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Mistakes of Love

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zoje972

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 5:03 pm


Mistakes of Love


One thing in my life
I wish to undo
Is admitting the fact
that I love you
I would rather have lived
with my heart filled with pain
instead of the tears
that now fall like rain
You were easy to talk to
but thats just the start
it did not take long
to win over my heart
for it was you
who made me smile
in my times
of dark denile
the friendship we had
is now gone and done
and the fault is all mine
I should have known
I was crossing the line
The pain I have now
Is almost unbearable
to with live
And so my friend
Can you find it in you heart
To forgive?
PostPosted: Sat Aug 28, 2010 12:36 pm


I quite like this. Poetry isn't typically my thing, but I find this to be rather interesting. I think you did a lovely job. Thank you for sharing it. heart

Chrysanthius

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