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 Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 8:47 pm
You're here, I know.
I see your eyes
I see your skin
I see you completely.
I reach out to grasp,
but you're out of my reach.
You push out your hand.
But your just a dream.
You vanish without a trace.
I'm left with the memories.
My misery takes a hold.
End this nightmare.
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Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 9:21 pm
I can feel the hope of the person being there, and the heartache of them vanishing as your conscious pulls you forth from the realm of comfortable lies that we wish so desperately were true.
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Undesired Desire Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 11:53 pm
Yeah, that's excactly why I called it Dream. Lol. I wrote this because my grandpa recently passed, and we knew eachother okay, but we could've talked more... you know?
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 1:05 pm
Logann x3 Yeah, that's excactly why I called it Dream. Lol. I wrote this because my grandpa recently passed, and we knew eachother okay, but we could've talked more... you know? so in a way this peom is for him. you did a great job. you told the story very well.
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