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Miyaz

PostPosted: Fri Dec 09, 2005 10:47 pm


.~DarkPoisonKisses~.
Miyaz
and_solo_said
Miyaz
and_solo_said

A question is a poetic device.

Just because i used a question in one of my poems, and others have too, does not mean that they are poetic devices.
Questions alone cannot be forged into a poem unless you have an unlimited supply of skill.

I didn't say that because they were used means that they are poetic devices, but they are. Besides, she doesn't just use questions.

Either way, i do not like this poem.
it does not matter weather u like the poem or not allt hat matter is me myself as the ritter cares and loves it.

If you cannot spell nor correctly use grammer, i do not think that you are suitable for this guild.
Please be cautious when posting.
Literacy matters.
PostPosted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 12:56 am


Miyaz
.~DarkPoisonKisses~.
Miyaz
and_solo_said
Miyaz
and_solo_said

A question is a poetic device.

Just because i used a question in one of my poems, and others have too, does not mean that they are poetic devices.
Questions alone cannot be forged into a poem unless you have an unlimited supply of skill.

I didn't say that because they were used means that they are poetic devices, but they are. Besides, she doesn't just use questions.

Either way, i do not like this poem.
it does not matter weather u like the poem or not allt hat matter is me myself as the ritter cares and loves it.

If you cannot spell nor correctly use grammer, i do not think that you are suitable for this guild.
Please be cautious when posting.
Literacy matters.
oh i apologize oh so greatly. im jsut telling you to show some respect and im trying to cut the conflict b telling you guys that everyone has thier own opinions and thier own likes adn dislikes in art. Poems aren't ment to really please others thier ment to please the writter and express the writters emotion.

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Miyaz

PostPosted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 7:53 pm


.~DarkPoisonKisses~.
Miyaz
.~DarkPoisonKisses~.
Miyaz
and_solo_said

I didn't say that because they were used means that they are poetic devices, but they are. Besides, she doesn't just use questions.

Either way, i do not like this poem.
it does not matter weather u like the poem or not allt hat matter is me myself as the ritter cares and loves it.

If you cannot spell nor correctly use grammer, i do not think that you are suitable for this guild.
Please be cautious when posting.
Literacy matters.
oh i apologize oh so greatly. im jsut telling you to show some respect and im trying to cut the conflict b telling you guys that everyone has thier own opinions and thier own likes adn dislikes in art. Poems aren't ment to really please others thier ment to please the writter and express the writters emotion.

Grammer and spelling again.
Yes, everyone has their own contextual opinions on art.
And i'm just saying that i dislike this poem.
There is no conflict unless you envision it.
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