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 Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 7:29 pm
 The head is purposely tilted, so keep that in mind. And I'm a beginner, so I need all the help I can get... sweatdrop  Okay, I used the advice you guys gave me. Now, I need advice on what I should do. Ink it? Color it?
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Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 8:10 pm
Her legs are short and her feet are too small. You might want to use reference to see how long the legs are below her knees because that's one of the big problems here.
Also, her chest is uneven. Overall, it's a pretty nice picture.
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Posted: Mon May 26, 2008 4:40 pm
Thanks, I was wondering about the legs.
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Posted: Mon May 26, 2008 4:48 pm
Top half of the body's perfect. You got everything right there. 3nodding You even got the 8 heads thing (every body can fit 8 heads in it). But you got my favorite part of the female anatomy wrong, the legs. scream The legs are way too short.... The legs should take up at least 3 heads. So keep that in mind... Or what you could do is make the upper half smaller, & cheat in photoshop or whatever... that might work...
Otherwise, Great Job! Keep up the good work! ninja
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Posted: Mon May 26, 2008 4:53 pm
Ok! Thanks, that will be useful. Oh, and thanks for being so specific, it helps. biggrin
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Posted: Tue May 27, 2008 4:30 pm
The top half is great! It's very nice, actually. What bothers me is that you can't see her hands. HOWEVER. Her legs are far, far too short. Normally, I try to make the the legs longer rather than shorter, putting them at either 3 heads or making them as long as the top half of the body (including the head)
And if she goes off the page, she goes off the page. Never try and squeeze a person onto a page. Simply let them go off the page. Otherwise the preportions get messed up.
Hope that helps. biggrin
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Posted: Wed May 28, 2008 9:28 am
the legs are short. also try to add curver to legs and hips.
her boobs are lopsided but if you raised her rt our lt sholder then it would look like she was leaning her body along with the head.
I like the head tilt
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Posted: Wed May 28, 2008 3:25 pm
Thanks guys!! I improved it, so what do you think I should do now?
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Posted: Wed May 28, 2008 7:18 pm
The legs are still too short. Legs = Start at the crotch.
Feet =/= part of the leg. The legs are the thigh and calf, and the feet are attached. Make the thigh and calf 3 heads long.
Did you use guidelines before starting? If you didn't, I suggest you do. They look messy and are hard to get used to in the beginning, but they end up helping loads if you just take your time.
I also just noticed her left hand (my left, actually) is far too small. Hands are as big as the face, fingers included.
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Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 11:12 pm
The shape the face can be improved. I think you should probably add eyelashes, so that it'll turn out cute! whee
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