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 Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 1:47 am
I wrote a poem last month. I have officially posted it here on gaia. My request is that you would go and read the poem. Feel free to leave comments, and make sure you give it the rating you feel it deserves. This isn't a request to give me 5/5. Just to read my poem and tell me what you think/vote how you feel.
Thanks. Here's the link.
My Poem
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 8:39 am
i like the poem..it was simple and and easy to understand and it touched me alot.i think that the world has drifted away alot from the word of God...and America was established with Christian foundations mrgreen But never the less that happens alot here too..its just sad..i give the poem a 4/5 heart
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 8:45 am
nice and meaningful poem.. i gave it 3/5
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 9:43 am
I love it. Do you have any more poems on here?
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 9:45 am
Yirah I love it. Do you have any more poems on here?
Currently--no. I'm afraid not. However, I will be posting more in the near future.
Thanks everyone for reading and commenting! ^_^
For those of you who haven't read it, I would still appreciate your feedback.
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 11:31 am
Okay. I look forward to reading them. :]
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 2:25 pm
its very meaningfull. and sad
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 3:12 pm
Wow...just wow. That was a very brilliant & meaningful but sad poem. I give it a 5/5. heart
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