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 Posted: Tue Nov 25, 2008 12:20 pm
The story involves a character named Theodore ( his original name is Theodore Thomas, but it was changed to Edwards after he was adopted), who came from the St. Jaremiah orphanage, which in he had problems with other children, along with the fact that they tortured children there... After his experience, he left the orphanage. However after a while he seemed to run into a dog. However this was no dog, it was an unusual demon like beast with a pitch black body and red eyes... It jumped at him, and actually went INSIDE of him through his eye... Now dripping an unusual black blood he passes out and wakes up in another persons house. He is soon adopted and later finds out his only friend at the orhanage, Jane, has been killed at his orphanage, which has now been shut down due to the findings of what they did there... Now Theo has only one goal, find the people responsible for creating that orphanage, and getting revenge for Jane.
I actually have alot of story and its reaching its end.
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Posted: Tue Nov 25, 2008 2:07 pm
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Teh Crazy Shinigami Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Nov 26, 2008 8:50 am
i heard yer like on chapter 20 0_0
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Posted: Wed Nov 26, 2008 2:15 pm
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Teh Crazy Shinigami Vice Captain
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