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PostPosted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 1:10 am


So since you are both pretty much there

Pump stations strained = The heart is over worked
A valve pops its cap = Heart attack
The red’n’blue white box = Ambulance
Keeps you in the gap = Keeps you in this current existance you have.

Hmm...In my form of thinking its pretty straight forward logic XD
PostPosted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 6:08 pm


Now let's (try to) do the rest! Are the rest of them as...uh...metaphorical as the first lone in that one is?

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 8:38 pm


They probally arnt as metaphorical, each line either means something or is trying to make a point either about sammy or sally
PostPosted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 7:02 pm


I think that from the fifth stanza onward is where I start to get a little bit vague on some of the lines.

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 11, 2011 9:09 am


Yeah the refference gets a lot looser in some.

"The great sky leap" is a refference to vegas (the skyline in the middle of the dessert)

Like "seven wasnt planned" Seven and eleven are "the craps" in the game craps. When you roll the craps you lose/ your turn is over.

"Two wheels a spinning" Could be slots and roulette

"minus 90 grand" is a big loss (Also a bridge in NJ which had a couple building issues and failures)

Basically the casino refferences is the start of where things start to really get out of hand. Rolling the "craps" basically talks about a big failure, the two wheels emphasise that things are going wrong in multiple areas, finally the 90 grand is a loss that is pretty much the sort that a addictive gambler can lose and well pretty much mess thier life up with. Which basically attributes to everything starts going wrong and sammy just cant keep up anymore...which leads to the next set of events.
PostPosted: Fri Feb 11, 2011 6:35 pm


This needs to be a rap song.

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 12, 2011 3:18 am


thedenomerator
This needs to be a rap song.


But there is no swearing voilence, guns, gold...?
PostPosted: Sat Feb 12, 2011 7:27 am


But those make the best rap songs, Sage.

Also, I LIVE in Vegas, and I would have NEVER picked that out of that out of that stanza sweatdrop Especially because the first thing I think of when gambling and seven are talked about is the very lucky 777 on slots.

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 12, 2011 8:02 pm


777 is vegas's form of 666, its the evil many people hope for.

But yeah it was totally in my mind when writing it. XD but the casino channel is one of the few channels we get in crew quarters.
PostPosted: Tue Feb 15, 2011 5:15 pm


It would so not be evil if I ever got it. Not that I've ever gambled. But if I did, I would totally not think it was evil.

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 15, 2011 9:45 pm


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It would so not be evil if I ever got it. Not that I've ever gambled. But if I did, I would totally not think it was evil.


Head to me room and grabs myVegas Casino cards...

Tropicana
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Amigo (Fiesta "aka stations henderson")
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Stations
MGM Mirage (Aria/Bellagio/Vdara/Grand/Signiture/mandalay/mirage/montecarlo/NYNY/luxor/excalibur/rivage/tunica)

I did a bit...but mainly the free play on my mission to collect casino cards.
PostPosted: Wed Feb 16, 2011 5:53 pm


Ya know, it wouldn't be a bad idea for me to join some of those casino clubs. They end up having some pretty good deals sometimes. Ma was part of some, and she'd get free buffets and stuff. And buffets = love.

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 16, 2011 8:36 pm


Yeah there are some good things on them, including birthday treats and such as well.
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