"works for me" he said taking her hand once more as he looked deep into her eyes 'to give me a chance with her...god must love me' Ryu thought to himself chuckling in his head while still looking down toward her
"well shall we be off beautiful?" he continued still looking down toward her and without waiting for an answer he started to lead her toward the end of the hallway while at the same time letting her decide where they would go seeings as how she might just know some places he didn't I mean hell he had only been there for a few hours and had already found a girlfriend, shown emotion, and been kind.
OOC: wow my character is going a differant direction than i was planning lol
[Spazz edit; Try to work on your grammar, okay? I don't think I really see any periods or punctuation anywhere, and you aren't capitalizing new sentences because there aren't any. So try to throw in a period here and there, and cap the first word of every sentence, including speech.]
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