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 Posted: Wed Feb 16, 2011 4:57 pm
 Bronze
| Taijutsu / / Genin / / Free Agent / / 40 credits |
Charging toward the Bunshin Bronze tightened his grip on his shield as it started charging toward him as well. He found it odd the Bunshin would try to take him head on and when it turned to take cover just before they met in close combat he wasn't to surprised. Thinking fast Bronze cut quickly to the broad side of the cover the girls clone took and charged full force, clinching the shield tight he reared far back then BOOM! With all his might he slammed the shield into the stone slab crashing threw and hopefully the clone as well. With Bronze possessing the strength of a Chuunin (taijutsu benefit) and having the hard metal shield to do the smashing the stone slab didn't stand much chance, and the clone was very unlikely to see this coming so her reacting in time to safe herself was unlikely to Bronze.
While Bronze was smashing threw the stone slab Reiko came bursting threw the smoke behind him ready to cut him down. As he rolled onto his back after breaking threw the stone slab he noticed her. He started bringing his shield up but it was going to be close, even if he did block the first blow he would only be able to roll away from a second, then a third would do some harm. Then poof, the girl exploded in a strong gust of wind and a kunai flew just past Bronze. Confused for a second Bronze looked up and saw his clone with a big grin on its face as if to say " Haha thought I let ya down huh? Well I didn't."
Bronze then chuckled to himself and stood brushing the dust off him from crushing the slab and grabbing his hammer. He looked around as the smoke started to dissipate and thought. "Doubt she stayed in there and since her clone came after me I bet she is hiding somewhere. Hmmm This is going to get tricky. "
[ Seeing as Bronze is granted the strength of a Chuunin, used a steel shield to bash the slab with and was charging I don't see why I wouldn't be able to make it threw the slab.
In my head your second clone would be coming out of the cloud as I bashed threw the stone stab since she had to run threw the smoke while I was running toward your first clone. Then she ran straight after the real me leaving the her back open to a attack from my clone. Since you said she charged straight for me I don't see how she would have even noticed my clone, or for that matter block or dodge the Kunai it threw at her.I also didn't mean for that to seem like a Auto kill if think of a way to save your bunshin then go for it. The way I wrote it just seemed cool so I figured I would wright it that way and then let you know I am no trying to auto kill your clone.The pic helped btw.)
" Because dwarfs are ninja to."
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Posted: Wed Feb 16, 2011 7:50 pm
(( Quote: Then poof, the girl exploded in a strong gust of wind and a kunai flew just past Bronze. Very definitely a god-mod. Because I'm not in the mood to argue or wait for you to edit I will let that slide and post anyways... Please don't do that again though... )) Reiko Bunshin heard footsteps in her direction, it seemed he had started to match her charge and wasnt stopping. Perhaps he was planning to confront her and get things over with? Even so, 20 feet was still a reasonable distance, and he was carrying a lot of weight. RB waited until he got close, it wasn't long, then jumped out to the side of the rock and slashed with her blade in one big motion. Her blade connected with nothing however, as the man had not done as predicted. Instead of running around the rock and attacking her, he ran through the rock. Once again caught in a temporary cloud of dust and nits of rock, Reiko bunshin ducked behind another rock. It was unlikely that she would be seen anyways, since the other dwarf was focused on the other Reiko bunshin. Reiko saw the dwarf charge into view straight towards the rock the bunshin hid behind. So she burst from her hiding place sprinting at full speed towards them. When she had cut the distance by half, she threw two kunai followed by a blur of handseals and the words "Yadama furooseigyo" A burst of wind chakra reinforced the speed of the two projectiles right as the two dwarves started casually conversing. One kunai each... At this distance, they would probably still be able to dodge or more likely block, but if they did she would manipulate the kunai so they curved around the shield or towards where they jumped. As the kunai flew, Reiko continued running alongside the smoke cloud towards the opponents. She would have to think fast depending on how things turned out. ((in retrospect, I should have chosen better jutsu.))
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Posted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 1:39 am
Quote: The Bunshin ran towards the dwarves as if to attack, and then at the last minute jumped behind the rock.
You said at the last minute, my dwarf wasn't standing still while ran toward cover he was chasing after you. You would not have had time to signal, then counter attack. I would have smashed threw the slab a few seconds after you took cover. You make it seem like it took me almost a full minute when I started charging you the post before you ran for cover. It seems to me your post isn't very accurate on the amount of distance that would be covered by my dwarf chasing you. I also don't remember that 20 feet being there the first time I read it. I could have misread it, but I highly doubt I did.
