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 Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2013 5:55 pm
Go Outside
You lie here, sad eyes unloving and deep.
You stay withing your hearts protective keep.
I see you here alone and afraid.
Your life on hold, your existence delayed.
"Come outside with me"
"There is life to enjoy."
There's laughter and love
The world is your toy.
You look up at me
With tears in your eyes
You look like pure sadness
Like the last star in the sky
Come outside with me.
You will have fun you see
Take your soul out of its cup and always remember
To never give up.
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Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2013 11:34 am
Warm as your Heart
I would hold you until the end of the storm
I would hold you until time breaks
I would hold you, Your hearts so warm
When I don't hold you my soul aches
I stand in the cold
I stand alone
I stand until the world turns old
When I don't hold you my soul is stone
I would stand with you
I would stay until the world has past
I would hold you until the world is through
If I am without you then this moment is my last.
I will stay for you until you know
I will stay for you until the end of the storm
I will stay for you until the very end of woe
I am here to hold you, Your hearts so warm
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Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2013 1:09 pm
Wow so heart warming in a way. In other words you're saying how when you are not with that person you feel cold and empty right. I love how you put so much passion into your poems it is truly inspirational
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Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2013 1:18 pm
Thank you, it really means a lot to me. I am happy you liked it.
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Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2013 1:22 pm
Your welcome I'm just happy that I get to witness your genius in action and that's what it is genius I don't think anything I will ever write compare to one of your poems
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Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2013 1:30 pm
Thank you so much. Yes you will right as well as I because you wan't to. If you wan't to and put time and effort into it you can do nearly anything....plus I am not very good XD You should see some of the work that my friends right.
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Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2013 1:38 pm
Thanks but take your own advice as well don't underestimate yourself cool
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Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2013 1:41 pm
smile
is there anything you would like me to right? I am always on the lookout for materiel to use.
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