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 Posted: Thu Aug 20, 2009 6:28 pm
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Posted: Fri Aug 21, 2009 8:10 am
Great story!! Man im going to have a hard time choosing who wins this contest. I might have to have a second and third place winner.
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Posted: Fri Aug 21, 2009 8:37 pm
Hey, you said you wanted feedback, right? Well, I think it's a really good story. Nice and creepy. ^^ At the beginning, when you started everything out as Abraham this. . . Abraham that. . . it got a bit repetitive. He's the only 'he' there is, so I think it's ok to use the pronoun a bit more. It was a good story, though, I liked it.
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Posted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 5:27 pm
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Posted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 12:17 pm
Ok everybody since it would appear as if anyone who wanted to try has done it I am going to o ahead and announce the winners!!
1st place is toto45 with her amazing vampire story Wednesday's Child
2nd place goes to Zycope with his breathtaking short story Under the light of the moon
And finally 3rd place is X_I_am_a_riot_X with her extremely humorous story Just Resting My Eyes
Congrats to everybody!! All of you wrote amazingly. I had a tough time choosing. But the best won. To those who didn't win just try to improve a little and good luck next time!!
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Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 8:18 pm
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