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 Posted: Sat Nov 28, 2009 4:16 pm
they loved each other like none had ever seen before with compassion and the fire of disire she started to talk with others look at them like she loved them so he ran...far...vary far but then when he could no longer run he stoped and turned home back where he began he found her 2 days later with tears in her eyes. she smacked him hard and yelled. "Why did you leave!" he then realised that he had made a foolish and deadly mistake the next few words could be his last with her...so he told the truth
he told her that he went mad and that he got jelous of the others but at that time she could not forgive him and so she told him to leave he understood but he stayed anyway and with in a few hours sweet miss could not resist but to kiss and so she forgave him and now his trials begin to win back her trust and to show her that he will never leave again...
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Posted: Sun Nov 29, 2009 5:28 pm
hmmm it needs to be longer just a bit and i souldn't have left it so open ended hmmmmm
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Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 5:11 pm
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