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Hmm.
I'm thinking her jawline needs to be lower and more bonier.
Also, I think the ear could stand ot be lower.

I have no clue what to do with the head and neck sextion.
I want her to be baldies in the back but right now it don't look baldies, just looks like I forgot to add hair.

ALSO;
does anyone have any sweet tips on getting nice clean linearts in photoshopps?



This is unfinished scream
There will be a body at some point.

UPDATOOOoooooOO
Yes, I am saving the hands for last mad



Not sure how im going to put folds on that b***h's dress thing.
Was thinking in white...or just leaving it plain. Pah ha ha ha ha ha har.

Redline's are aprreciated
especially on the noneexistand hands gonk

I am in the process of resolving some of the wibbliness of the shirt.

well i kinda chopped your image as well (I had it open already - forgiveness please)



I'd have pointed the neck a bit more vertically - even if she is craning it seems a bit much in the original.

I was also kind of thrown off by the apparent dent in the center of the head? is that meant to be a division in the hair? It kind of looks odd to me.

Its hard to picture how this should look exactly since its such an exaggerated posture, but her collar bone looks very odd to me.

Also there is a vanishing finger...? try as hard as I can and I can't do that with my hand.

I like the crookedness of her, she looks pretty evil.