Lets see. Its good.
Critique.
On the first picture. The chibis are alittle unporportional to me. But they still look cute.
On the girl the spoon is what get me and The girl's hips. (Very difficult took me years lol. not rlly. but yeah.)
On the Second picture the hand near the face seems alittle small. but thats okay. Hands are a pain to draw........I have problem drawing hands.
The good stuff
both girls in are awesome. When i looked at the first picture you did awesome on the face. lolLucky. and details as well. I like that ALOT
And the little cibi's have the cuteness factor
The second picture The Eyes AGaIN so nicely done. seriously it compliment's the girl's face. I think that is how you should say it.
Her eyes add character to the girl. so does her smile.
SQUEE. and her hair is nicely drawn to it makes it seem like it accualy has texture insted of it looking flat.
good job on the shading too
Keep drawing. I like your art <3