystal Style: Arrow of Light
Description: This technique can only be activated when the user is in a near death state and are very low on chakra. (They have to be seriously damaged.) The user goes into a furious rage and becomes engulfed in chakra and their pupils turn completely to chakra. The user can stay on the ground or float in the air momentarily. The user makes the handseal and lines of chakra form around the user creating a 2 pyramid looking thing that is stacked upside down on each-other around the user. The user can be protected from very high ranked techniques while in this state. Then a beam of chakra shoots from the point in front of the user and the beam can do damage on the opponent enough to almost kill them but if the opponent is higher in rank the less damage it will do. After the technique is completed almost all chakra will be depleted and the user cannot attack any further and most likely the user will pass out.

Head of this Kekkei Genkai: Nomiya Yasashii (Hinote Tosatsu)
2.
3.
4.
5.
 
PostPosted: Fri Apr 12, 2013 7:32 pm


[ Reserved ]

iAkura-kun

Prophet


iAkura-kun

Prophet

PostPosted: Fri Apr 12, 2013 7:34 pm


Before moving on with the bloodline, I would like to work on the rules and such of the clan, discuss what can break the crystals and how much chakra will it take to mold them, and if the user can actually transfer his lightning chakra to give it lightning properties and their earth chakra to make them stronger.  
PostPosted: Fri Apr 12, 2013 7:40 pm


It's not a clan. Also, you should pull the original bloodline from the bloodline list. It's easier to revamp a bloodline if we can actually see what we're working with.

On a side note, PM me about where we left off on that senbon taijutsu. I'd like to get that finished up.

Luo1304
Captain

4,600 Points
  • Signature Look 250
  • Treasure Hunter 100
  • Peoplewatcher 100

iAkura-kun

Prophet

PostPosted: Fri Apr 12, 2013 8:02 pm


Luo1304


Alright, made the change to the name, added the bloodline itself; I guess we're ready to work on it now.
PostPosted: Sat Apr 13, 2013 9:51 am


Crystal Strength: I'd actually like to reduce or remove the taijutsu aspect of this, and definitely reduce the ninjutsu aspect. Having strong crystals makes sense at times, for such things as making weapons, but having them practically invincible is rather overpowered. The crystals should have the strength of their jutsu rank, possibly a little more in the case of ones that need the extra strength.

The ninjutsu side is interesting, in that the crystals seemingly have the ability to disperse ninjutsu. I'm not sure on it though. Diving the strength between physical impact and energy could make for an interesting effect though.

Electric Charge: As I stated in Q&A, users do not, and should not, have the inherent ability to charge their crystals. A jutsu should always be required. What I'd like to consider though, is how much charge can be held, and what effect is gained from it. Is it as simple as zapping the target, or does it take on aspects of the jutsu it's charged with? An efficient charging method would be to charge lightning chakra into the jutsu/crystal in the form of chakra points, and have a maximum number of points according to rank of jutsu, or size of crystal. Another considerable point is whether the crystals should inherently absorb enemy ninjutsu on contact. What happens when a crystal is overcharged should also be noted.

Manipulation: I'm not sure if I like this feature or not. On one hand it's quite fun, on the other, it can easily become quite OP. Especially when you consider the ridiculous sizes of crystal described that can be manipulated. If this aspect is kept, it should definitely be reduced and given stronger limitations and description.

I've been meaning to completely redo the jutsu for likely a couple years now, so I'm not even going to comment on those just yet.

Hinote Tosatsu
Vice Captain

Eloquent Lunatic

Reply
Workshop #2

 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum