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Kaegoe

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 24, 2010 6:48 pm


((Okay I had a little muse the other day to start writing this here fic. It is something I wish to continue. Don't shoot me if it sucks. Though I would appreciate some feedback))

Chapter 1


The group of earthlings that traveled in the Disney Train walked along the clear path. All of them found it strange that the letter told them to come here, reading a name of a wise being, one of which none of them had heard of before. All of them had gotten so used to the magic paper reading the name of magic beings that at least a few of them knew of the origins of. This time not even the Disney fanatics knew anything of the name read. And Sora had never heard the name before. Unsure of anything, good or bad, they all agreed to keep their guard up.

Kyle, Joe and Sora ended up leading the group along the trail. Though none of them had their weapons summoned, two out of the three were scanning the area for whatever unknown this new world had to offer. The area they were traveling in seemed peaceful. Too peaceful. Which was one of the reasons the two Earthlings were so tense, after all the battles they'd been in, even the most beautiful place could be a trap. With a grassy plain that carried out as far as the eye could see. A few patches of white and purple flowers grew along the path.

"I wouldn't linger too far behind, if I were you," said James back to Dawn who had stopped to look at the flowers.

"Aw, okay," the dancer said with a pout. She stood up, but not before picking one from where it grew. Dawn put the plant to her nose as she ran to catch up with the others and walked with Sayrike.

Noelle watched Dawn and smiled a little, if Dawn didn't pick the flower, she probably would have. The agromancer turned and looked forward at the others. She was walking with James and Jenny. Louis, Jacob and Anthony brought up the last of the group. The rest of the ones that traveled with the group stayed at the train.

"Sooo... Does anyone know anything of this place other than the person we are to find- ACHOO!- Excuse me...." said Anthony as he rubbed his nose.

Kyle didn't look back as he answered the question, assuming the normal 'leadership' role, adding a little annoyance to his voice, "Nothing anymore than the last 20 times that question has been asked. Trust me, when we find out, we will be sure to tell you."

Sayrike sighed softly to herself at the two. The blue mage stayed relatively quiet during the whole time they had arrived. All this unknown that they were facing, she had to admit unnerved her as well, but she choose to hide it more than the others and just press forward.

Meanwhile, James was just as tense, if not more so than the others. The senses he gained from Fenrir were not picking up on the darkness he'd normally feel when he went to a world, but something else about the world made his senses tingle. Something was definitely off, he just couldn't put his finger on it.

"Hey, what's that?" Jenny asked pointing to something that was flying towards them, to the group's right.

The group looked in the direction the time mage pointed. All eyeing it curiously. Whatever it was it appeared to be circling them slowly as if it was about to land.

"Is that...." Joe spoke finally, "an airship?"

The Keyblader narrowed his eyes as the ship got closer he saw a couple of people waving from a balcony on the aircraft, he grinned a little as he recognized them.

"It is Kichi, and Kyla!" Noelle spoke up in place of Sora, she too recognizing the two as they waved down at the group. Kichi waving with both arms stretched out, while Kyla, a little more shyly with just one hand. The two were being joined by other Earthlings plus Riku and Nick.

The Disney Train group watched as the airship came in for a landing near their path. Which seemed like it took about six times the actual ten minutes for the Red Rose to land. After Leon got the ship landed and the platform for occupants to exit was lowered, the King's group started to move closer to the ship to greet their fellow Earthlings. Dawn ran ahead as she saw Amy leave the ship. Before Amy knew it, the dancer picked the white mage up in a massive hug and spun around in circles.

"Hogod!" Amy exclaimed unable to do much else but take the glomp.

Dawn let out a small laugh as she put her down and saying, "Hihi!"

The two groups exchanged their greetings with one another after several more minutes. Most less physical in greeting than the one Dawn had given Amy. Louis and Nick eyed each other in a silent greeting and acknowledgment of the other. Neither of them speaking to anyone of their previous meeting. Meanwhile, Anthony also eyed Nick for different reason. The bearded man couldn't put his finger on it, but he could of sworn he meet that young man from somewhere. Anthony shrugged a little as he let it slide and continued exchanging greetings with John.

