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 Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 7:44 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 02, 2010 6:42 am
Yosh fixed~
Anyone, please critique?
ATM, I'm only using MS Paint and no other program! xD
And before anyone says it, I'll say it now: I know there's something wrong with ze bunny! xD
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 7:51 am
Firstly, I think it's very impressive that you've achieved variation in line thickness with MS Paint. It makes your lineart much livelier.
One thing you might want to focus upon is practicing hands - in the 'Yuiri Sasarai' picture, the last two fingers would be better swapping positions. =p Why I say this is that the little finger would be lower than the ring finger at the point closer to it's connection to the palm when you make this pose, plus the ring finger would not be hidden by the little finger. Instead, they should be side by side. Try doing the same pose in the mirror and study your hand.
'Dave''s hand is pretty well done. smile (though his left eye should be alittle closer to the midline of his head, I think)
'Admiral Kathryn Janeway' - try to keep your style constant, if the right hand has fingers, add fingers to the left hand as well. The little finger seems alittle thin compared to the other fingers as well.
My first reaction was still: 'Goodness, cute art.' Xp Just have to keep working on those hands, good luck! smile
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2010 7:33 am
Lea Florens Firstly, I think it's very impressive that you've achieved variation in line thickness with MS Paint. It makes your lineart much livelier.
I admit it wasn't easy to keep the pixels in-line... xDLea Florens One thing you might want to focus upon is practicing hands - in the 'Yuiri Sasarai' picture, the last two fingers would be better swapping positions. =p Why I say this is that the little finger would be lower than the ring finger at the point closer to it's connection to the palm when you make this pose, plus the ring finger would not be hidden by the little finger. Instead, they should be side by side. Try doing the same pose in the mirror and study your hand. 'Admiral Kathryn Janeway' - try to keep your style constant, if the right hand has fingers, add fingers to the left hand as well. The little finger seems a little thin compared to the other fingers as well.
Looks like I need some serious practice for that, haha! ^^;
Thank you for pointing it out!Lea Florens 'Dave''s hand is pretty well done. smile (though his left eye should be alittle closer to the midline of his head, I think)
I'll try to work on it though~Lea Florens My first reaction was still: 'Goodness, cute art.' Xp Just have to keep working on those hands, good luck! smile Thank You!!! biggrin
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Posted: Fri Aug 06, 2010 8:16 am
Yeah, Lea Florens is right. I think your lineart is amazing, though! I have extremely limited abilities with my tablet, so I have to use the d@mn pen tool =_=
If you ever have the urge to help someone, I'm here xDD
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