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 Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 8:42 pm
No jus me and Lance. Why dont you just read it?
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Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 8:47 pm
LOLZ rofl rofl rofl Thats a good one.
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Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 8:53 pm
it's not actually you greg, i just used your name because it was the first one I could think of, but the app was for a guild called Revolution of the Ninja
but yeah, did you like it?
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Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 8:54 pm
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Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 9:02 pm
i don't know, I just joined a day or two ago
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Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 9:03 pm
I did like it, but I dont get the end. Was he randomly stabbed, or was he protecting the Raikage?
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Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 9:13 pm
it was supposed to be that he was protecting the kage, which is what I was trying to get across when I said he was between the thug and the kage, though admittedly i could have explained that better I suppose
was that the only part you didn't get about the end, or do you literally mean the way I ended it
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Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 9:24 pm
No that was it. But yea explain a little better how yamatano was protecting the kage, It almost sounds like the thug guy decided "Hey if im gonna die im takin this kid with me."
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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 6:07 pm
everytime I see the word app now I think iPhone program. DAMN YOU APPLE PROGRAMMING!
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Posted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 4:29 pm
i liked it,and the revolution guild is practically dead,cuz of light so yea
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