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 Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 8:46 pm
 . I spent a little more than 2 hours on it. x_x
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Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 8:43 pm
Female
-Her eye looks more like a front view than a side view
-Her shoulders are rather broad for a woman
-The bicep on our left looks big
-The hand holding the flowers would look better if it wasn't so straight like that... like... if it was somewhat sideways or something. Also, the knuckle on the middle finger should stick out more than the others, then it sorta slopes down towards the pinky
-Her skirt seems a bit flat... I'd either have more of it showin behind her or shade the edges darker to show some depth (like it's wrapping around her a bit more)
-The difference in the size of her arms is quite noticeable; imagine both were hanging straight down... The arm on the left would be quite a bit longer. The one on the left is too long and the one on the right is too short, I think
Male
-His eye seems to be too far to the right
-His eye looks like more like a front view than a side view
-I think his ear would be showing
-Are those lines on his pants a pocket? I wouldn't show the lines on the bottom; pockets usually don't outline that part
-His hand looks kinda weird
-That fold on his shirt seems out of place; having his arm raised like that would pull the shirt, straightening it out more and maybe showing stretch lines closer to his shoulder
Methinks
-The general body proportions are pretty good
-The female's raised hand is a pretty good attempt, but it's a little choppy
-The female's hair is pretty good, but could be a bit less rigid, and I'd show some more covering around her forehead area or have it show behind
-The layers on her skirt are interesting, but I don't think it turned out the way you wanted it to... It looks like the curves or whatever were meant to be more exaggerated
-Their head sizes are pretty different, which is a bit odd
-I like how you did the tree's shade, though it could be better
-The shading on everything needs work
-The clouds need work, but it would take me a while to get into details on that... not a bad attempt, though
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Posted: Tue Feb 09, 2010 12:49 pm
I agree with the giant paragraph that guy wrote, and that the male's position seems a teensy bit awkward.
*is it akward or awkward?*
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Posted: Wed Feb 10, 2010 10:50 am
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Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 3:04 pm
well damn, O: thanks guys<3
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Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 8:01 am
I like it. ^ ~ ^
The guy's head looks kinds like it's attached to his chest, though. Maybe that's just me? > w <;;
And the guy's eye doesn't look like it's on a side-view.
The tree roots look kind of strange to me as well.
Very nice attempt though. I like the way you made the skirt and I love the scenery. :3
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Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 3:48 pm
If your notReally here Then I dont want to be either
- The girls feet seem to be oddly placed underneath the skirt, before drawing out the skirt, try fitting where you would want the legs and feet to be first. Then erase the leg lines and build the skirt from that, I usually do that with my artwork. Although usually I draw much short skirts XD long skirts are pretty too. The general body shape for your girl is pretty good just try to be careful with the shoulders, us girls dont have broad shoulders like that ^^. overall nice job
- your guy is actually pretty good even tho the position looks a little awkward, the arm facing the view almost looks to short, but it still looks pretty good I think.
~things to watch out for~
- flow of the drawing make sure everything is arranged so that it looks like it belongs together, you do a pretty good job with that in this picture, but there are a couple things that just sort of have an odd look about them.
- placement of eyes and making sure they look sideways when your drawing, profile views are a pain I know, but be careful with your eyes, now I see you had been told this in an earlier post so I wont go into it to much.
- body positions and anatomy, before adding to much detail with clothing, work on the body figures first then build up from that, many artists work this way, and it actually can be very useful ^^
Thank you for sharing your artwork, keep pursuing and perfecting your talent the only way to go is getting better with this sort of thing.
black and gold black and gold black and gold 
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