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So, I'm not the type of person to follow many teenager comics (Shonen mangas), but there are a few I like to read, and among them there's History's Strongest Disciple: Kenichi


Since the fanart sub forum seems to have disappeared, I'm posting this fanart in here, and not only for that, but because I need some feedback on the drawing itself.

Here it is:


At the beginning I was trying to draw Kenichi's arm with a fist pointing towards the viewer, but then I decided to draw him with his hand opened instead because that's one of his poses.

With Miu, I had a bit of problems since her poses are more gymnastics, graceful and flexibles than Kenichi's, but maybe she looks a bit too stiff?

Now, for the background.

I was originally going for the all the main characters piled up behind them, but the image would seem too crowded so I forgot that idea and stuck with something more simplistic.

What do you think would suit them better?

Oh my, thank you all for your great feedback.

I knew there was something off but couldn't point it out, I'll make the suggested changes as soon as I can.

Oh and about her breasts...I wanted to mix both the author's and mine styles combined, but I can't draw giant boobs like him, it would ruin the flow of the picture. gonk