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 Posted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 12:20 pm
Salem has been achieved -- Halloween RP Event I do not reflect upon the quality of my life.
Scenes of my past do not flash before me.
There is no time.
Total consciousness focuses anxiously on the present.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx"The Executioner" by Linda Contento Schmidt
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Posted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 12:39 pm
The Ashe Name: Salem
Nicknames: Sale, Sally [lol]
Gender: Male
Court: Unseelie
Wind: East
Color: Indigo
Personality: His wind has a great effect on his personality; his temperment is quite definitely silent and unknown, as it's often difficult to gage just how he's feeling, sometimes even giving the exact opposite signals of his mood. If you're close to him, his pessimism is very obvious but he does try hard not to let it spread to you, caring very much about how you think of him. His eagerness to make friends and be accepted is belied by how he goes about it; more often then not he doesn't actually try and actively meet people or make connections but prefers to sit and wait for it to happen, the fear of rejection far too great. Low self esteem is abundant in this Ashe and you'll do little to reassure him, even his guardian fails at this on a constant basis. The Court he resides doesn't effect him to as nearly a high degree, though he is naturally wary of humans and is far less eager to open himself to them, making things a bit awkward with his guardian.
Egg: Ashy grey with a pendulum as the emblem on the front. Blood spatters should also be stained onto the shell, there don't have to be many and they don't have to be large. The wings should be the color of blood, usual Unseelie type wings otherwise. The cloud is a deep and terrible grey, the type that covers the sky amidst a hurricane.
Appearance: 
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X Purple--Platypus X Crew
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Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 12:31 pm
ex o ex Snoof Questions Speech
Can they talk as soon as they hatch from their eggs? Do they go through any quick mental progression seeing as they're never at an infant/newborn stage?
Courts
Is everything black and white between Seelie or Unseelie? What are the limitations in terms of the two? What is "bad" to one side and "good" to the other?
Fae
The current Fae, are they a mix of new Fae and the Fae from before, or are the "new" the humans and the "reborn" the Ashe, so those in the middle the Fae?
World
In the story it says it doesn't take place in Gaia. Where does it take place?
The time period is modern, correct? What sort of limitations can I have for my human guardian?
Courts - Well, most Seelies are either indifferent to humans or actively go out there trying to help humans. Whether this is going under glamour and helping old ladies cross the street, or helping plants grow really depends upon the nature of each faerie...
On the other hand I think nearly all Unseelies have a slight distaste for humans. Some probably absolutely detest them, and would harm them, whilst otbhers might have pet hates that put them off humans. (Araran is one of the latter, he tries to give humans a chance but is irritated at their races as a whole because of how they treat nature and the planet.)
Fae - Not quite sure what you mean, but if my understanding of wwhat your trying to ask is correct then... The Ashe are new faeries made from the ashes of old faeries. It's like the old faeries are being recycled - the Ashe retains a similarity in appearance, some memories and possibly personality quirks. They aren't exactly the same as regular fae, as I think they can bare children easier - but don't hold me to that, I'm not certain.
World - I just assumed it's Earth but with added magic... XD
actual comments on your concept will come after dinner.. lol ]
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Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 2:20 pm
[ Personality - I like his stand-offish attitude, but in my opinion being an attention seeker and being silent don't mix too well. Perhaps devlop how he wants to make friends, but tries to do so in the wrong way? If he wants attention then he wouldn't be as quiet? Perhaps make it so that he doesn't approach people, for fear of rejection?, but then when he gets approached he is a little clingy? And the nastiness is his way of trying to keep attention on him? (just throwing ideas at you, you don't need to change anything if you don't want to... it's just my opinion. (: )
Appearance - I love his skeletal hands. They're so creepy and I can imgine them freaking a lot of the other Ashe out. Perhaps if the other Ashe's repulsion upsets him one of his accessories could be fingerless gloves or something to try and hide his hands? As for pants... Well... Perhaps some ripped up black ones? >.> I epic fail at deas for clothes, D: sorry.
The past - Go into more detail about who he had to kill, like what crimes they commited, and go into how he died. Was it a nasty accident, did the family of one of the people he executed get him? Try and put some more depth into his past, it's a unique idea and I personally look forward to seeing what more you can come up with. 8D ]
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X Purple--Platypus X Crew
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Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 4:11 pm
Personality - It sounds like he can be a bit shy to some extent... or is he afraid of not being accepted? Why exactly does he try to find attention this way? You can try answering these sorts of questions to kinda get a better feel of who he is and whatnot. o-o
Appearance - Yeah, the skele hands sound awesome. XD If you don't want to go for gloves, maybe give him REALLY long sleeves.. though that's kinda something a little more feminine in a way I think... so that would depend on how he is in terms of masculinity/femininity. One thing you can give him that would kinda maybe reflect his personality and/or past is a hood of sorts. I don't mean an executioner hood, but just a normal black/dark colored one that can either be over his head or down. No clue on pants though... o.o;
The past - Aside from Platy's questions, also see how he did the job. Was it with magic, a weapon, some poison, ect? The way he did it could affect how he is somewhat, or even how he died. Also mention how he felt about his job; if he enjoyed taking their lives or regretted it and so on. Maybe also put in how the others felt about him?
-I went with Salem by the way. XD It has a darker undertone to it than Mercury... who makes me think of Hermes.. who did help guide people to the underworld at times, but over all isn't really that dark of a god. XD
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Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 5:42 pm
Woah, brutal death. O_O Nothing's quite standing out to me (as for what to improve and whatnot) at the moment. So... nice job!
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