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 Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2006 6:40 pm
You'll all have noticed by now that I haven't updated my story in over a month. There are many reasons for this.
But those reasons aren't important.
In an effort to help me past my writer's block, and to repolish my literary skills, I have begun work on a fairly short piece of narrative, which involves characters and situations created by Gendou. This can be considered fanfiction, I suppose.
This is not in any way an attempt to take over the story. This is not to be considered part of canon, nor is it any predictions for the future of the characters. This is simply a scenario I've created using these characters.
I hope you enjoy it.
Comments are not only appreciated, they are anticipated. This is a way for me to improve my skills and my writing style; please tell me what you like about the story and the writing style, and why you liked it. Conversely, please tell me what you don't like about the story and my style, and why it didn't work for you.
Thank you.
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Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2006 6:43 pm
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Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2006 6:48 pm
The comments come next. Go ahead.
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Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2006 12:18 am
Very good stuff, Ally. I always appreciate a good Gaara-esqe death scene. heart
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Posted: Wed Jan 11, 2006 11:15 am
Must...be...patient...for...story...finish!
sweatdrop gonk
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Posted: Wed Jan 11, 2006 6:48 pm
The final two installments will be updated tomorrow. They are completed. 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2006 5:12 pm
Complete. Comment, please.
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Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2006 11:56 pm
*giggle* I love how pissed off s/he gets at everything. Yay for villains with a lame sense of humor whee
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Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2006 5:27 am
Cassidy Peterson *giggle* I love how pissed off s/he gets at everything. Yay for villains with a lame sense of humor whee I know. I mean, come on, Tauros? And he's a bull? It's as if he was named by someone with a lame sense of humor. ...*cough* ninja sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2006 7:24 am
More Story!
We can't rely on Gendou, so you need to keep writing! 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2006 9:02 am
AllianceSJR Cassidy Peterson *giggle* I love how pissed off s/he gets at everything. Yay for villains with a lame sense of humor whee I know. I mean, come on, Tauros? And he's a bull? It's as if he was named by someone with a lame sense of humor. ...*cough* ninja sweatdrop heart Well you managed to work with it fantastically(sp?). The Gaara-esque death scene was brilliant, too. I'm always a fan of using sand creatively. Nice work with Rene's powers, too - FISH. All in all a good story, I just fail at proper feedback xd
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