"So, what are you guys doing here?" Kyle asked Kichi after things finally started to settle down.

"Looking for the King, what else?" Kichi answered, "Simba told us that the King went for a place called the Flower City. And the Red Rose lead us here."

"I see," the swallow-spear wielder responded then proceeded to tell of what they were looking for and all they had discovered, which had been very little in terms of discovery.

"When we were flying over head, we saw what looked like a palace north of here," spoke up Riku, "I suggest we go and check it out. If we can't find the king, or this Alue, perhaps someone there can lead us in the right direction."

"Sounds like a good as a plan as any," Sora agreed already moving with Riku in the pointed direction as the combined groups followed after.

The groups walked together for several hours. They saw a castle in the distance the castle Riku was talking about as they traveled along the path that was starting to get more rocky as they went along, a few of the less physical children were starting to feel themselves starting to tire, but pressed on.

Just before the large group reached the top of a rocky hill, Jacob stopped walking and started looking around them with a confused expression on his face.

"Is something wrong Jacob?" Dani asked after narrowly avoiding walking into Jacob's back.

"I thought I heard something," he responded his eyes still scanning the area.

"You heard it, too?" Kyle McKenna from the Red Rose, who had been walking with Dani, asked.

Amy was the next to speak up, wearing an expression of confusion and annoyance at not knowing what they were talking about, "What did you hear?"

"A voice," Jacob responded looking at Kyle to confirm if he heard the same thing before he continued to answer, "Someone was singing...." Jacob paused as if he was listening for something, "Actually, I take that back, there it is again."

Jenny looked at the two males curiously, before she started to focus on listening for the song that was being heard, but her ability to hear Heartsongs was failing her for this task, she could hear nothing except the Heartsongs of those around her. The time mage started to look over at the two boys. She opened her mouth about to say something, but got cut off.

"Ah, the voice! Make it go away!" Joe shouted, holding his head as he fell to his knees onto the ground.

"Joe!" Noelle cried, her voice full of concern as she kneeled by his side, "What is wrong?"

The fighter only shook his head, his voice unable to respond otherwise. Joe was soon joined on the ground with Kyle McKenna, Jacob and Anthony. The three of them holding their heads in a similar manor. The rest of the males, including the Keybladers and Ivalicians, were holding their heads as if they all had a massive headache. This left the group of girls staring and confused about the whole situation.

"Kichi," Kyla said as she placed a gentle hand on his arm, "What is happening to you guys?"

Kichi's shivered a moment at Kyla's touch, afterward his body tensed as if he had over come what had made everyone else fall. A sign that made Kyla sigh in relief. That relief was short lived when Kichi summoned his tonfa to his hands, a moment later swept his arm out and hit Kyla in the stomach his weapon.

"Kichi! Kyla!" Jenny shouted, her voice filled with both concern and confusion. What happened? Why did Kichi attack Kyla? Jenny started to run over to aid Kyla, only to narrowly dodge getting impaled on the spear that swept out in front of her. The flute wielder looked in horror that the one who used the weapon to attack her was none other than Kyle.

Amy stared at the confusion that had erupted among the group. She looked back and forth between all the men that were still holding their heads and the ones that were attacking. The white mage didn't know what over came them, she just knew she had to do something to stop them from hurting someone. With a heavy conscious Amy summoned her guns and aimed one at each Kichi and Kyle. Perhaps shooting them in the knee would snap them out of whatever possession took hold of them. Just as she was about to pull the triggers on her weapons, the gunner was hit in the back by a bullet fired by the hexagun wielder.

One by one the males were summoning their weapons and were glaring at the confused girls with narrowed eyes that all glowed an eerie color of gold. Maggie was at Kyla's side with a hand on the girls shoulder as she looked up at Louis and Kichi who stood over them both with their weapons ready to attack. The two moved forward in even steps at the two girls. Louis's rapier was covered with a veil of darkness as Kichi's charged a flare spell that exploded when he struck. Maggie managed to maneuver herself to grab Kyla and cover her from Louis's blade that struck along her side, but was unable to do anything about the explosion from Kichi's attack, that sent the two girls flying down the hill.

