I'm not really fond of the painting. The background detail is great, but the facial and upper torso anatomy is too detracting and it just doesn't fit in with the delicacy. Instead, you should've just used colour to contrast from the background instead of thickblocky lines, and flat bold colours. There's a lot of problem spaces as well ; the horns do not curve and suddenly change direction, and it doesn't make sense; as well as under the nose where it looks like she has protruding skin instead of an indent.
As for your inked stuff, the poses are far too, unbalanced. It looks like their legs are swaying or unnaturally curved.
Both their faces are extremely similar as well, and I don't think those extra spaces between her legs and such help.
The blue drawing is okay, but looks far too much like you (unless that was what you were going for).
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