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 Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2011 4:15 am
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Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:32 pm
It was a good promo. I would just add who you beat for the title.
"Who, What, When, Where, and Why" When you are doing a promo ask yourself. did I cover all that?
Who am I? Who is my opponent.
What are we doing, or what did we do?
When are we facing, or when did we face?
Where did it happen, where will it happen?
Why...well that should explain it self. I enjoyed the promo very good job, and the entrance was good too. Keep it up!
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Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:50 pm
Thanks. Now that you mention it, having Major show a clip of just how he won the belt would have also been a nice little touch as well...for the benefit of those who might have missed the match, or just really enjoyed watching him make his opponent tap out!
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Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:56 pm
That. Or if some random person were to see it. That person would want to known as much info that they can get.
Who was it that the Major defeated? Was it an injured person? Or just a new guy? Or was it one of the greatest wrestlers in the world? It helps you out and your opponent. Your opponent, as you recognize that he has talent and skill, but helps you more, because you beat him.
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Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2011 7:07 pm
I'll definitely keep that in mind next time.
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Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2011 7:23 pm
Cool, cool.
Could you check my promo out? It has a little history lesson in it. Maybe give some advice.
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Posted: Mon Mar 28, 2011 5:01 pm
I did...it was rather enlightening. Could you possibly take a look at one of my recent matches, and the promo that followed, and give me your opinion? I'm experimenting with a heel turn...as world champion.
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Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2011 10:44 am
The promo was pretty good. I liked it. Very good beginning, then ending could be worked on just a little, but still effective. Reminded me of the betrayal kind of promo during the attitude era in wwf. My only advice would be try not to cuss. Everyone does it. Think about in wwe how many people really cuss? Not many and when they do, they make it mean something. Just a random. BITCHES, kind of deflates the opportunity. Such as you could seem like you about to cuss, but switch the world at the last second. Then you keep doing till something just makes you want to exploded. Such as you losing the title. Weither ift be because you were cheated or because you think you were "cheated". I love the catch phrase. Quote: "there's a damned good reason why I'm also known as 'The Master of Disaster', and that's because of the trail of carnage that I leave in my wake" It was a good match. Keep up the good work.
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