i3mo.
You have some nice items to work with,
but I can see some problems right off.
If you want to have an amazing avatar,
a few things need to be remembered, to
use MORE THAN ONE color, and to balance
them. Right now, you have mostly black. And
you have one purple item, and grey hair. I like
that the hair matches your eyes, that would work
if you were to use black and grey, but there's not
really any color balance. Good thing is that it's not
really top or bottom heavy, it's about even going
from top to bottom. I would say that you need to
add a few colors to it, something that'll make it pop
to go with the black, and maybe gold accessories?
It's better than ALOT that I've seen, and compared
to most, you've got a great start.
[ If you want some examples for color balance,
I have some recent Tektek's in my journal. :] ]
I'll say
4/10
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