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PostPosted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 12:54 pm


What could I post?

Actually, y'know what, I could post the prologue for the novel. I DO like the prologue... >_>
PostPosted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 1:00 pm


'Kay, so I liked this so much more when I wrote it last summer. Ah well. It's about time I posted something... >_>




Introduction


The young woman paced back and forth, slamming her spindly limbs against each of the walls of the tower room in turn. Angrily, and something like a purple blur of Magic in the gloom, she stomped her feet on the floor and circled the rocking chair in the centre of the room.

Suicide,” she snarled savagely, and thrust her fist against the icy stone. The words meant little to her now; they were just sounds. Only sounds. Mere fragments escaped her lips, broken and ragged, but the sound was somehow comforting; she was alive, at least. The storm outside was reaching its zenith, and rain drops were falling in great splatters on each of the three windowsills from the open windows.

“Wicked, wicked child!” She flung herself into the rocking chair, and then howled something unintelligible before jumping up again. She hopped on the balls of her feet, as though hot flames were licking at her heels, and continued in her self destructive arc about the room. “Accepting the risk, accepting the risk,” she muttered with a foul, bitter grin. “What use!”

There was a knock at the door, and then entered a man with a thin, gaunt face. He took one look at the woman alone in her torment before deciding if she was fit to hear his news.

“Somebody at the door. Says she wants you. Says you know her. Blonde, sort of yay high?” He gestured to just below his collar bone, clearly wanting to deliver his message swiftly.

The woman muttered something more before addressing him. “Only with permission,” she said with a sympathetic nod, “I’ve been waiting. Bring her to me.” Another growl.

The man nodded, and before the woman had the chance to throw the earthenware pot that she had grasped in her nimble, pointed fingers, the man had vanished and closed the door behind him.

She was once more left in silence, her only comfort the raging storm outside the windows and the gentle rocking of the chair pushed back and forth by an invisible wind. She began her circle of the tower once more.

“Fanatical will?” she mumbled as she flung herself from one side of the room to the other, from window to window. Glassy eyes gazed out into the darkness, all of Exos spread before her like a map. Eula, the desert country flooded beneath her, and far, far away on the distant horizon she imagined that she could make out the two spiked spires that reached to assault the heavens. “No hope.”

With one more circuit of the room, hopping and skipping like a madwoman, she finally came to rest in the rocking chair, spindly purple limbs drawn close to her body as the chair drifted in the breeze. Minimise the pain. Heal the hurt. Stop the revenge. Here she would wait, calmly, until it was time.

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 1:29 pm


YAY INTRODUCTION biggrin

Im tempted to mention that "Wicked" is mentioned twice in one sentence, but that may have just been a coincidence ninja hehe.
PostPosted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 1:37 pm


wahmbulance

It's perfectly intentional.
And no, it actually doesn't have ANY relevance to Wicked. dramallama Would you believe that? XDD

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 1:48 pm


Psychotic Maniacal Sanity

And no, it actually doesn't have ANY relevance to Wicked. dramallama Would you believe that? XDD


Of course I would. Really.
*laughs till her sides ache*
PostPosted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 2:05 pm


emo talk2hand

I give up.

dramallama

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 2:13 pm


emo talk2hand

Emo: i can haz raep nao?
T2H: Hell no!
Emo: *cries* *will probably run and hide in a closet*
T2H: Dude be tripping. I don't get my rape on with just anyone, you know. Damn.


... I don't even know what the hell I'm posting anymore.
PostPosted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 2:16 pm


xd

I have no idea what's going on, but for one tiny little moment in time I didn't feel guilty about lack of studying. I love you. heart

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 2:23 pm


Keep it in your pants. talk2hand
PostPosted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 2:31 pm


rofl

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 6:31 am


She's in my blood, and like a fire inside me...


*peeks in*...Hello?

Consumes the air then leaves me blindly...
PostPosted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 9:48 am


Hello!

*popular*
XD

How's it going? :3

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 11:42 am


Super duper. I'm going to be reading this (after the first one) in between writing during my free time. biggrin
PostPosted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 1:11 pm


Awesomesauce. <3

I look forward to finishing this one, now. I'm so close! I think I might be able to do it in a week if I can get the time. : D

Unfortunately Mum's not home this week, so I'll have to look after my sister, and do the housework, because my step dad is... not useless, just less inclined to do it than I am. X3

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 16, 2009 4:33 pm


Mmkay, so I finished this novel a lot earlier than I planned. >_o

I'm going to make a new thread for the third novel. we can either let this thread die, or I can get it deleted. =O What do you guys think?
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