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Vanna1994

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 26, 2011 3:25 pm


Two of my male oc's ten years younger making them 7 and 11. The 11 year old is laying down the 7 year-old is ontop of him. Having lower body troubles.. and angle troubles..
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-109.jpg

Except these ones, there just catching up in case anyone is actually interested in looking at any of my art: (from most recent, to least recent or so)
Last one I did, never finished updateing it..
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-103.jpg

http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-101.jpg Never finished background.

http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-92.jpg Never updated the one with his face, but I cant stand how his face turned out. I love drawing his hair though ^^

http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-85.jpg I named him Jayce xd

and thats all I want to post sweatdrop
PostPosted: Tue Apr 26, 2011 3:53 pm


awsome art!! well i looked at them all, and you need hand practice, but they're all awsome drawings!! biggrin
and as to the first pic you asked bout feedback i think. well i think it's nice, the one on the left looks awsome, so does the one on the right, but his back is wrong. it either needs to be trimmed down and have that arch thingy next to the head, or reporportioned. depending on his position. im not sure bout the angle though. looked fine if it was drawn from a bit of an upward angle. then all youd need to do is shift the one on the left a bit to look normal. but overall it seemed like a perfectly wonderful pic(s) 3nodding

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 26, 2011 6:13 pm


The ever pain in the butt hands xd
For that one, I'm just kinda guessing on how much of the lower body is actually seen sweatdrop I'm really not sure on that.

Thank you blaugh
PostPosted: Tue Apr 26, 2011 7:50 pm


is better then i can hand draw... i adore the first one...

but yes hands need some tweeking and the wrists just to make it seamless..

there are awesome tutorials and such on deviantart if it helps ^.^

http://manic-goose.deviantart.com/art/Hand-Tutorial-3-73112264?q=boost:popular hand drawing tutorials&qo=13

http://cedarseed.deviantart.com/art/Big-Guide-to-Drawing-the-Body-15014442?q=boost:popular hand drawing tutorials&qo=18

http://nk-chan.deviantart.com/art/mini-hand-tutorial-68320552?q=boost:popular hand tutorials&qo=11

http://dersketchie.deviantart.com/art/Hand-Tutorial-197512432?q=boost:popular hand tutorials&qo=39

http://moni158.deviantart.com/art/Drawing-hands-and-tips-182278160?q=boost:popular how to draw hands&qo=22

some random ones I found... The second link and the last link are 2 of my favorites. I threw the others in to show variety as well as poses for hands for a better idea of how they can or should look ^.^

Hope that helps... And thank you, you have given me an idea to update this thread and one of my own guild ^.^

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 27, 2011 3:55 am


umm.. Your welcome xd

The first one is different for me in a few ways, I normally dont have drawings that are 'cute'. The fact that they are younger kids will be hard too

Thanks for the tutorials, will have to check them out more later (snuck on for a few minutes, suppose to be geting ready for school)
PostPosted: Sat May 07, 2011 1:14 pm


you draw good!
you draw better than me. :3

ii_SM3XXI


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PostPosted: Sat May 07, 2011 3:57 pm


ii_SM3XXI
you draw good!
you draw better than me. :3


Thanks ^^
But yoiu shouldnt put yourself down like that (Im one to talk, I tend to do that too when I see incredibly awesome art sweatdrop )
Just keep practicing wink
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