Meanwhile, Dani had her hands full with trying to evade the relentless attacks of Kyle McKenna and Jacob. The assassin kept her chakrams raised as Kyle moved forward with his weapons coming down on her, one after the other. Dani had backed up near the same edge that Kyla and Maggie had fell to. She was about to run to get herself away from the danger of falling when one of Jacob's throwing knives cut the side of her left leg. Due to the pain, the defense Dani was using fell, giving Kyle the perfect opportunity. The terramancer brought his katar down, slashing down the front of her chest. The katar came down in the earth in front of the girl, creating a spike of earth under the girl's feet, knocking the girl down the side of the edge.

Dawn did a dodge roll to avoid a strike of the hammer from John. Before she could rise to her feet, Dawn was immediately tied up by a pair of chains, courtesy of Nick. The wind user let out a scream as the Ivalician used the chains as a means to drain her of any fight she had in her.

Nearby Noelle and Sayrike, had their own struggle with Anthony and Joe who were combining their weapons and elements of wind and lightning to put them at the disadvantage. Both of them had already been hit with several of bolts of lightning and Joe's bo staff. Now Noelle and Sayrike were lucky they were both still standing now. Joe swept his staff out, tripping Noelle as Anthony came down on her with a slash charged with thunder.

All of the girls seemed defeated, including Jenny who had already taken multiple hits from Kyle's swallow spear. Alan was standing behind

the majority of fighting. His tome was open as he read various words from a spell. The tome glowed a crimson red.

"Let's end this..." Alan spoke as an explosive fire spell engulfed the battlefield in a cover of red fire and smoke.....
PostPosted: Sun Oct 24, 2010 7:26 pm


Heck yeah I'd shoot them in the kneecap. D< Out of love, of course. biggrin

Keep writing, Dawn-fayc, you got us all very in character. 4laugh Good writing! Good plot idea. o.o

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 24, 2010 7:36 pm


I guess I should take a page out of Amy's book.

Hogod.

That was awesome, although I rather do feel like a man of terrible standing. Can't wait for more!
PostPosted: Sun Oct 24, 2010 7:43 pm


Yeah This is a good fic. I am just sad that certain people had to fight with people that they were most close with.

LevDa


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PostPosted: Tue Oct 26, 2010 7:25 pm


Ayumu Koharu

"Sooo... Does anyone know anything of this place other than the person we are to find- ACHOO!- Excuse me...." said Anthony as he rubbed his nose.

Kyle didn't look back as he answered the question, assuming the normal 'leadership' role, adding a little annoyance to his voice, "Nothing anymore than the last 20 times that question has been asked. Trust me, when we find out, we will be sure to tell you."


Lol! I could totally see Kyle and I having that conversation. I do tend to ask the same question repeatedly... However, I'm curious... why did I sneeze? o.o;

Awesome job, Dawn! I was super surprised at the end when the guys turned on the girls! I feel so mean, haha! XD

Keep on writing, ma'am! I can't wait to read more!
PostPosted: Tue Oct 26, 2010 8:52 pm


YES. WRITE MORE. NAO.

And hey . . . Anthony . . . so why you beatin' me up, huh? *rolls up sleeves* You wanna go? Huh?

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 26, 2010 9:03 pm


Woah there, Popeye... I obviously have no control over my body at the moment. Why would I knowingly wanna beat you up? I don't have a death wish... <.< >.>
PostPosted: Tue Oct 26, 2010 9:16 pm


Hey, technically in this fic situation you have regained the pants . . . though this does not apply to any other situation, you still have to fight for them.

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VoLt189

PostPosted: Wed Oct 27, 2010 10:49 am


I would've totally obtained the pants on Sunday if you didn't shy away from my arm wrestling challenge... >.>
PostPosted: Thu Oct 28, 2010 12:40 pm


Chapter 2


'How....?' thought Noelle as she laid bruised on her side on the ground, 'how could this happen?'

The agromancer closed her eyes as she tried to think something else through the pain of burns and bruses she had received from the battle. She held onto her side flinching as she started to sit up. Noelle soon found out it was smarter for her just to lay on her side, using her elbow as a way to lift herself up and get a better look at the area around her. Smoke screened anything or anyone from her view. She could see a few small flames that were living off of what little green still remained on the hill.

