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 Posted: Sat Sep 12, 2009 9:56 pm
I'm sure everyone here knows about haiku. So, why not make some? Here's one I wrote: この春や
青息吐息
考える
Roumaji version:
kono haru ya
aoiki toiki
kangaeru Note: "Aoiki toiki" is a Japanese idiom for "to be suffering."Do you have any of your own? Here's a challenge: Try to include kigo and kireji in them, as well.
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Posted: Sun Sep 13, 2009 12:24 am
This one I made up on the spot:
春くると
外で歩いて
陽に浴びる.
I would also like to take this time to highlight one of favorite works by the Haiku master Soukan
さお姫の
春立ちながら
しとをして
If you know what this means, you've earned a snicker or two
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Posted: Sun Sep 13, 2009 7:06 pm
Koiyuki I would also like to take this time to highlight one of favorite works by the Haiku master Soukan さお姫の 春立ちながら しとをして I also like this one by Soukan: waga oya no shinuru toki ni mo he wo kokite Sorry I don't have it in kana and kanji. I don't know many kanji, and the book I have the haiku in only has roumaji.
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Posted: Mon Sep 14, 2009 4:57 pm
I only know one by heart, and I forget who had written it > <
御免なさい
チョコレット中で
鳥がある
Gomennasai
Chokoretto naka de
Tori ga aru
I like it though xD
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 4:44 am
My red kimono
Fastened with a bright obi
And worn with zori,
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Posted: Sun Nov 29, 2009 6:01 pm
Can someone look over this haiku for me to make sure it makes sense grammatically? It's a gift so I want it to be perfect.
桜とは
舞って歌うや
妹よ
BTW, the 'ya' is a kireji.
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Posted: Sun Nov 29, 2009 7:32 pm
randomnessensues Can someone look over this haiku for me to make sure it makes sense grammatically? It's a gift so I want it to be perfect. 桜とは 舞って歌うや 妹よ BTW, the 'ya' is a kireji. You might wanna redo the middle stanza(the pause in 舞って also counts as a syllable. so it'd be 8 syllable altogether, instead of 7)
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Posted: Sun Nov 29, 2009 8:08 pm
Koiyuki randomnessensues Can someone look over this haiku for me to make sure it makes sense grammatically? It's a gift so I want it to be perfect. 桜とは 舞って歌うや 妹よ BTW, the 'ya' is a kireji. You might wanna redo the middle stanza(the pause in 舞って also counts as a syllable. so it'd be 8 syllable altogether, instead of 7) 8? What do you mean? まってうたうや I count 7.
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