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Two drawings at once....please check?

[.Potemkin.]

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Posted: Tue Aug 12, 2008 10:43 pm

I don't know why I keep posting when I get no replies :s

But I'll post these anyways...

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Just how much do they suck?

My friend says that the girl lacks butt....she's just a foreigner <.<

Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2008 11:54 am

I think their pretty good, but that's coming from someone who isn't very good.

Le Marquis de Noir

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Rieuna

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Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 11:13 am

I think your art style is pretty and cute. The second picture is fine, I like the texture. The first picture is beautiful, but with one problem.

The girl in the first picture's neck should be a little more vertical than diagonal, because she isn't bending back. Remember the neck is connected to the spine~! And maybe her jaw is too low. Well, jaws usually slant up more slightly.

If what I say did not make sense I can make a small red line.

Anyways, I really like your art *u*
It's very clean and you utilize pen pressure well.

Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 5:11 am

besides what has been mentioned by the post above

the lighting for her face doesn't seem right
or maybe the hair
according from where the sun is
i say forget about blending in those shadow at first and try to do a crisp definition of where the highlights and shadows are like in the bangs

just something seems wrong about it

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Kiri Hayabusa

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Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 9:24 pm

the secret for getting comments is to suck just a little but not too much...

anyways.... i really love the second one. since every thing was pretty much covered already.. I'll just give complaints. the girls really cute to. the sunsets done nicely to.

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