Noelle let out another cry as she sat up once more, this time succeeding after much grief of pain. She reached into a pouch and pulled out a couple of seeds. The ground was dry due to the fire, but she prayed it would have enough moisture to grow. The agromancer created a small indent into the ground before she gently placed the seeds into the pocket and covered them with the earth. Noelle closed her eyes as she allowed her magic to reach out and aid the babies to grow and blossom. After several minutes, she opened her eyes. She was relieved that the manipulation worked. With a careful hand she reached out and took a cupped petal from the plant. Inside it held a nectar that she drank slowly. Noelle allowed the liquid run down her throat, as it went down she felt it work a magic of its own that eased the pain of her wounds. After the liquid was drank, she put down the petal and took out a couple of veils from her pouch. She proceeded to fill them both up with the same necture she had just drank. Noelle let out a small sigh after that task was done and she had both of them tucked away. Now with more strength, she stood up and scanned the area once more.

"Jenny? Kyla? Sayrike?" she called out, "Can anyone hear me?"

"Noelle?" a voice responded, followed by a few coughs by that same person.

"Amy!" Noelle ran over to the source to find her leaning over and treating Dani, with Dawn sitting nearby. Amy looked clear of the gun shot she had received from James and only had a few burns. Noelle could only guess that the white mage had healed herself before she found other two.

"Noelle," Dawn looked up at the girl with a slight smile, "Glad to see you are okay..." that smile faded as sadness filled her eyes, "I am guessing you haven't seen the others."

Noelle looked down as she shook her head in response, "I am afraid not."

"It is like this smoke is like a dammed fog," Amy commented, it was hard to tell if she was sad or angry due to the rough monotone of her voice, "If it were to be blown away, we might be able to see something."

Dawn sighed, "I could try to move it away, but I am afraid the fire would grow." the dancer turned towards the assassin who had received her final healing from Amy, "Think you can aid me with this Dani?"

"I-I'll try..." Dani said in a soft voice.

Dani narrowed her eyes as she reached a hand out towards the ground several yards away from the small group. A small rumbling could be heard, before a large geyser shot up into the air. The water shoot up into the air and acted like rain to put out what fire remained in the area. After several moments had passed and the flames were sure to be gone, Dani dismissed the giant sky shooting water gun.

Dawn stood up weakly, with her tessen summoned. She twirled in place a couple of times with the tessen in her right hand raised, before she let it move out in front of her slowly. The small dance summoned a gentle gust that washed across the area and blew what remained of the thick smoke away from the area.

Thanks to the clear view, they were able to spot Kyla who had Maggie's arm over her shoulder, carrying her up the side of the hill. The pictomancer looked more than relieved to see the others nearby. Noelle and Amy quickly made their way over to the two girls, Noelle gently helped Kyla place Maggie on the ground where Amy started to work her magic once more.

Noelle couldn't help but wonder just how much longer the white mage could keep up healing everyone one after the other like this. The agromancer took out one of the veils she filled just moments before and handed it to Kyla, who was holding her stomach where she was hit in the beginning of the battle.

Noelle was glad to see that everyone seemed to be in one place. They only needed to find-

"Oh no! Jenny!"

The shout caused all of the girls in the group to look in that direction. Dawn, Noelle and Dani ran towards the voice, they found Sayrike leaning over an unconscious Jenny. The time mage was covered in various cuts she received from Kyle's attacks along with several burns that covered most of her body. Noelle and Dawn sat down at Jenny's side as Sayrike was working to mimic several healing spells she had learned during their journey. Dawn too was working her wind magic to try and aid the cause. The wounds were healing slowly, causing Jenny to stir slightly. As the two girls were trying to work their magics, Amy came up behind them, after finished healing Maggie.

"Move over!" she commanded as she pushed her way past Dawn and Noelle.

