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 Posted: Mon Aug 23, 2010 7:26 am
 The Fourth Division Application Room
Rules and Terms - When applying for the Fourth Division, you will have to post a link to your profile and then your reason for joining. Please do note that I do not want a reason that is a total load of rubbish. No need to put a RP sample; I'll make my observations just from your profile.
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Posted: Sat Sep 11, 2010 12:54 pm
http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=20089649Reason: In most video games I enjoy I prefer to be a healing class, so when Bleach revealed the fourth division in the manga I was thrilled and immediately began formulating characters in my head for it, the first several being of course extremely broken and overpowered. I feel that this character is rather balanced and less healer oriented than my previous attempts at making a character and as is obvious you are able to bring up any issues that may exist with my profile. Well I got a bit off topic, but really I just like being a healer~ ♠
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Posted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 8:10 am
Well, Keith... I think your profile seem fine for me. The history part seem worked out very well (So sad about Cyril's first and original family). Anyways, since you didn't put your Bankai section part, you might want to PM that to me and let's work it out if it needs some toning down or up. If you haven't figured anything yet, well, I will be here to help you. But I think it would be advisable to plan your Bankai ahead though as you progress on, changes are quite inevitable.
So, congratulations, welcome to the Fourth Division! We hope to interact with you soon, if you get what I mean. wink
P.S. I would advice you to do some socializing with the division outcast-seeming-to-be Tomoya. Oh, nice RPC name, by the way. Alexander... Alekzander... Alessander... Hmmm...
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 8:44 am
Rorik MelekhinReason-Well I thought I would add a twist to squad four so I came up with Rorik Melekhin the front line medic who can not only heal, but kick a** on the front lines as well. Plus it makes sense to have a front line medic who can also fight and hold his own because if he goes down everyone else is screwed, because no one is there to heal them.
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Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 5:59 am
Pandaman2 Rorik MelekhinReason-Well I thought I would add a twist to squad four so I came up with Rorik Melekhin the front line medic who can not only heal, but kick a** on the front lines as well. Plus it makes sense to have a front line medic who can also fight and hold his own because if he goes down everyone else is screwed, because no one is there to heal them. Yes, good day, Panda. 3nodding
I have some requests for you to complete, okay? First of all, details. Details. I understand that you may have been, well, too enthusiastic about joining and all; however, you have to put on more details about the nature of your character. Trust me, it does add some uniqueness in your RPC (Role-Playing Character). While it is most understandable that history and personality is summarized, well, to me, I really do appreciate the more... detailed information on the very nature of your creation. Come on, you're a starting writer (in some simpler form, RPing), so, crank up those ideas.
Next, there comes the simpler issue of typographical errors and stuffs. I am requiring you to double-check them and all. And if you are totally sure that you are confident at that profile format, then, send me a PM and we'll do the editing hand-in-hand. But please, do something about those, okay?
Oh, and speaking of PMs, send me a PM and explain to me the detailed nature of your Zanpakuto. Thank you.
Well, good day again 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 8:35 pm
Satori Takajou
Reason for joining: My reason for wishing to join this squad is because my character is one whose personality revolves around helping people, and usually staying away from battles. Because of this, I wished to enter the fourth squad and develop his nature as a healer, and would love to join this squad. ^_^
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Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 7:26 am
Asuma Haruka Satori Takajou
Reason for joining: My reason for wishing to join this squad is because my character is one whose personality revolves around helping people, and usually staying away from battles. Because of this, I wished to enter the fourth squad and develop his nature as a healer, and would love to join this squad. ^_^ Good day, Asuma. 3nodding
The powers of illusionary Zanpakuto is recorded in the restricted powers of the guild. Have you discussed this with the GVC's?
So, here's my initial review of your Zanpakuto's general abilities... You said that the orbs can manipulate objects that abides in... what? 3 x 3 dimensions? You are pertaining to area of a specific, figure. And that includes cube-like planes. If you want to manipulate objects of particular dimensions, then it should have been in terms of volume. Because in 3 x 3, you are pertaining to 2D planes and certainly an object must be in 3D to be manipulated, correct? Unless of course, you want to manipulate papers... oh, which I think is still subject to the volume rule.
The illusionary powers of your Zanpakuto is vague though detailed well. You pertained that once the release is made, then the orbs can make targets see them in other things, as in the discretion of Satori. The question is: when you release your Zanpakuto, does everyone get affected at once? Because if it did, that is simply unfair. How is the area of affliction takes place? How can someone be affected by your Zanpakuto's illusionary ability? According to Aizen, he needed enemies to see his Zanpakuto's initial release for them to be trapped at his "perfect hypnosis". What's yours?
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Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 3:24 pm
I discussed with the GC, and he didn't voice any complains when I explained it to him.
The 3x3, I need to change to 3x3x3(length width height). And the objects is can affect are inanimate objects such as rocks, pieces of buildings, chunks of the ground, etc. He could have one take over a rock and simply have it float in the air, or send it hurtling at a person, as long as it was within the 3x3x3 rule. Weight, however, doesn't matter.
And, the release I copied from Aizen's. People need to be in the direct view of the release and see it to be affected. Though, the effects are undone once it's sealed, and the target needs to see the release again for the same effect. It's caused by the target being in the vicinity of the release, as it expels a pulse of reiatsu that affects the brain of the target when they come into contact with it. This is done on the initial release and isn't repeated later on, so only those that are present at the time of the release will be affected.
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Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 5:43 pm
Asuma Haruka I discussed with the GC, and he didn't voice any complains when I explained it to him.
The 3x3, I need to change to 3x3x3(length width height). And the objects is can affect are inanimate objects such as rocks, pieces of buildings, chunks of the ground, etc. He could have one take over a rock and simply have it float in the air, or send it hurtling at a person, as long as it was within the 3x3x3 rule. Weight, however, doesn't matter.
And, the release I copied from Aizen's. People need to be in the direct view of the release and see it to be affected. Though, the effects are undone once it's sealed, and the target needs to see the release again for the same effect. It's caused by the target being in the vicinity of the release, as it expels a pulse of reiatsu that affects the brain of the target when they come into contact with it. This is done on the initial release and isn't repeated later on, so only those that are present at the time of the release will be affected. Actually.. I did express some concerns. Three of them in fact. And you never showed me the full profile, you just explained the concept. For one thing, you need to cut down on the number of orbs. To about thirty or so. Second, you need to fully explain what the dimension is, as in, is it: Feet, inches, meters, etc. And lastly, you need to explain in greater detail that the illusions are illusions, and cannot cause physical harm. If I read that wrong, and they CAN cause physical harm, you need to change it so that they do not, otherwise it's a bit much.
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Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 6:03 pm
EDIT: All taken care of now.
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Posted: Sat Feb 12, 2011 6:23 am
Ergo, your application has been approved, Asuma. You will be assigned as an unseated member and will improve as you become active at the Fourth Division. Congratulations! And welcome to your new home! 3nodding
Erratum: You still haven't changed the 3 x 3 x 3 concept.
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