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[.Potemkin.]

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Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 9:12 pm

I don't know how to get the attention or feedback in here anymore )=

Anyways, here's what I last drew, so how is it?

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Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 9:16 pm

Alright. c:

The anatomy is spot on... but the eyes seem like they're a little off center... maybe it's just me.

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Voll

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Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 10:56 pm

;A; is perfect <3
But for the right foot (from my view), it looks a bit too small in comparison with her body...
Your lining is so gorgeous! -jealous-

Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 11:12 pm

Voll

;A; is perfect <3
But for the right foot (from my view), it looks a bit too small in comparison with her body...
Your lining is so gorgeous! -jealous-

Haha, that's because it was the limit of the paper and I had to resize the foot a bit sweatdrop

Thanks for your comments. surprised

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ShirianekiZ

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Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 3:42 am

The only think I think needs fixing is her chin, it's maybe a bit too long... or something, I don't know how to say it properly.

Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 6:10 pm

Really good art. Especially the hair. Reminds me of the style used by some artistes like from DEATH NOTE or Hello baby( also drawn by the creator of death-note)
Keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing it colored^^

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