Amy placed her hands above Jenny's body. She closed her hands as she started to concentrate. The gunner's hands started to glow a pink colored light, soon followed by Jenny's body glowing in a similar light. Before everyone's eyes the wounds were healing one by one, until Jenny appeared to be in an injure free status. It wasn't long before Amy's hands fell to her side weakly. After the long use of magic she was exhausted, more than she was willing to admit though she had fell against Dawn's shoulder and her brow was covered in sweat.

A soft sigh could be heard from Jenny's lips as the time mage slowly started to open her eyes. Looked up at the girls that were gathered around her all looking at her with worried eyes. Obviously worried about her. Jenny gave them her best weak smile, in attempt to ease their worries, but did little to ease hers, for the memory of what had happened just minutes before was still fresh in her mind, just like everyone else's.

"..So what now..?" Kyla asked after several minutes of silence had spread across the girls as they waited for both Amy and Jenny to recover their strength.

"What kind of stupid question is that?" Amy said, the irritation returning to her voice, "We go find those boys and bring them back with us."

"You serious?" Noelle asked, staring up at the white mage in shock, "We have no idea where they are. Sides that, you are in no condition to go anywhere. The sun is starting to set. I suggest we rest here until morning, before we wander into the unknown."

"I got Ethers," Amy said as she started to stand, "it shouldn't be too hard to find them. I have a strong feeling when we get to the castle, we should be able to find some answers. If you feel better resting while those boys are running around all berserk like, be my guest, but I'm going."

Noelle and Amy both stared at each other. Both of them obviously disapproving with the others method of rescuing their companions.

"Hey you guy!" Maggie spoke up, "We got the charms, remember. Maybe we can use them to find them."

Without any protest from the group, Maggie started to concentrate on the Trinity Charm on her wrist. With the images of their faces in her mind, she started to call out to them in her mind. Though the response she got back was not exactly beneficial to any of them as the sound of static could be heard in all the girl's heads.

"Ahh, turn it off!" Dani shouted in pain as she held her head, as if on command the static stopped, earning a relieved sigh from the assassin.

"Well, there goes that idea," Kyla said as she sighed with Dani. It wasn't long before she was starting to stand with Amy, "I'll go with you Amy, I agree we should find them as soon as possible. I am worried about them..."

Amy looked over at the girl with a look of thanks written on her features, before she looked at the others, "Anyone else coming along. I gotta warn, I am not slowing down for anyone."

Sayrike looked up at the two girls, then Maggie who had already started to join the rescue group. The blue mage looked over at the ones that remained. She felt confused as to what to do. She wanted to help the others, but didn't want to leave Noelle and the others that might choose to stay behind. With a heavy heart, Sayrike stood and started to follow after Amy who had already started to leave.

"I am sorry..." Dani said as she looked at the three who were remaining behind, before she too ran off as well.

Jenny, Noelle and Dawn watched as the five girls left in the direction of the palace they were heading towards before the battle had erupted.

Dawn looked over at Noelle who stared after Amy with a look of both hurt and worry, "Why didn't you stop them?" the dancer asked.

"Do you really think I could of stopped them either way?" Noelle answered without looking at Dawn.

"I hope they know what they are doing..." Jenny said gently as she too watched as the group of Earthlings was split once more.

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LevDa

PostPosted: Thu Oct 28, 2010 2:40 pm


Dawn I am loving this fanfic of yours. You really are doing well with the plot and I was sad that Dawn,Jenny, and Noelle stayed behind. Keep up with the chapters!!
PostPosted: Thu Oct 28, 2010 4:04 pm


Man, the boys jacked up the girls, haha! We're so pro! XD Boys rule!

The end was jacked... I felt like the sad walking away song from The Hulk should've been playing... o.o;

Keep it up, Dawn! This fiction is so exciting to read, haha! It's us! But it's not us!

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 28, 2010 8:07 pm


I died! And then I lived! OwO!! *huggles the monkeys out of Aimmeh* *throws her tea at Kyle D<*

Man... splitting up is such a baddddd idea! Look at all the instances in HA when we split up! bad things happened! D:

*Shakes Dawn* CONTINUEEEE~! biggrin DD
PostPosted: Fri Oct 29, 2010 3:14 pm


I have to reiterate:

COOOOOOOOL. 8D

I love this.

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