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Details For Object / Organisation



• Fornever Co.

This Company Is A Company For Knights , Magician , Archer and Soldier this jobs are to protect people from monster they [Fornever] Give Mission like Saving People and Fighting Monster ...

• Hazard Corp.

Hazard Is a company that create monster and experiment on human to make them stronger or to transform them in to monster ... This Corp is secret militery force ...

• Tenshi Network.

Tenshi Network is actually A Assisasination Service But over the years they been working with the Fornever Co. and become a special force , tenshi is own by a person called mushashi in the old assasination Programn , but after the mushashi died a guy called Dray take over his place and change the tenshi .

• Underworld

Underworld is actually under the real world but have not been discoved until tenshi network came and try killing Romaji and Ishimaru ...

• Dark Wing

Dark Wing Is a power full clan that say it was own by demon in the past
and each member have their own sword blade etc each one of them have
a tatto on thier back that symbol magic circle ... mysterious =============================================================

BOYS

Character :

• Romaji Kanvo [Second Main Character]

A Hard Working Knight Just Trying To Be a Hero ! But when the entire story start he is a experiment for a company call Hazard Corp [They Try Making Human into monster] but ROMAJI escape ... but only a few people really know his secret ... he can transform into a a winged monster . romaji has a dragon sword [almost the
same weapon as iba ]

• Iba Rega

One of the Strongest Knight and Soldier also when ROMAJI just enter the fornever Company he is like a teacher / mentor to ROMAJI iba has a dragon blade that he never really use . Dragon Blade has A Power to Seal Anything but it will have to use 80% Energy ...

• Fate Genesis

Fate is a Powerful Magician and a soldier aslo he's a genius ... after 3 year's in fornever company he turn into a bad guy ... he have a demon blade that allow
him to turn into a demon ...

• X region

X is z older brother also a solo knight he's like the partner of iba , fate and romaji
x have a claw [glove with knife] , he have ultimate speed ...

• Ishimaru Izunaki [Main Character]

ishimaru is a friend of Romaji ... they knew each other from the past ... they both
escape from the hazard corp , ishimaru is also a experiment from hazard ... he is
know in fornever company working as a soldier ... he can summon 7 sword to protect him or combind them into a much powerful sword , he can turn his hand into a blood aura .

• Kanji Redana

kanji work for a fornever company knight he hidden his power inside his hat when
he took out his hat many sword will appeard and unlimited power will fly every where causing everything to explode .

• z region

Z work fornever Soldier , z is smaller brother of x . z has a double handed gun and shoot faster then anyone in the manga ...

• Chirst Genesis

Chirst work for fornever company soldier , chirst is a smaller brother of fate ... chirst has a wooden sword that can change into a buster sword ...

• Drake Askerbell

Drake work for a fornever company knight he have a tatto on his face that symbol fire he can transform himself into a fire human . Drake use to be a tenshi network agent but quitted years ago

• Wade Terror Fox

wade work for a fornever company knight he has a twin blade that allowed him to move in high speed without noticing ... wade can turn into a werewoft [wade terror fox was a hazard company experiment] ... wade use to be a tenshi network agent but quitted years ago





GIRLS




• Ginna Mas

Ginna Is A Tenchi network agent in the past ginna recieved a mission from the
Hazard company to kill romaji [romaji escape from hazard Co] after ginna met
romaji ... ginna accidentally fall in love with romaji ... Ginna Has a shot gun that
can fire metal ball instead of bullets .

• Angle

Angle is a underworld magician , angle have a intension to save the UW
[underword] people from harm ... angle was born to be perfect , angle has a hidden power that can summon 100 million kind of god [god is like a kind of monster but much stronger than anyother monster ]

• Miko edian

Miko is a fornever soldier she has a huge spear that symbol levithan [sea dragon]
her spear has water and thunder element and summon Tangogo [sea dragon] miko
has a tatto at her stomach ... in the past miko was a hazard experiment ...

• Reka Atonio

reka is a solo worker that do mission for money and fame only , she recieved a mission to dystroy a huge monster ... but when she reaches there ... she was
shock that the monster is a god ... she was attack and almost knock out when ishimaru came and save her . reka has a pink coloured blade and a gun ...

Well I ran Outta ideals for girls -_-

But still if you tweak all those cliches just a little bit (but recommend a lot) you could still make a decent story

Just by reading the first few things, this makes no sense. Knights and magicians and stuff, medieval europe. Tenshi is Japanese. There are (extremely, PAINFULLY bad) Japanese names that are cliches, and then some made up fantasy european names that make no sense when put together with the Japanese one.

Please, choose a time period and a continent. If it's a fantasy, blend the two cultures better, please.

(remember, a manga doesn't have to have Japanese characters. It seems every noob only has Japanese characters in their manga...)