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 Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 2:57 pm
"It's a pleasure to meet you both," Rosa said smiling, "So you have other Pokemon?"
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Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 7:29 pm
Ariel nods, smiling. "Mickey was my first, a Bulbasaur. Then I got Hector. Zaine is my Flygon, and Lily is my Eevee." she says, giggling a little.
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Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 7:30 pm
"Oh... They're all cute names," she said smiling.
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Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 7:55 pm
Ariel blushes a little, rubbing her head. "Eheh... Thank you.."
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Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 7:59 pm
"Yep," she giggled, "So... Do you think we should get going?"
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Posted: Sun Apr 04, 2010 4:29 pm
Ariel nods. "Yes, we probably should."
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Posted: Sun Apr 04, 2010 4:52 pm
"Alright then," she said with a smile, "Let's get started." She then began to walk towards Route 101.
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Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 2:23 am
((i don't really see the problem with my intro to the thing the main reason i wrote it like i did was cause i grew impatient cause i had to rewrite it cause the backspace button got stuck and really with all due respect....im not used to using punctuation while posting on the forms and im no perfect grammar student and so if you want me to spell normal that's fine but please don't expect me to use punctuation all that often or have perfect grammar))
Tyler said hi as he ran into two girls one seemed scared of him but still he introduced himself and after that he watched in the background as the two girls talked away and didn't say anything to them instead he turned his attention to his new friend ralts and said how about while they are talking we go train he said with a smile ralts nodded a half-hour of hard training later he saw the girls walk off on the route called route 101 so he decided sense he didn't know where he was going on his journey he would follow them and see what happens
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Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 5:41 pm
(Um.. The reason why we asked for punctuation was becase we can't understand where a sentence begins or ends. Same with dialogue...)
Ariel follows behind Rosa quietly.
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Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 6:04 pm
((fine but only be expecting periods but as i said before dont expect perfect grammar XD))
Tyler was following Ariel and Rosa when all of a sudden Ralts tripped and fell down a hill.He ran down the hill to see if Ralts was ok.Turns out Ralts sprained its leg.From then on Ralts sat in the backpack while traveling.
((better?))
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Posted: Tue May 11, 2010 7:25 am
Mark smiled broadly as Salamence glided over the route to Littleroot town. He was coming to pay a visit to the regional pokemon expert, Professor Birch. As Salamence neared the village, it swopped low, flaring its wings to land in a clearing near the quaint little town. He rewarded Salamence with a handful of pokeblocks and returned the giant dragon pokemon to its pokeball. Placing the red and white ball onto his belt, he made his way into the town. He sighed as he tried to remember the path to Birch's lab.
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