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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 12:49 pm
This area is for poems about lies, lying, distrust, cheating.
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 12:51 pm
Lying Sonnet
"Lying" by Mike (me) 3/5/08
Why did you lie? What did I ever do to you? No everything won't be alright. My once vibrant red heart is blue. Feel my heart. Do you feel the pain? Its full of tart. and lots of cain. I saw what you did. Still I tried to be blind. After words you walked with a shut lid. That is why I cried. For I found that you cheated and left my heart defeated.
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 12:53 pm
The white lie, in a dark world. By me (Mike 8/17/0 cool
You begin to see the sore sight You prepare to not cause a fight They are not in the current dwealing For you have told them something that leaves you swealing.
You fib... They no know nothing of their sin Yet you wish to hide their pride In order to save your hide.
Why do you let them walk blind? Why did you just walk by? You knew that they were in mistake Yet you acted fake?
They walk dark into the night Awaking with such a fright To find that you are not a friend in need But a stabber caught in a bad deed.
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Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 2:11 pm
lying sonnet
lies are very destructive especially to a relationship
I like 5/5
a whilte lie in a dark world
I don't know if I undestood it all that well was I supposed to take it personal or what
4/4
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Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 2:45 pm
GUILTY PARTNERS by UC Poika
Your pain is clear Insides hanging out Moved by emotion Eyes screaming it Your clammy hands Sweater borne Blood in your pockets Red eyes mixed with water The peace of your soul Stolen with her stares Sitting on the table Knife under white knuckles Murder ponders A cheater self A cheating spouse A dead or dying family But Sadness triumphs As she embraces you.
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Posted: Sun Jun 07, 2009 5:47 am
UC Poika lying sonnet lies are very destructive especially to a relationship I like 5/5 a whilte lie in a dark world I don't know if I undestood it all that well was I supposed to take it personal or what 4/4 The second one I created to have a double meaning.... some like the first meaning of a betrayed friend..others like the meaning of a Black man gone for revenge...which one it is..I will never tell whee
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Posted: Sun Jun 07, 2009 6:21 pm
"The second one I created to have a double meaning.... some like the first meaning of a betrayed friend..others like the meaning of a Black man gone for revenge...which one it is..I will never tell "
I see. Thank you Cross Fire.
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Posted: Sun Jun 07, 2009 9:05 pm
UC Poika "The second one I created to have a double meaning.... some like the first meaning of a betrayed friend..others like the meaning of a Black man gone for revenge...which one it is..I will never tell " I see. Thank you Cross Fire. Your welcome...some times I like to switch my writing style up and either go for a different form or a double meaning. You should always try to expand your horizons of both writing and all aspects of life.
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