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It's a furreh! (Anthro Canine) Critique Needed

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Guaif

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 9:26 am


Well yes, I'm not sure how this will be taken. Knowing Gaia's reputation for having people dislike and who are displeased with FurryFandom. I only ask for a critique. Please if any, and I hope none want to say something rude. I ask that you don't I just want to better myself as an artist. And I only ask this of the people of the guild because it has happened to me in the past and I'm really starting to like this guild to take a step back from it.

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 11:26 am


It's so good! I think you may improve the hair

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 10:48 pm


I like it hun, its really good but the hair needs movement. Other then that...awesome smile
PostPosted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 5:54 pm


I love anthros! He is so good. ^////^. O_O Bulge. Great for detail I guess. Like they said above me; Hair, and that's all I see that needs work.

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 7:39 pm


Hehe, thank you all for your comments. And yes bulge, some people forget when it comes to art, men have them.
PostPosted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 4:40 pm


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Hehe, thank you all for your comments. And yes bulge, some people forget when it comes to art, men have them.
So true. Never said it was a bad thing.

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 24, 2009 3:59 am


I think it's pretty good so far. The torso is the best part, and I would personally make his bum and legs look more fuzzy (they look smooth and hairless - like a human bum! whee ), and the tail shouldn't be at such a right angle to the body - remember that it's a continuation of the spine and should flow out of the back, not stick out like it's stuck on. Other than that, the only thing I can think to suggest would be to put an outline on the hair - the rest of the body has outlines, not having outlines on the hair makes it look out of place.
PostPosted: Tue Nov 24, 2009 2:28 pm


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Totally agreed above, the bottom half looks so smooth until it gets to the paws/feet. And then just add the outlines to the hair.



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PostPosted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 1:22 pm


I think it looks awesome!
The only things that caught me eye were the hair is slightly odd.

but apart from that it looks amazing to me. 3nodding
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