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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 11:42 am
Itami raised an eye brow at the strangers words. He's either testing us, or is completely insane. Itami smiled when Katya said he was a vampire, and watched with amusement as she put him in a trance and talked to him with a fiery temper. He walked towards the stranger until they were face to face. His magic surfaced, and he waved his palm over the vampire. Using a little magic, Itami began to slowly heat the strangers blood, not to kill but to cause immense pain. His abilities included boiling an opponents blood with enough magic, but it would certainly kill and he wasn't sure if that was the best plan. "I don't think your in the correct position to be interrogating us Kaname. My companion here will certainly slit your throat with her sharp bow if you call her 'woman' again. As for me, I'd surely kill you if I felt the need to. So i suggest you choose your words carefully. And I was right eh? You do belong to the dark empire. Hahaha, vampire...I know you understand the dark empire wouldn't care for the loss of a weakling. Given that, there will be no consequences..." He smiled at Kaname before glancing at Katya. She seemed enraged and dangerous. The vampire would surely die without Itami. "Whats your rank Kaname?"
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Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 10:19 am
Kaname was shocked and disturbed at the same time that these two that didn't share there names with me where angred and foolishly threatined him for nothing if they had properlly introduced themselfs then I wouldn't have to use words such as woman. Which him self didn't want to you it was lack of a better word he looked at the man with a look of "are you asking me a question while i'm in a transe? because that would be kinda stupid" he looked at the FEMALE pologenic. he stood there untill they desided what to do because if they where really going to kill him all of this would be a waist of time.
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Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 1:24 pm
Katya rolled her eyes. This vampire would just be a pain if they took him with them. It would be a waste of time and besides she hadnt seen Itami in so long, she wanted to spend time with him and that would be hard with the vampire with them. She went over to Itami and looked him in the eyes, "Come on, lets get out of here. This vampire isnt worth our time." She took his hand and lead him off, waiting until they were far enough away to release the vampire from the trance.
[[Exit to where Itamis going]]
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Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 1:56 pm
((ok...I'm sorry but these posts are just terrible. Especially matt's. Klo, you need work as well, and even pain needs to learn to be more aware of whats happening. I'll give you guys the short list of what is ticking me off about these posts.
Matt. Almost ZERO punctuation meant that your posts were terribly illegible and the parts i understood took me a while to do so. Second, thoughts are in italics They are supposed to look like this. Misspelling and and such only make thing worse. Finally, not one, but TWO spells were used on you (one of which seemed slightly overpowered and I'll have to look at later). You didn't RP being affected by either one. This is the biggest of no-no's. I expect your next post will be you walking into the rp school. Shame.
Klo. Yours weren't as bad. My biggest problem with you is that you wrote singing him into a trance...in one sentence. An act such as that should be RP'd out and not stated in the same way you would say 'The sky was blue'. Also, right after you 'sang' you pulled a weapon on him and began talking to him effectively ruining the point of the song. You don't 'require' schooling, but I'd feel better if I or another mod made sure you really paid attention.
Pain. You're the most seasoned, and naturally made the fewest mistakes. It was your power that bothered me and I'll look into it later. The problem with your post is that technically speaking, you should've been in a daze just like matt's character. You can't just 'ignore' her song because you guys are friends. You would've heard it too....Thats all. just be mindful of such things. ))
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Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 1:59 pm
[[Its cool Curt thanks for the words of advice smile im sorry i should have thought that through.]]
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Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 6:24 pm
((-_- nerd was suppose to be teaching me but he ditched me..... oh well i guess i could try to get into the school......))
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Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 8:38 pm
((just post that you're walking into the 'Learning Center'. It can be found in the OOC Thread))
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Posted: Wed Jul 07, 2010 4:50 pm
[[I understand. Exit to Never Ending Storm Wasteland in Wind empire.]]
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Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 6:40 am
Teishoku walked back into the forest. He had grown tired of it, he had just realized that if that girl of his was going to be around him, spouting Fede crap every few seconds, it would drive him mad. It was probably best if he just got her now. 'HEY! Girl! Come back to my Forest. Fede is a liar!' He wasn't one for being patient, so he figured he'd add. 'I expect you there pretty soon. If you keep me waiting, I'm leaving without you'
He walked out and headed back to his section of the forest.
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Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 2:50 pm
Aiko jumped at the sound of her teacher's voice. She'd completely forgotten that she'd followed him into the real church of Fede. She turned to listen to him, then gawked at his words. Fede a LIAR?! What was wrong with him! Fede is everything good and right! Fede never lies. She watched him turn and leave, almost willing to stay behind despite his request. Then, with a huff and a stomp of her foot, Aiko sulked out of the stone church, too upset to keep her shadow from forming into a hawk and following her out. I'm sorry, but I promise to come back and devote my full attention to you.
Once outside, Aiko sniffed at the to figure out which way her master had gone. Stupid... leaving me... She sniffed again and was assulted by 4 different scents of people. The one she was looking for hit her first. Teacher went left. One was one she rather not know. Ahh, so the baby vamp lives. How sad. The third took her by surprise. Katya? My aqualite, Katya? So far inland too? And the last worried her greatly. Someone I don't know... Did he hurt Katya? Was she his captive or something? "Teach! Wait!" Needing answers quickly, Aiko ran left to follow him.
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