Also it is not a God mod if you read my entire post you would have seen me say I wasn't trying to Auto kill your clone, it looked cooler written that way and if you find a way to counter and safe your clone go for it. Not to mention all my clone did was throw a kunai at your clones blind spot.
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Posted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 3:16 am
((I will do something about the time lag, though the 20 feet was indeed there the first time. I did not think of him as running towards her already when I read your post.
How is making the clone burst into smoke as a kunai flew by not a godmod? While it was indeed well written, and would work well in a story, the difference between throwing at the bunshin and destroying the bunshin is a big one. I'm letting you get away with it because the bunshin was probably going to die anyways, and would rather not argue over it and raise tempers. If you wan't to prove that it wasn't a god-mod you can bring in the ref again, though I'm not sure it's necessary.
Post edited))
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Posted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 12:57 pm
Hikaro_rin How is making the clone burst into smoke as a kunai flew by not a godmod? While it was indeed well written, and would work well in a story, the difference between throwing at the bunshin and destroying the bunshin is a big one. I'm letting you get away with it because the bunshin was probably going to die anyways, and would rather not argue over it and raise tempers. If you wan't to prove that it wasn't a god-mod you can bring in the ref again, though I'm not sure it's necessary. Post edited))
{{If I may, I would submit that very few things are actually god-mods when it comes to hitting a clone and destroying it. Not that I support a CONSTANT use of this method, but if you look at Martin and mine's fight... anytime a clone was "destroyed", it was fair game for the other user, in their next post to give the clone an action or an ability to defend itself, or at least pull a draw with whatever was attacking.
So, rather then just claiming a god-mod, in your next post, feel free to give your clone an action before it was destroyed, but be realistic. In general, I try not to sweat clone destruction since in Naruto, they are normally, so easily dispersed and destroyed when placed up against a real shinobi.}}
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Posted: Fri Feb 18, 2011 9:55 am
Bronze
| Taijutsu / / Genin / / Free Agent / / 40 credits |
As Bronze smashed threw the slab the girls clone made it away safely with a counter. Noticing she wasn't taken care of he quickly rolled to his feet in a crouched stance. He couldn't see where the girl had gone but his clone did, it noticed the girl run and hide just after it let loose the kunai that killed a different bunshin. Gesturing to a slab the clone pointed out were the girl had ran to. Just as Bronze got the information the real Reiko burst from her hiding place letting loose two kunai a jutsu. As the kunai were sent speeding toward Bronze and his clone the drew there shields, but bronze had seen this jutsu before and knew better than to just try and block it, so just before there were going to collide they each ducked underneath the kunai and burst forward quickly under and past leaving the kunai behind. At the speed they kunai were moving and the speed Bronze and his clone were running in the opposite direction the Kunai should be left a good distance behind them keeping them safe from any of the small adjustments that could be made to the kunai's path.
Now both Bronze and his clone were charging toward the real Reiko, the clone how ever was keeping a eye on the slab that the bunshin was hiding behind while the real Bronze gave all his attention to the real Reiko. As the would come into close combat Bronze held his shield to block and incoming attack, then after he parried or there was no attack made he would swing his hammer toward the girls stomach. This would put them very close together and force the girl to take a step back for her to swing he sword with any effectiveness.
As the real Bronze would be making his first attack the clone would still be making his way toward the two and keeping a eye on the Reiko clone ready to stop any range attacks that the girl might try.
" Because dwarfs are ninja to."
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Posted: Wed Feb 23, 2011 10:07 am
((very sorry, I have kind of a full plate right now and can't really get to rp... I'll try to make a post this afternoon.))
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Posted: Wed Feb 23, 2011 2:46 pm
Please don't rush it, I am taking a break from gaia for a little minute. Butted head with gf's roommate, need a bit of time away from... well stuff.
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Posted: Sat Feb 26, 2011 5:35 pm
((sorry havik, I feel really bad. I can't really maintain two rpcs as well as participate in XRP so I'm taking a break from XRP. Hopefully I won't have to do anything more, and hopefully I will be able to return and have a rematch when s**t isn't piled so high.
So I either forfeit or we can call this a draw, your choice. sorry for ruining the fun.))
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Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 7:31 am
Don't be sorry, R.L. always come first. Just do me a favor and make sure when you get on gaia it is for fun and not because you feel like ya have to. Do that for me and it's a draw, but if I here anything like you getting on gaia for any other reason than you wanna do awesome ninja stuff I will steal all your credits Mwahahahahahahahaha heart
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