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 Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 9:51 am
Mazele Good boy Yuuki Mazele Good boy Yuuki I made edits, so I asked Mazele to look at the profile again Where, per say, did you get this training? Do you have it on record that you've done it? The last time I saw your character post was being captured by marines. Linkage please to where you did this training, or it didn't happen. I would edit my bio soon or later.is had something to do with my past. I had better see some quality writing there, lots of detail and length. Otherwise, I don't think it's fair to really say that you can "magically" get stronger from just editing your biography. this is so gonna eat my brain, but I would try my best to came out with something...
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 11:46 am
Your character is basically a rip off of Zoro... Only 3 years younger (apparently)
1: you can't master that style in such a short time... Even Zoro didn't FULLY master it in the years he spent practicing with a heart wrenching guiding purpose to drive him forward.
2: what do you mean by 'ranging from artillery'? meaning he's a weapons master at everything? at 16 years old, he's not mastering crap...
3: every ability you have you stole from Zoro, Zoro created his own attacks, meaning you can damn well do the same, not just copy and paste from wiki.
So here's what you need to do...
MAKE YOUR OWN CHARACTER
No exceptions
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 11:47 am
Ichigo The Bunny Your character is basically a rip off of Zoro... Only 3 years younger (apparently) 1: you can't master that style in such a short time... Even Zoro didn't FULLY master it in the years he spent practicing with a heart wrenching guiding purpose to drive him forward. 2: what do you mean by 'ranging from artillery'? meaning he's a weapons master at everything? at 16 years old, he's not mastering crap... 3: every ability you have you stole from Zoro, Zoro created his own attacks, meaning you can damn well do the same, not just copy and paste from wiki. So here's what you need to do... MAKE YOUR OWN CHARACTERNo exceptions Nope not gonna happen biggrin
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 11:49 am
Good boy Yuuki Ichigo The Bunny Your character is basically a rip off of Zoro... Only 3 years younger (apparently) 1: you can't master that style in such a short time... Even Zoro didn't FULLY master it in the years he spent practicing with a heart wrenching guiding purpose to drive him forward. 2: what do you mean by 'ranging from artillery'? meaning he's a weapons master at everything? at 16 years old, he's not mastering crap... 3: every ability you have you stole from Zoro, Zoro created his own attacks, meaning you can damn well do the same, not just copy and paste from wiki. So here's what you need to do... MAKE YOUR OWN CHARACTERNo exceptions Nope not gonna happen biggrin lol then you can quit the guild xD No one's above the rules. If you're not willing to put effort into making a real char, then you're wasting everyone's time who is.
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 11:52 am
Let me tell you something I did not copy anything from wiki, well maybe some parts.But I had stopped watched one piece for more then a year and I totally had no idea what happening to it now.Nor do I know zoro technique. Dude check my previous battle log, other then 36 ho do pa other was own creative moves! Wait another 10 years kid! biggrin pew pew
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 11:59 am
Good boy Yuuki Let me tell you something I did not copy anything from wiki, well maybe some parts.But I had stopped watched one piece for more then a year and I totally had no idea what happening to it now.Nor do I know zoro technique. Dude check my previous battle log, other then 36 ho do pa other was own creative moves! Wait another 10 years kid! biggrin pew pew Really so... You didn't just copy and paste all your attacks from this wiki page here?: http://toriko.wikia.com/wiki/Toriko/Abilities_and_Powers
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 12:01 pm
Ichigo The Bunny Good boy Yuuki Let me tell you something I did not copy anything from wiki, well maybe some parts.But I had stopped watched one piece for more then a year and I totally had no idea what happening to it now.Nor do I know zoro technique. Dude check my previous battle log, other then 36 ho do pa other was own creative moves! Wait another 10 years kid! biggrin pew pew Really so... You didn't just copy and paste all your attacks from this wiki page here?: http://toriko.wikia.com/wiki/Toriko/Abilities_and_Powers Well other then toriko power biggrin but is gonna been remove anyway.so yeah.no point quarrel peace out.
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 12:08 pm
Good boy Yuuki And together with a custom dual which absorb Haki and fire out Haki bullet. No haki.
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 12:09 pm
Mika Aida Good boy Yuuki And together with a custom dual which absorb Haki and fire out Haki bullet. No haki. is reserved for the grand line.
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 12:12 pm
Good boy Yuuki Mika Aida Good boy Yuuki And together with a custom dual which absorb Haki and fire out Haki bullet. No haki. is reserved for the grand line. Take it off until your character gets to the Grand Line, please.
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 12:15 pm
Is there anymore thing you guys wasn't satisfied with?Tell me I would remove it immediately.
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 12:18 pm
As previously stated by Ichigo the Bunny, it's unreasonable for your character to have learned all of Zoro's attacks in two years. For now, try limiting yourself to two or three of his beginner attacks and you can learn more in character.
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 12:19 pm
Mika Aida As previously stated by Ichigo the Bunny, it's unreasonable for your character to have learned all of Zoro's attacks in two years. For now, try limiting yourself to two or three of his beginner attacks and you can learn more in character. I remove the whole thing.
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 12:25 pm
Not only removing the skill but I edit some of it too.check it out I bet this would satisfied each and everyone of you.if there is still something else tell me I would so somthing about it.
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 12:38 pm
Good boy Yuuki Not only removing the skill but I edit some of it too.check it out I bet this would satisfied each and everyone of you.if there is still something else tell me I would so somthing about it. Looks good to me.
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