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MisterMaurice

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 16, 2010 9:15 am


~[Mr. Mau <3 H2H]~



Greetings, Burn!

I actually found my Story in my old Flash Drive. SO I said to myself, "Wow, I never finished Chapter 10. Interesting." I did remember doing this, during my last job in Pleasanton. xd
Sad thing is, I don't have that job anymore, because it was only a 9-month employment job there. lol

So anyhow, here's a little reading on, Chapter 5:




~12/12/09: Anni~


Quote:
As J’onn arrived at the mountains, he stumbled upon a cave in the mountains. J’onn said, “Haven’t been here in years. It’s been almost 3 years. I might as well check it out, and see what kind of pathetic android-animal is sent to destroy me. Jeez.” He took an over-sized branch, snapped his fingers on his right hand to make a fire burning the branch to make a torch. In the cave, J’onn witnessed some footprints the size of an enormous turtle. J’onn said, “So, my opponent is an enormous turtle. This better be important, or else I’ve completely wasted time. Man, this is such a drag.”
A voice called J’onn out, and the voice said, “Welcome, General J’onn. I’m glad you have arrived. Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Terror Tortoise, and I have been given orders to destroy you.” J’onn said, “This is the 4th time I’ve heard that same line. Can’t you villains think of another freaking line? Jeez!” Terror Tortoise said, “Stop your bickering.” A dark aura appeared on the ceiling of the cave, creating a portal to another dimension. Terror Tortoise appeared at the portal, and he said, “Well, now that we finally meet, I believe it’s time I showed you what true power is!” Terror Tortoise started running slowly. J’onn vanished instantly. Terror Tortoise said, “Teleportation? How quaint!” Terror Tortoise put his palms on the ground, and create dark aura from the ground, causing him to shift dimensions. J’onn reappeared near the aura, and said, “Where’s he going?”
All of a sudden, dark aura formed behind J’onn, and Terror Tortoise appeared on the dark aura, then slashed J’onn, breaking his torso armor into armor shards. J’onn screamed with pain, “AH!!!” J’onn jumped backwards, used his right gauntlet to shoot energy orbs at Terror Tortoise. Terror Tortoise shouted, “Impressive on the Rapid Fire shots, but you’re not strong enough against me!” Terror Tortoise roared loudly, creating a seismic earthquake, which started distorting the space around J’onn, causing J’onn to stumble to the ground, covering his ears. He screamed with pain, “Ahhhh!”
PostPosted: Wed Aug 11, 2010 11:29 am


Before I really comment on what is given, is this supposed to be parody?
The writing and content surely indicate it, but I just want to make sure.

Cuivie


emmmahy

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 11, 2010 11:35 am


The overlord has returned...



" J'onn? xd "


And she seeks BLOOD!
PostPosted: Wed Aug 11, 2010 11:38 am


emmmahy
" J'onn? xd "


I do believe that it is a Justice League fan fiction.
That would explain the name atleast.
If I'm right then J'onn is insanely out of character. =x

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Cuivie

PostPosted: Wed Aug 11, 2010 11:57 am


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emmmahy
" J'onn? xd "


I do believe that it is a Justice League fan fiction.
That would explain the name atleast.
If I'm right then J'onn is insanely out of character. =x

That is what I thought. J'onn is clearly Justice League, but he wouldn't do or say anything mentioned in the story. It's somehow awkward to read.
PostPosted: Wed Aug 11, 2010 12:02 pm


The overlord has returned...



" Oh, I don't know anything about JL. I thought it was a lulzy name. XD
@story: needs some grammar fixed. "


And she seeks BLOOD!

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