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Schizophrenic_Cupcakes

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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2012 11:19 am

I absolutely LOVE the plot!
Is there a way to get at least every character intertwined into the plot?
I do agree with Angel, it does need some shortening.
However, a lot of the more experienced roleplayers enjoy lengthy storylines.
Perhaps when it gets posted into the ball place a synopsis below it for the younger or far for lazier Gaians?

Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2012 6:08 pm

Schizophrenic_Cupcakes

I absolutely LOVE the plot!
Is there a way to get at least every character intertwined into the plot?
I do agree with Angel, it does need some shortening.
However, a lot of the more experienced roleplayers enjoy lengthy storylines.
Perhaps when it gets posted into the ball place a synopsis below it for the younger or far for lazier Gaians?

This could work actually, but we still need to make a few changes^^

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Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2012 6:44 pm

Instruments:

1. Violin
2. Electric Guitar
3. Trumpet
4. Drum
5. Saxophone
6. Flute
7. Oboe
8. French Horn
9. Clarinet
10. Banjo

Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2012 11:50 am

Sorry it took forever and sorry it kind of sucks, but I was having
a hard time shortening it while putting in other details. And we obviously need to go
over the day plans a little more...

Not my best work. -n- sorry

Well, edit number two is up so read on. I got rid of some of the less important sentences.

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